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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1:
1.
Ananya woke up from her sleep due to the alarm of the table clock..6 am she checked..At first she was confused where she was..Then she remembered she was in the hotel in Joypur..she shared the room with capt.Akash Saluja! She got up quickly & looked around her..No Akash was not there..Neither he left any massege or called..He went for natasha last night..Was she little disheartend? "Ofcourse i'm not" she told to herself "I dont care if he is with Natasha..He is just a co-pilot & senior"..she shook her head as if she was driving akash out of her mind..But still she remembered how he complimented her last night..She almost blushed again..."Oh..u gotta stop this ananya!" She told herself.. She went to get ready as she had a flight to catch
2.
Akash woke up in the couch of natasha's room..He wondered when he fell asleep..The first thing that came to his mind was Ananya.."Oh,no! I should've informed her!" But he was really worried about natasha.." I couldnt have left natasha in this condition! She is my best friend" he explained himself..Natasha was still asleep he checked.. He called ananya but her phone was switched off. He called the hotel and the receptionist informed she left the hotel to attend her flight..He sighed..He remembered what natasha said last night..He knew it himself there is something about her that always attracted him towards ananya..but he did not want to admit it..His life was so risky and uncertain that he did not want to bind her with his life.. But he just can not stop thinking about her these days..Her beautiful eyes,lovely smile and her hair...He took the rubber band from his pocket and could not help smiling.."She is just a co-pilot" he tried to lie to himself again but it seemed meaningless..she saw natasha got up..she was clutching her head due to head ache..when she saw akash she was feeling kind of guilty.
"Morning akash" she said vaguely
"Morning natasha..I think u should take a day off today..U'll be allright..& i gotta go" he said as he needed some air to clear his head
"I'm sorry akash" she said
"Its ok natasha but we need to talk..not today but soon we Do need to talk" he left the room
3.
Its been 3 days since that night..Today ananya and akash will fly together. They havent seen each other in these days. .Akash and Ananya met each other in the locker room.
"Hello first officer" he smiled
"Hello sir" she replied without looking at him
"Well first officer i got to see natasha..i'll see u in the cockpit" he said
"Ofcourse u got to see natasha!" Ananya thought angrily but just nodded..As akash left the room Ananya felt heart-broken.."He loves natasha..stay away from him" she told to herself and sighed
4.
"Natasha! We need to talk" akash said
"Yes akash?"
" See i've always considered you one of my best friends who knows everything about me..and u know i love u as a friend..but we cant be more than that..Im so sorry"
"Its because of her isnt it?" She said..Tears formed in her eyes
"Its not her..i've not thought of u like that"he said
"But u love her..dont you?"
"Yes..i do! And i'm not gonna lie anymore" he said to her as well as said to himself
"I guess i knew it" Natasha tried to smile..tears were running down her chick
"Im so sorry natz" he hugged to console her
5.After Akash left ananya recived a call from her home
"You need to listen to us ananya..Its high time u get married" her aunt said
"But aunt..."
"You gotta think about ur future..about your sister shefu..U need to settle down..and we have got a very good proposal for your marriage..Trust us please dear"
While talking ananya saw akash and natasha hugging..she felt like crying..She does not know what made her say this but she said
"Ok..aunt i'll do as you say" she wiped her tears

