Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta! Ratri FS! part 5B on pg 28 - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

198

Views

21.8k

Users

10

Likes

161

Frequent Posters

Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Hi Uma, fever slightly less right now, so decided to reply to your update..
Raghav having a real tough time in trying to manao her this time, obviously she was too hurt this time...
Raghav like a lover boy following her to the CCD and calling her darling...so cute and romantic... She must have been so shocked to see this...
Raghav seeing off that guy with his tactics... She got all the more angry and the manager mistook them as a couple... So sweet... They just argued like this only...what's the fault of the manager...
Best part was the parking lot scene, the kiss and the way he asked her to look at herself... She can not hide her love in front of him when he is up to his pranks...
Her mother now has some doubts about something going on in her mind...she waits for Trisha's confession herself... Let's see what happens further...
The precap is so scary...what might have happened..
I'm waiting eagerly for you to get well soon completely my dear... Take rest and when you are absolutely fine, complete this lovely story of yours...



Thanks for ur lovely comment Manisha
It means a lot
As I said Trisha is a women with self respect because of which Raghav will have a tough time. Raghav is always curious and worried about Trisha's marriage proposals. If Raghav wouldn't have interfered Trisha would have faced difficulties as the guy whom came to meet her was actually a good person. Unintentionally the behave like a couple and because of which strangers mistook them as one. And Trisha can't hide her feelings when he takes initiative after all she too is a human at heart
Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4


CBI headquarters - Conference Hall

Everyone was busy with there own works and news channels were on as usual. Trisha completely avoided Raghav and managed to put an angry face outside. But deep inside her heart she was still cherishing there first kiss. She just couldn't deny that moment felt so magical for her. It had been two days to that incident though she masked anger and irritation for Raghav outside somewhere her heart had started melting by seeing his sincere efforts to win her trust back. Obviously being a girl with self respect and attitude she didn't show it in front of Raghav. If she forgive him easily he will always take her for granted. Raghav had messed up with a wrong girl. And he had to pay for it.

Around evening Trisha was in her cabin going through the case reports which the team had recently solved for submitting in court. Her younger sister Tejal called and reminded about the family function she had to attend today evening. Trisha's elder cousin sister Kajal's godhbhari! Trisha rarely attends family function. Mainly because of her job and then her reserved natured. Many of her relatives are not in favour of her being a cop. And in these functions they will start asking about her marriage.
Trisha has to attend this function as she is really close to Kajal. In between her hectic schedule she had forgotten about the function. But for her relief Tejal reminded her and she had kept also kept her costumes and necessary accessories in Trisha's car. Trisha looked at her watch. She is already late. She asked the attender to get her bag from car.

Everyone was astonished to see Trisha coming out in blue and red saree. She had wore long jumki and a stone bindhi. Light makeup adored her facial features even more.
Swathi: Arey wah Trisha Tum toh Bahuth sundar lag Rahi Ho. Kaha ja Rahi Ho iss Tarah sajsawarkar?
Trisha: meri cousin sister ki godhbhari hai. Mein toh Bhool Gayi thi. Par acha hua Tejal Ko yaad tha. Ussne yeh sab mere car mein Rakhi.
Raghav: boss aap Hume invite nahi Karegi?
Trisha: Raghav! Kya tume pata nahi hai godhbhari aurato Ka function?
She shook her head and left from there. Raghav understood Trisha is still angry with him. The other team members smiled silently seeing there tiff.

Trisha was in kitchen preparing juice for the guest. She wished Kajal and then went inside the kitchen by giving excuse to help her aunt, otherwise all her relatives will start asking about her marriage and the about proposals of guys whom they feel are suitable for her. She will be uncomfortable about that kind of talks and purposefully escaped to the kitchen. She was pouring the juice into the glasses. Suddenly she felt a pair of strong arms around her waist. Trisha was astonished and much to her shock that was non other than Raghav. She wondered what is he doing here? What if someone sees them like this? Already her mother has take that boyfriend issue in ccd seriously. She had been asking Trisha about that indirectly many times. And if they are caught like this, knowing her mother's nature she will get them married here only.
Trisha: Raghav! what the hell are you doing here?
Raghav: tumne invite toh nahi kiya par Phir Bhi mein aayi tumse Milne. Kaisi lagi meri surprise?
Trisha: Tum pagal hogayi hai Kya? Tum iss Tarah meri family function Ke beech woh Bhi aurato Ke function Ke beech? Koi Dekh Liye toh?
Raghav: toh Kya? Kehadena mein tumari boyfriend hoon.
Trisha: boyfriend? Woh Bhi Tum? kabhi nahi. Chodo dho muhey.
Raghav: bilkul Bhi nahi.
Trisha: Raghav yeh mazaak nahi hai. Please leave me.
Raghav: ok fine! Par Ek Sharath par.
Trisha: Kya?
Raghav: tume Aaj function Ke baad mere saath long drive pe aana Hoga.
Trisha: what? No Raghav
Raghav: toh phir mein tume bilkul Bhi nahi chodegi
Trisha: aargh! Tum kitna irritating Ho! Ok fine mein aajaongi

