AkYa OS: Duties(ch2-pg1) *complete*

Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
A lady in her mid-50's was sitting in her room,gliding her hands through the photo of the album.Sometimes,she smiled seeing the photos,while,sometimes,she cried a bit. These were some old memories that will never erase.

''30 saal hogaye humari shaadi.. Inn 30 saalo ke darmiyaan humne bohut kuch khoya aur bohut kuch paaya bhi.Jo bhi mushkil aayi,hum dono milke usse dattke saamna kiya.Inke darmiyaan aayi humari zindagi mein sabse bari khushi... Maa banne ki... Maa... Ek aisa shabd jo purey kayanat ko sabse zyada pasand hai aur sabse sundar aur sukoon dene wali shabd hai... Kehte hai ki,jab bhi ek aurat Maa banti hai,usse duniya ki har sukh mil jata hai aur woh sahi maayne mein aurat bann jati hai... Sach kahawat hai yeh.. Jis din maine aur Aakash ne usse goud mein liya,aisa laga ki humari duniya puri hogayi hai... Dekhte dekhte humari bacchi bari hogayi.. Aakash usse pyaar se Babu kehke pukarte thhe.. Aaj dekho toh,kitni bari hogayi hai ki uski shaadi hone wali hai ussike pasand ke larke se... Mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai Aakash ke nakhre,jab usne uss larke ke baare mein aur uski family ke baare mein kitna sara check karwaya,jaise family background aur unki chaal chalan,etc etc... Humdono ki ek lauti beti hai,kya karte woh.. Kuch zyada hi pyaar karte hai apne beti se. Kabhi kabhi toh mujhe jalan hone lagti hai baap-beti ke issi pyaar se par bohut accha bhi lagta hai... Kabhi kabhi sochti hu ki shaadi jaisi aisi reet kisne banayi hai jisse ek maa-baap ko apni beti se juda kiya jaata hai... Abhi se mera aisa haal hai,toh,socho,Aakash ka kya haal hoga... Aaj humari beti ki shaadi hai dopaher ko.Abhi usse chura pehnaye jayenge aur baadme uski friends usse kalirey bhi pehnayenge... Kuch hi ghanto mein Aakash aur main uska kanyadaan karenge aur uske baad,woh vida hoke chali jayegi apne sasural... Abhi se yeh sochke mann baitha jaraha hai... (someone calls her from behind) main abhi jaati hu,bula rahe hai mujhe.. Baad mein aaungi..'' she wrote it in her diary and went downstairs.

Precap: Aakash's POV about his life,Ananya and their daughter.
Edited by ...anika... - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

14

Views

2.8k

Users

10

Likes

17

Frequent Posters

Nikhad003 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
THIS IS SOMETHING LIKE FAIRY TALEEE...JUST LIKE FAIRY TALEEE...PLS CONTINUE SOON...i am lost in it totally...can not describe in words!
Renessa thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
wow ... it's beautiful ...continue soon dear :)
NikkiReed thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Beautiful.. Wows... Continue soon... And yeah pm me when u update...
Princessnidhii thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
thats beuatiful dear
so sweeet
loved it
continue soon
cant wait to know what aakash wil say😊
Anzum505 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Babu.. ab to mujhe rona aa raha hai... meri shadi k baad mum kya karengi.. :'(
update soon...
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Ch2.

