AkYa Drabble: 'The Green-Eyed Monster'

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The Green-Eyed Monster


(An AkYa Drabble)


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He grit his teeth as he observed the couple sneakily from the corner of his eyes.




The two of them, standing at one of the tables of a cozy cafe in the airport.





Chatting and smiling over piping hot cups of coffee.




It seemed as if they were lost in their own world, completely oblivious to the hustle and bustle that typified the airport.




His focus, as usual, drifted to her.




She was listening in rapt attention to whatever nonsense that man was spewing.




In spite of him, his eyes softened involuntarily, as they always did, when she was within his sights.




A mere glance towards her could take his breath away.




He basked in the glow of happiness as he took respite in the fact that she was standing within a mere thirty feet of him.




He tore his glance away from her slender, graceful form, to that of her companion's.




He could not even bring himself to take that man's name.




What a silly surname...Mafatlal. Hmph.




Sounded more like a mithaiwala than the owner of a private airliner.




Now...Saluja. That sounds dignified, he thought to himself, with a perverse satisfaction.




For the life of him, he could not figure out what she saw in the fellow.




Grinning all the while like a stupid monkey, hanging all over her, flirting with her, and constantly demanding her attention.





Flirting. Hmmph.





He could probably teach that monkey a lesson or two about flirting, properly.





Only Akash Saluja could flirt like no tomorrow. And remain a gentleman while doing it.






He felt a surge in him as he remembered how she had blushed so prettily, when he had given her his "gentleman's perspective" about her hair.




His thoughts came to an abrupt end as he was startled by whatever he saw next.




That...pipsqueak was casually wrapping his arms around her in a friendly gesture.




He waited for her to swat the idiot's hands away.




But she just smiled and let him hold on to her for a full second, before unwillingly freeing herself from his arms, as if she had liked it!





He clenched his jaw more, if that were possible.





This gesture of hers had... hurt. It was agonizing.




She should just have whipped out a gun and shot him in mercy.





The ugly, green-eyed monster of jealousy that seemed to reside in him permanently nowadays, changed colour.





For now, there was red-hot fury coursing through his veins, painting the entire world red, filling him with the urge to do something violent and destructive with his hands.





He got a grip on himself with great effort, trying hard to retain his sanity.






All this while, he had not been able to fathom why this was happening to him. This sense of futility that pervaded everything when he saw her with another man.






But as the full weight of his epiphany sunk in, sense finally dawned on him.





His fate was linked inextricably to this woman.





And he had to do something about it before it was too late.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Author's Note



Okay, so I am on a roll😆 Here with another drabble to bore you, the very next day😛


The title says it all. So I am not going to elaborate⭐️


Please leave behind your comments, likes and criticism on the way. Thank you!


- Amri😃


P.S. No offense to anyone with the surname Mafatlal. Akash is being irrational because he is jealous. And that's why he is calling Rohit a monkey as well😉😆
Edited by -Amri- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful! Loved it and hope that happens in the show so Akash can realise his feelings
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^ That was quick! Thanks for commenting!


Yes, I hope something of this sort happens in the show as well.


P.S. Love your username:D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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^ Thank you for commenting:)
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" Mafatlal Mithaiwala "
wonderful 🤣
why don't u write SS or FF ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome drabble...waiting for having many more drabbles from ur side...or any OS SS or FF from ur end on lovely AkYa
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OH Hot Damn! Behna...you really are on a roll darling?! And I am loving it so much. Seriously. The use of animals in this update is very full filling😆 I mean considering the monkey first and then the green--eyes monster called jealousy. Muhhhaha! Indeed Akash is being Irrational. But then its justified to be jealous...considering he is falling for her.

The way he was scrutinizing both of them was very amazing in a way since he noticed every little detail. The way Akash was just criticizing every action of Rohit's was funny in a way to be honest. Gotta admit Mr.Mafatlal was flirting very happily with Ananya. And someone one was getting very J!
Wohhh! Apparently he is the only one allowed to flirt like there is no tomorrow and still be a gentleman. Wow! Talk about self appreciation 😆 But then again...he is J!
so yeah I totally get you dude!

Also the way he observed Ananya was...just..so intense. Like talk about staring at someone continuously 😉 noW LOOK who is being a gentleman. (the pun intended) 😆 And his restlessness over that friendly arm wrap that occurred. Ohoo! Now then the green eyes monster was bellowing loudly!
I could hear it! 😛

I liked this little drabble about Akash's jealousy and Rohits entry...I seriously can't wait for his entry in the real show...he is definitely going to make heads turn! 😉 And about the way Akash cricized Rohits last name was hilarious. plus comparing his own to it. Like seriously...you are so adorable but I gotta agree.. Saluja does sound very dignified! I love his name in general...it's so gentleman like but so you know unique!

Well keep writing Behna...keep writing. 😉 You can't stop...Because I own't let you stop! Hahah. i got your back! oh and yet again you have made my day darling! Love you shistterrr!

Keep writing...and a thousand hugs from me!
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one.. loved it... ❤️
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It was again a blockbuster!!.I was grinning while reading this.I wish something like this happens and Captain Akaksh Saluja is really green with jealousy which will probably provoke him to finally clear his head about Natasha and then finally he will probably become Ananya's Akash and know that she is the captain of his life and he the first officer!!

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