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hirie

@hirie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: cjs369
awww... just saw the pics hiri... just super super like👍🏼

u have really taken the pains to do them yaa...

our AgNi in SR ... just too good... both look gorgeous...loved it

thanks charu, i will try to make better pictures and post them :)

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akshaaya

@akshaaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Awesome Update...😊
Dimple & Navi as AgNi's midnight night talk after SR is very much romantic and so touching...❤️
I have seen Nimrit dressing up Agam with his kurta ...but now you have made Agam dressing up Nimrit with his kurta... ☺️
AgNi (Dimple & Navi) caring for each other is so visible in their every actions...😳
Your enticing script of each updated part is excellent...👏👏
Your Tej - Amrit parallel track is also perfect...👍🏼
Atleast in your script, Amrit have thought once how she is the most hated person in the palace...😆
Accident have made Amrit to rest in ICU with Tej being her saviour...I adore Tej very much for not disturbing Our adorable moments of AgNi ( Agam & Dimple) and his efforts to save Amrit...
Please continue your Superb story of Our AgNi (Dimple & Navi ) as main track and Amrit redemption by Tej as parallel track (briefly if ideas cook in your mind)...😊
Eagerly awaiting for your next update...

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725380

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: hiri_piri

finished now, pls read and let me know if its missing anything! thanks

its perfect HIRI.👍🏼.

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hirie

@hirie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: akshaaya
Awesome Update...😊
Dimple & Navi as AgNi's midnight night talk after SR is very much romantic and so touching...❤️
I have seen Nimrit dressing up Agam with his kurta ...but now you have made Agam dressing up Nimrit with his kurta... ☺️
AgNi (Dimple & Navi) caring for each other is so visible in their every actions...😳
Your enticing script of each updated part is excellent...👏👏
Your Tej - Amrit parallel track is also perfect...👍🏼
Atleast in your script, Amrit have thought once how she is the most hated person in the palace...😆
Accident have made Amrit to rest in ICU with Tej being her saviour...I adore Tej very much for not disturbing Our adorable moments of AgNi ( Agam & Dimple) and his efforts to save Amrit...
Please continue your Superb story of Our AgNi (Dimple & Navi ) as main track and Amrit redemption by Tej as parallel track (briefly if ideas cook in your mind)...😊
Eagerly awaiting for your next update...

sure thing! thanks, means a lot for my work being appreciated :) and will continue of course, gotta cook some ideas in my head first :)

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hirie

@hirie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Anurna
its perfect HIRI.👍🏼.

thanks archu, just didn't feel like moving on without completing it! will be more careful next time, not to delete any posts. or better still, will make copies and save so that i can do a copy paste job instead of having to write it all over again :)

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725380

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: hiri_piri

thanks archu, just didn't feel like moving on without completing it! will be more careful next time, not to delete any posts. or better still, will make copies and save so that i can do a copy paste job instead of having to write it all over again :)

i aprreciate ur efforts... ye sabase achha tarika hai jo tumne kaha...carefull next time..

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shanaya28

@shanaya28

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Read part 5..6..as usual so catchy ..very well written..👏

The after consumation scene... you have given us another so sweet and romantic moment of agni..the way he made nimrit wear his kurta and picked her up in his arms with their little nok..jhok ..just beautiful is the word..simple sweet scene that captures the heart..

A love that is growing much much more for both and nimrit as usual all ears for her loving husband..a moment of reminisces for agam as he felt its time to share them with nimrit ..agni every moment in the story can visualise it as you so well describe them...

Enjoy reading this part and of course good addition of a sub plot..Tej.amrit and seems a story starts for them..the goodness of tej who may change amrit..

Good writing and so interesting to read..do keep it up the great job..👍🏼

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richa.amonkar

@richa.amonkar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

perfect ( the way madhuri dixit sys in jhalak diklaja...) 😛 👏

Edited by richa.amonkar - 13 years ago

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hirie

@hirie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: saveeta24
Read part 5..6..as usual so catchy ..very well written..👏

The after consumation scene... you have given us another so sweet and romantic moment of agni..the way he made nimrit wear his kurta and picked her up in his arms with their little nok..jhok ..just beautiful is the word..simple sweet scene that captures the heart..

A love that is growing much much more for both and nimrit as usual all ears for her loving husband..a moment of reminisces for agam as he felt its time to share them with nimrit ..agni every moment in the story can visualise it as you so well describe them...

Enjoy reading this part and of course good addition of a sub plot..Tej.amrit and seems a story starts for them..the goodness of tej who may change amrit..

Good writing and so interesting to read..do keep it up the great job..👍🏼

thanks a lot saveeta, when i visualize it all myself, i feel less sad re loss of our beloved agni (navdim!)