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Posted: 9 years ago
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When will you post the next part? Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear really loved it alot .Why are you nervous dear pls dont be it is the most awesome part ever. All the feelings have come up really beautifully.Loved the flashback scene very much .Really loved that unexpected twist that changed Ratris life .loved the case in the back drop .Raghav getting worried for trisha in the car cause because her life can be in danger catch the mafia and drug smugglers.loved how trisha explained him that she is a cbi officer and she is trained for all that . loved them going as undercover journalists for solving thr case but unfortunatly the were suspected .Raghav telling trisha to wear the dhulan's joda so that nobody suspects them . loved the scene in the room trisha telling in the raghav to go in the washroom cause she wanted the mirror to change and raghav telling her not to take much time was soo cute really loved that scene a lot .so raghav and trisha got married in such a situation .must be akward for both of them though they like each other but marrying in such a situation must really get akward .trishas character is so beautiful and wonderful in this story .Really got tears in my eyes seeing trishas con dition .She felt betrayed by raghav .Really waiting to read raghavs POV in the next update ..Loved how raghav tried to say sorry to trish but trisha being a strong and independant women will surely not agree so quickly .Loved trishas conversation with her parents too.she chose raghav over her parents cause raghav has nobody else then her .trisha going to raghavs house with all her bags .what will raghav do now .waiting to read the next update .pls do update soon .thanks a lot for the awesome emotional update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

When will you post the next part? Waiting...



I am in hospital now will try tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1..



The starting was beneficial to know that Trisha is a mother of a little girl who is just like her father Raghav... But the strange fact came n it shook me how their marriage wud have happened.. !
Reva is a sweet pampered but an obedient child.. n her mom has done a great job raising her all alone... A single parent n so shattered... i felt so bad for her.. !
Dilpi Chauhan cleared many a things .. still so much to be explored... ( in the next ) 😳
Now as Raghav is all set to have a date with Nirmala to know more abt the details of the case... i saw a jealous n raged Trisha so angry with him... But the cases have been solved this way many times... So the only anger is of a wife who cant see her man with anyone else... as do Raghav... he cant see her with anyone.. and knows that she is jealous...

Felt shocked to what Trisha has gone thru all her way... Marriage n no one knows of it except Dilip... Raghav lost that time memory n have been in the phase of looking her as a boss n teasing her like before..
Felt estranged that they have a daughter n Raghav misses a life that he had with Trisha...

Lookiing forward to the next chap. to know more of their marriage n life after that...

Interesting plot... very unusual n unique... Loved the way you have again show a strong n bold Trisha to your readers... ⭐️👏
Thanks Uma... !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 A...

Loved the way Raghav was nervous all for Trisha 4 years back... He wanted her to be safe... as they were hailing to a dangerous case... Liked the way Trisha objected to his worries n told him that being a woman she is all ready to go ahead... !
The circumstances on which the marriage happened... It was strange,,, but obvious... ! I liked their contribution to their job... But marrying for the sake of a case was a bit awkward for both... !
Where Trisha was thinking of a life afterwards n a relation going to happen.. there was Raghav who straightly said that this was just an act..
The slap did tell her woes... The manao was not enough later on... The confessions n the sorries were not enough to compensate cos as you have rightly mentioned... he has messed up with a wrong girl... A girl who is hurt n cant believe what he did that day... !

The confession to her parents was not easy for her... she as a shattered girl left her home for Raghav... cos for her ... her family had all of them,, but Raghav has only her... Simply beautiful lines... loved them to the core.. Loved the love she has for him n still a faith ,, the trust she fully have.. !👏⭐️👏
I wud surely like to know Raghav's POV... cos without that no judgement wud be passed.. !
I know Raghav is sensible n was not intentionally refusing the marriage n in my opinion... he never wanted this marriage to be thrown upon Trisha... He loves her but cant play with her life n emotions... !
N for Trisha... this marriage changed her life in a second... ! N the refusal broke her..
Will wait for the next... to see more of RaTri scenes n more exploration... ! No matter what... i am joining Raghav when he will be telling his views.. to Trisha n to us..

Thanks Uma... for this very unique subject you have formed in this story... Loved it.. !⭐️ 👏



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome update dear really loved it alot .