''Jaise bin baati ka diya adhuri hai,waise hi Ananya ke bina main adhura hu.. Ananya meri life ka wohi baati hai jisse meri jeevan ka diya jal rahi hai... Humare parivaar ki sabse ahem hissa,humare parivaar ki jaan hai Ananya,sabse zyada,meri jaan hai woh... Main bohut khushnaseeb insaan hu kyunki meri jeevan mein Ananya hai.. Ek adarsh beti,bahu,patni aur abhi,ek adarsh maa... Sabki chahiti hai meri Ananya... Meri jaan hai Ananya... Humara pyaar utna asaan nahi thha jaise aam lovers ke hote hai... Jaise jaise waqt guzarta gaya,hum dost bane aur dost se bane do pyaar karne wale aur do pyaar karne walo se bane humsafar... Main jitna Ananya se pyaar karta hu,usse kahi zyada Ananya mujhse pyaar karti hai... Shaadi ke kuch saalo baad humari zindagi ki sabse khushi dene wali khabar mili ke Ananya mere bacche ki Maa banne wali hai... Usdin,Ananya bohut khush thhi aur main bhi... Main uswaqt thora over-protective ban gaya thha jisse Ananya ko chirr hoti thi...Main bhi kya karta... Pyaar mein hara ek insaan,joh apni biwi se itna zyada pyaar karta hai ki uske upar agar koi ek kharoch bhi aaye toh uss insaan ko zameen mein gardu... 9 mahine kaise beet gaye pata nahi chala aur 9 mahine ke beech humari pyaari beti aayi humari goud mein..Aakhein bilkul meri jaisi aur naak,gaal bilkul Ananya jaisi... Humari beti ke aane ke baad,humari zindagi ekdum si badal gayi,she became our lucky charm. Dekhte dekhte humari beti bari hogayi..She was the exact combination of both of us... She was balanced,never mixed her professional life with her personal life...Ideal daughter like Ananya and now,soon to-be ideal daughter-in-law... I know,ki,main bohut happy banke reh raha hu uske saamne,kyunki,she is my strength.. Uske saamne main ro nahi sakta... Sirf main hi samaj sakta hu yeh dard kyunki main uska pita hu aur aakhir main mujhe hi uska kanyadaan karna parega...(someone calls him)bulava aagaya meri beti ka...baad mein baat karta hu...''

Ashima Aakash Saluja,only daughter of Aakash Saluja and Ananya Aakash Saluja,was getting married today with the love of her life,Rudraksh...

Ananya and Aakash look on,as some married woman slid the wedding churas on both her hand and her friends tie the kalireys on both her hands.Tears brimmed on Aakash's eyes,as after 2 hours,he would be doing the kanyadaan of his daughter.

After 2 hours:

Ashima and Rudraksh sat on the dais for other rituals,The Jaimala rasam was done before they sat.Panditji called Aakash and Ananya for the Kanyadaan ritual.Aakash and Ananya,with a heavy heart,came towards the couple and completed the ritual,by taking Ashima's right hand and keeping it on Rudraksh's right hand,taking a promise from him to keep her daughter happy and to always love her.

Gatbandhan was done by Amaya,Shefu's daughter.The pheres started.The groom and bride were being showered with flower petals.. Ananya and Aakash reminisced the moments of their wedding,which was conducted in both ways,i.e,Aakash,being a Punjabi,in the Punjabi way and Ananya,being a Rajput,in the Rajputi way...

Aakash held Ananya's hand tightly.She looked at Aakash with a lovely smile.. She kept her head on his shoulder,while,Aakash pulled her gently,with his hands on her waist...

''Aakash,humne aaj humari sabse bari duty puri karli hai... Humari beti ka kanyadaan... Kanhaji aur Babaji se prarthna karti hu ke usse duniya ki saari khushiyaan mile...'' Ananya said,with a smile.

''Haan,Ananya... Tum sahi kehrahi ho... Humari Ashima ki kanyadaan kardi humne.. Bhagwan usse saari khushiyaan de aur apne sasural mein khush rahe...'' Aakash replied...

The marriage completed and the couple took blessings from their elders..Soon,the bidaai time came...Ashima took her parents in a bear hug and cried a lot. Ananya and Aakash blessed her a lot with lots of happiness and love... Soon,Ashima,or Ashu,as Ananya and Aakash address her,went to her new home with Rudraksh..

Thus,Ananya and Aakash fulfilled their duties,of becoming ideal parents for their daughter,Ashu...

*the end*
Princessnidhii thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
ohhh dats shooo beautiful dear
i was completely lost in it
really tooo beautifully
so wonderfully written
wow
good job 😊
super like 😊
-AnnieQueen- thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
It was awesome apu. akya's mesmerising love and their duty towards their child.really loved it.Akya's eternal love is wonderful👏👍🏼😳
Anzum505 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
owww...
it's sooo nice babu... :)

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".