After sometime

Trisha was extremely angry with Raghav for his mischievous act. But still she kept her promise. In between the function she managed to speak with her mother and excused herself saying that she had to leave as some emergency had came in office. Though her mother was a bit hesitant but still she didn't argue with Trisha and she allowed Trisha to leave. Though Trisha was irritated with Raghav's prank in her heart she thanked him as she was not feeling comfortable with this kind of public functions, the introvert she is never comfortable in social events.

Raghav was driving the car and he could make out that Trisha is extremely angry with him.
Raghav: pata hai jab Tum gussey mein Ho toh Tumari Chehera gusse se laal Ho Jathe hai. Aur Tum Bahuth hot dikhthi Ho.
Trisha ( angrily): shut up Raghav!
He smiled seeing her angry face.
Raghav: aur muhey Bahuth Pasanth hai tume iss Tarah dekhna
Trisha: Raghav! Tum muhey blackmail Karke iss Tarah drive pe lejarahi Ho Iska matlabh yeh nahi hai ki mein tumari saath enjoy kar Rahi hoon aur tumari man mein jo Bhi aaya bus Bol Jao. Mein tumse Bahuth Naraz hoon. And it will be better if you keep your mouth shut.
Raghav: agar chup rehna tha toh apne ghar mein bait thi. Itna risk lekar tume stalk nahi karthi aur mein ne Bahuth Baar shareef se tume drive pe invite kiya tha. Par Tum toh muhey attitude dikharahi thi. Ab tumne galthi ki toh sasa Bhi bhugathna padega.
Trisha: really Raghav? You know what tumse baath karna bekar hai.
She turned her face towards window and enjoyed the view outside. Raghav being Raghav kept on talking and irritating her. After sometimes she unknowingly smiled because of his pranks.

Raghav have taken Trisha to a hill were they could see the entire Delhi. Since it was night time the city was beautifully viewed with lights. Trisha was lost by the scene unfold. Raghav knew Trisha likes to enjoy the beauty of nature. She is not like usual girl who likes shopping and go for dinner dates. He put his arms around her bare waist and hugged her tightly from her back. Trisha shivered when he touched her bare waist. But still she controlled her feelings.
Trisha: Kya kar Rahi Ho Raghav? Leave me.
He tighten his grip even more. Trisha was shaken by his movement.
Raghav: come on Trisha mein janthi hoon Tum muhey Bahuth Pasanth karthi Ho. Aur tume meri chune se koi problem nahi hai.
She closed her eyes. He knew her so well.
Trisha: yeh tumari galth fami hai. Aisa kuch Bhi nahi hai.
Raghav: really? Agar Aisa hai Tum apni ankhe kyun band ki? Tum chooth Bol Rahi Ho Trisha.
Trisha: nahi. Main ne koi chooth nahi bola.
Raghav: agar Aisa Ho toh sabith karlo.
Trisha: Kaise?
Raghav: kiss me?
Trisha: what?
Raghav: agar tumari Mann mein mere Liye kuch Bhi nahi hai toh yeh hesitation kyun?
Kai tume muhejse pyaar toh hua hai Kya?
Trisha forcefully kissed on his lips. She was not knowing what she doing. She got provoked and just wanted to prove him her words were true not knowing that she is doing what Raghav exactly wanted her to do. Raghav too responded to her kiss passionately and Trisha got totally melted in his kiss.

Pre cap: Ratri in danger

Ps: I am very much disheartened with the response I received for last update. I have updated it when I was not feeling well. I received only 4 comments for that update. Somewhere I have started losing interest in writing stories. Because of which the update is delayed. I wrote what came into mind. I am not holding the story as I can't hurt those people who supported me. Next update I don't know when it will be. That all depends upon the appreciation and motivation I get.
Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
Tasha1994 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the update dear .off to read it
braveheartdoc thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks a lot dear for this lovely update...
I know that the responses for our stories are less, but I feel that since the time our forum has been retrieved, the members have become somewhat more regular... what say?

coming to the update...

