FF: Thank You For Loving Me.. Pt2/Pg1

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Everyone, I have been writing FF's for some months now for Bandini and had some ideas for AJMBHK so thought i'd see what you all think..

Thank You For Loving Me..❤️

Part 1

Lalli sat on the terrace looking out at the beautiful starry night, she stared at the moon thinking about Shekhar... How much he loved her, their marriage and their children Shivalli and Rudraksh..

She looked carefully ahead of her, the small kothri that she had once spent days in and how Loha himself had asked her to come and be the one and only chutki dulhaan of the haveli.

Tears filled her, eyes as she remembered the turmoil and problems that she faced but how Shekhar always gave her his unbreakable faith and protection.. Her life was only complete with him and despite the problems and troubles they faced they won..

She heard chan chan and realised that it was Mahika - (Jamuni's daughter) and Shivalli again playing hide and seek.. She smiled to herself but she felt tears fall as she remembered Jamuni's last words and her lifeless face in her arms..

She walked over to the family portrait hung upon the wall and saw a mischievous Shekhar holding Mahika and Shivalli and her with Rudraksh, she smiled and she saw her picture perfect family but tears filled her eyes as she looked back on how this came to be.. Even if she had attained happiness she had lost so much...

This is the story of Lalli... The daughter of Nanku who became the daughter in Law of the powerful Loha Singh.. This is the story of her troubles and her will to win..

Hope you all enjoy it.. Will try and update regularly.. Do read and leave your valuable comments and suggestions.. Thanks..

Sanju..x

Edited by SanRajDeewani - 15 years ago

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Minu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Wow A shali FF :DD
Thanks a Ton sanraj will comment after reading

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Gursharan

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Posted: 15 years ago

This is veryyy nice, our first ever FF.

And I loved ur introduction, it looks soo peaceful with just laali and shekhar around, and their their kids. wow so they had twins??😉😆.

looking forward to ur update.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Glad you liked it!!

No ,Shali haven't had twins but the story has progressed by some years from the current track and most of the scenes will be in flashback..

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Part 2

Laali wipes her tears and opens her diary and is about to write the days events.. a gush of wind comes in a her pages get blown, resulting in her going back to page one..

She looks at the date on the first page and begins reading..

*Flashback*

Laali and Shekhar are arguing in the kothri over Shekhar going back to Siddeshwari..

Lalli: You have to go back chote thakur!
Shekhar: And I won't..
Lalli: If you love me you will..
Shekhar: Your the first woman in the world who is pushing her husband away to her sauten!
Lalli: I never see chutki dulhaan as my rival.. she is my sister.. she is naive and needs you..
Shekhar:But I need you..

Shekhar upset sits down and tells Lalli that she is his wife and he will feel bad living with another woman.. Lalli walks over and sits on the floor besides him.. He doesn't look at her.. She turns his face toward her but he shrugs her off..

Lalli: Why do you love me? What is in me that Siddeshwari doesn't? She is beautiful, caring and sweet..

Shekhar doesn't respond..

Lalli: Tell me chote thakur what is in me that makes you love me.. Why can't you love chutki dulhaan?
Shekhar: Because she's not you..

Both stay silent and don't say anything, the argument is the same and without eating both go to sleep..
Lalli wakes up and realises something drastic must be done in order for Shekhar to return to Siddeshwari..

She walks out into the courtyard and notices Ranvijay.. He looks at her and tells her to get away from his eyes as he hates the sight of her..
Lalli adamant stands by and tells him she wants to discuss something..
Ranvijay shocked looks at her in disbelief..

Lalli: I need your help😲 😲
Ranvijay: Get away from me.. You ruined me in front of my father and now you want my help!
Lalli: We both want the same thing?!
Ranvijay: I want you out of this family! I want Shekhar's land! Do you?
Lalli: What is not yours you can't have therefore you will never get the land but me leaving.. yes i do..

It takes a couple of minutes before Ranvijay responds but then he turns to face Lalli..
Ranvijay: What do you want from me?
Lalli: Can we stike a deal?
Ranvijay: Plan first then the deal!

Lalli tells him that she would tell him the plan but she knows that he is not loyal or trustworthy therefore she will tell him as she goes along.. unsure whether he is doing the right thing he puts his hand upon Lalli's and both smirk.. 😲 🤢

Precap: Lalli comes to Shekhar and is adorned with heavy jewels and expensive sari.. Shekhar is shocked!!😲 😲

Enjoy..x
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Gursharan

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Posted: 15 years ago

thanks sanj for updating.
omg this is totally like our Laali, I can imagine her saying the same lines😆

laali is going to betray shekhar laali and ranvijay😭

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