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Posted: 9 years ago
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I've tried to write some lines especially for you Uma from my heart...hope you like them...I just really admire you and love you and these lines are straight from my heart...

I admire you...

Here I've tried to fulfil your wish,

You wanted me to write something in English.

Your wish is my command,

Your pleasure is what I demand.

I don't know you for too long,

But you seem to be mentally so very strong.

Your thoughts and ideas always surprise,

I wonder from where do they arise.

In life's school everyone is a student,

But your passion for writing is so very evident.

May you always continue to write,

Reading whatever you write, for me is a delight.

I wish you all the very best,

May you pass each and every test.

May God give you all that you deserve,

Your prosperity may always stay preserved.

Its truly a pleasure to know you,

My heartfelt wishes are always for you.

THE END...

Hope you like this Uma...I don't know whether I've been able to bring across what I feel for you...I've just made an attempt...you know that i'm not at all a poet...please forgive me for my loopholes...I've just tried to write what my heart feels for you... love you all and please bear with me...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much Manisha
This means a lot to me
I really mean it
No one has ever appreciated me like this
Thank you so much once again
I know how much effort you have put in for this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful poem Manisha 👏👏
U have expressed yourself so honestly and in simple words ! Loved it, Uma you deserve this 🤗
Loves to both of you ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful poem manisha. such a wonderful poem
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Thank you so much Manisha
This means a lot to me
I really mean it
No one has ever appreciated me like this
Thank you so much once again
I know how much effort you have put in for this


Thanks Uma, glad you liked it...i was quite nervous while posting it...love you dear always😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Beautiful poem Manisha 👏👏

U have expressed yourself so honestly and in simple words ! Loved it, Uma you deserve this 🤗
Loves to both of you ❤️


Thanks Babita for appreciating this...i really find it difficult to write a poem in english...rhyming is quite difficult ...you see...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

beautiful poem manisha. such a wonderful poem


Thanks a lot Tasha for liking it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome poem manisha maam


Thanks a lot Tara...this motivation is so important for me...loves to you dear...

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