Starting with the office, nice how Trisha's thoughts always surrounded Raghav, though she was angry with him but she loves him deeply...all her mannerisms openly express the same...😉
The godbharai function, she always avoids such functions but today, she had to go... after all her cousin whom she is very close...
Raghav coming from behind and giving her the shock of her life... she must have been so nervous to see him...
Then his cute shart... long drive...she must be so happy from inside though outside, she shows her anger...
The conversation in the car was so cute...their tiffs but indirectly their love shows always...👏😊
The hill scene...his holding tight, their kiss ...all so beautifully presented dear...

Just loved the entire update...sooo much👏👏👏👏👏👏

Please don't be upset dear...our forum is still very active...recently I've seen many forums which are not that active...we need to maintain its activity till season 2...we all have to be together...
LOVES TO YOU DEAR for this WONDERFUL UPDATE...Take care...
babita.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Uma 👏👏
I loved the way Trisha till the end remained restraint and conscious of her attitudes and self respect ! But Raghav is Raghav, and no one can say lies in front of him. Nor could anyone hide her or his feelings from him !
Lovely evening and a beautiful attired Trisha !⭐️⭐️
Loved how Raghav asked for the invite and Trisha scold him 😉 Loved more his daring to reach the venue and that in the kitchen 😳😉 Very strong heart our Raghav has ! 😛
Trisha said yes to his bet, but she never knew that she was going to play a puppet in his hands and with this she did what he wanted.

She was not knowing what she doing. She got provoked and just wanted to prove him her words were true not knowing that she is doing what Raghav exactly wanted her to do. Raghav too responded to her kiss passionately and Trisha got totally melted in his kiss.

I just could not come out of this for a moment 😉 ❤️ It's so lovely ☺️
The entire journey to the hill was like anger from her and mischievious smiles from him. But all changed in one second and Trisha almost melted to him !
Beautiful end and a lovely beginning of knowing each other more and loving each other without any condition ! Now is the time that Trsiha will have to confess herself as she is happy inside with the first kiss they had !
This has come out so brilliantly Uma, bcos the two lovers who were unknown to their feelings are on the verge to express each self !
Loves and hugs to you too for the stunning chapter U have given to us to cherish RaTri moments ❤️🤗
babita.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I am very much disheartened with the response I received for last update. I have updated it when I was not feeling well. I received only 4 comments for that update. Somewhere I have started losing interest in writing stories. Because of which the update is delayed. I wrote what came into mind. I am not holding the story as I can't hurt those people who supported me. Next update I don't know when it will be. That all depends upon the appreciation and motivation I get.


Despite of your illness, U have given us such a lovely update Uma ! Thanks a lot for this !👏👏 Can't say much about the proxy, bcos very less members are left here and we are doing whatever possible we can. I only can give my hand, and wish every hand to every thread coming along !
Uma, don't feel disheartened pls. It's not good for your health. U have come and given a lovley RaTri moments, they are much enough for us ! Pls pls never think of losing interest. We all are standing here for yours, Manisha's and other lovely stories, plus the threads that are made !
Let's go with the less activity, who knows this activity increases soon 😊
Loves ❤️
braveheartdoc thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
I totally agree with Babita...we have to accept that the forum has very less members...may be 5-6...
I just hope the activity improves soon...hope soon Amreen would be back after 24th, her exam...
what is important is that the members who are present should be regular on the forum...

I AM TRYING TO MAKE THE FORUM ACTIVE AS FAR AS POSSIBLE FROM MY SIDE... I GUESS EVERYONE WOULD AGREE TO THIS...
I require the support of as many members as possible, we have become like family...and i loved the way, everyone came forward when our forum was locked...
That just shows how and what we feel for the forum and really all our efforts paid off... our forum was retrieved in almost 24 hrs...that was and achievement for all of us...

we all are together for this forum...LOVES to everyone who is a part of this forum...
DEKER thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
hey sweetheart please don't be upset...we love you a lot we can't see you upsate dear
be happy dear we are always there for you...😊

And comming to the update it was awesome, amazing,wonderful,outstanding i am not able to express how much i happy ...👏
the starting part Trisha was happy from inside but showing an angry face to raghav ohh so cute and in the function...ooohhh😳 raghav dares to come their and makes trisha ready to go with him for the longdrive...and in the car raghav as usual irritating trisha...poor trisha don't she have any other choice
.Raghav...so smart he makes trisha to do that he wants her to do...so romantic part i loved it.
Thankyou so...much sweetie
with lots of love for you🤗❤️❤️
⭐️⭐️⭐️
Eagerly waiting for the next part please please please update it soon dear...i can't control my excitement i am just super exited for it

Edited by DEKER - 9 years ago
braveheartdoc thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

SO ROMANTIC
braveheartdoc thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".