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was really nice..please continue..and I really want to see what happens next...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful start..plz continue soon n pm me too plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks guys !!! i've joined the forum just today..I love airlines and AkYa..thanks for reading and yor appreciation..means a lot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story
aakash finally accepted his feeling.😳...but anaya said yes to someone else
hurry up aakash...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...
Feeling bad for Ananya... 😭
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
Its really amazing...
Finally,Akash admitted his feelings,but,eh leh.
Eh ki syappa peh gaya...
Ananya kisi aur ko haan boldi hai...
Hurry up,Captain Saluja...
Do continue sooonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!! It was my first post in this forum ..I've not tried writting anything like this before..Thanks for reading and thanks for your kind comments..Here goes the 2nd & last part of the story :)
PART:2
1.
Ananya was standing infront of the aircraft..She still could not believe what she said. How could she marry someone else when she could not stop thinking about akash..There he was coming towards her looking all handsome, with that breathetaking smile..He greeted the air-hostess with smile who just dazzled.."How does he manage to do that!" she wondered with anger. Then she remembered how he hugged natasha.." He is not yours ananya..He belongs to someone else" she told herself.. She entered the cockpit without waiting for him
2.
Akash entered into the cockpit..He could not wait any longer to see his 'rule ki devi'.. He could not stop smiling
"Ready to fly first officer?" He asked.. Ananya just nodded.. She couldnt look at him.. But akash could not take his eyes away from her.."Damn it ananya! Why do u have to look so beautiful! " He remembered how beautiful she looks with her untied hair..He wished he could see her like that again.. Then he noticed the sadness in her eyes
"Are you okay ananya? " he asked..Again she nodded
"Why so silent? U r not ganna give any lecture from your rule book today? " he joked
"Trying to maintain silence in cockpit sir..you're the one who wanted it right?" She taunted.. She did not know the exact reason of her anger but she couldnt control it
"Oopsy mam is in a bad mood" he thought
3.
Ananya tried her best not to talk to akash for the whole time..Akash tried to meet her gaze several times but she avoided.. Akash coulnt understand the reason behind her anger.. When the plane landed ananya hurried to get away from akash..But it was too much for akash ..He quickly caught her hand and pinned her against the wall of the cockpit.. He leaned over her
" Why are u doing this to me ananya.. Why r u avoiding me"he asked intensely
"Let me go captain" she said arrogently
"What if i dont?" He said looking directly at her eyes
Ananya pushed him and turned to the door but akash caught her wrist
"Whats wrong with you.. Just tell me what i've done" he almost shouted
" You've not done anything but you really shouldnt be with me..Natasha will feel bad..I dont want to come between you two" she said
"What are you talking about ananya? Me and natasha..."
"You dont have to say anything captain.. Its ok.. I saw u together today.. & u dont owe me any explanation..i'm not important enough for that..i know..."
" You dont know ANYTHING ananya" there was anger in his voice.. Then an air hostess knocked and entered through the door.. Ananya left from there leaving a puzzled akash behind
4.
"Di atleast see the photo for once!" Shefu insisted.. But like everytime ananya said no.. After returning from the flight with akash she came to know her aunt fixed her engagement after 3 days.. She was too numb to react.. In these three days she wanted to call akash for thousands of times but could not manage the courage.. She just wanted to hear his beautiful voice.. Shefu insisted her to see the photo & call her 'fiance to be' but she never agreed.. She was thinking about akash all the time.. Today is her engagement.. Everyone is so happy except her..she wanted to run away from there..from all the celebration..but could not do it thinking about her family.. She owe a lot to her family.. Her sister and friends helped her to dress up.. Everyone was talking about how beautiful she looked and how handsome her fiance was.. But she neither looked at the mirror nor gonna look at the guy she decided
" Ananya its time" her aunt called
She came down with her sister
"Why she's not looking at you buddy?" Someone said
"May be she doesnt like my look" a voice replied
Ananya was shocked! It was the voice she was desparate to listen to.. It was Akash!! There he was smiling at her..looking handsome as always.. Before she could react she got engaged to akash.. Her Akash!!
5.
Everybody was busy celebrating and dancing.. Akash took ananya to a corner
"How ..."she began
"Sshhh.. Let me talk today" he said pressing his hand over her lips
"You remember the night we shared the room in the hotel? After that night i realised you are the one i love.. May be it was love at first sight..but i was too scared to admit.. As soon as i realised my feelings i talked to my family & they were more than happy to see me get married.. They talked to your family immediately.. Natasha & i are friends nothing more than that & i was telling her that when you saw me.. & finally u would know it all if u had let me speak that day" he chuckled
Akash came closer to ananya & whispered in her ear "miss Ananya Rawat i'll love u for rest of my life, every single day of it, every single moment of it.. I love u"
"I love u too akash" ananya managed to say..there were tears of joy in her eye
Then they hugged each other

Edited by doubletrouble77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow your first post and OS most commendable
Please write more..welcome to IF
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely short story. It was so cute 😊😳

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