Thank you dear I am glad that you liked it
Why are you nervous dear pls dont be it is the most awesome part ever.
I was very nervous due to storyline glad everybody liked it
All the feelings have come up really beautifully.Loved the flashback scene very much .
Thank you so much dear
Really loved that unexpected twist that changed Ratris life .loved the case in the back drop .
I am glad that someone mentioned about the case
Raghav getting worried for trisha in the car cause because her life can be in danger catch the mafia and drug smugglers.loved how trisha explained him that she is a cbi officer and she is trained for all that . loved them going as undercover journalists for solving thr case but unfortunatly the were suspected .
Raghav is always worried for Trisha and Trisha is not like usual girl she is a bold women
Raghav telling trisha to wear the dhulan's joda so that nobody suspects them . loved the scene in the room trisha telling in the raghav to go in the washroom cause she wanted the mirror to change and raghav telling her not to take much time was soo cute really loved that scene a lot .
That was my favourite part too
so raghav and trisha got married in such a situation .must be akward for both of them though they like each other but marrying in such a situation must really get akward .
It was unexpected and both of them are shaked as it should not have happened the way it happened
trishas character is so beautiful and wonderful in this story .Really got tears in my eyes seeing trishas con dition .She felt betrayed by raghav .
Trisha is a wonderful character as such if you had tears in your eyes then I can say it's a huge compliment for me.
Really waiting to read raghavs POV in the next update ..
Raghav do have his own reasons for the denial just like Trisha he too is shocked

Loved how raghav tried to say sorry to trish but trisha being a strong and independant women will surely not agree so quickly .
Trisha is a woman with loads of self respect he had hurt her deeply by rejecting there marriage after all she trusted him
Loved trishas conversation with her parents too.she chose raghav over her parents cause raghav has nobody else then her .trisha going to raghavs house with all her bags .
It was indeed difficult for Trisha she had to choose between her family and her husband
what will raghav do now .waiting to read the next update .pls do update soon .thanks a lot for the awesome emotional update


Thank you dear I am glad that you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Part 1..




The starting was beneficial to know that Trisha is a mother of a little girl who is just like her father Raghav... But the strange fact came n it shook me how their marriage wud have happened.. !

Well I have shocked everyone with this story
Reva is a sweet pampered but an obedient child.. n her mom has done a great job raising her all alone... A single parent n so shattered... i felt so bad for her.. !

Reva is the soul of this story and it's extremely difficult for being a single mom especially when you have no support from your family and friends
Dilpi Chauhan cleared many a things .. still so much to be explored... ( in the next ) 😳
Now as Raghav is all set to have a date with Nirmala to know more abt the details of the case... i saw a jealous n raged Trisha so angry with him... But the cases have been solved this way many times... So the only anger is of a wife who cant see her man with anyone else... as do Raghav... he cant see her with anyone.. and knows that she is jealous...
I would like to use the word posseiveness instead ever wife is possessive about her husband

Felt shocked to what Trisha has gone thru all her way... Marriage n no one knows of it except Dilip... Raghav lost that time memory n have been in the phase of looking her as a boss n teasing her like before..
Felt estranged that they have a daughter n Raghav misses a life that he had with Trisha...
Indeed Trisha had gone through a lot no family no friends and had lost Raghav too at a crucial point and they missed most beautiful moments in her life

Lookiing forward to the next chap. to know more of their marriage n life after that...

Interesting plot... very unusual n unique... Loved the way you have again show a strong n bold Trisha to your readers... ⭐️👏
Thanks Uma... !

Thank you I am glad you like the plot. Trisha indeed is a strong character

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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Part 2 A...


Loved the way Raghav was nervous all for Trisha 4 years back... He wanted her to be safe... as they were hailing to a dangerous case... Liked the way Trisha objected to his worries n told him that being a woman she is all ready to go ahead... !
He is always worried for her after all she the only person who is close to his heart and Trisha is not a usual girl

The circumstances on which the marriage happened... It was strange,,, but obvious... ! I liked their contribution to their job... But marrying for the sake of a case was a bit awkward for both... !
Marriage was not planned by both it was awkward but they had to do it

Where Trisha was thinking of a life afterwards n a relation going to happen.. there was Raghav who straightly said that this was just an act..
Trisha is a composed women and she is clear about her feelings and knows what she want in her and top of that these rituals matter her more

The slap did tell her woes... The manao was not enough later on... The confessions n the sorries were not enough to compensate cos as you have rightly mentioned... he has messed up with a wrong girl... A girl who is hurt n cant believe what he did that day... !

That slap indeed showed her belief in concept like marriage and also how hurt she was when her self respect was hurt by the same man whom she had trusted more than herself and yes Raghav has messed up with a wrong girl she is a girl with loads of self respect

The confession to her parents was not easy for her... she as a shattered girl left her home for Raghav... cos for her ... her family had all of them,, but Raghav has only her... Simply beautiful lines... loved them to the core.. Loved the love she has for him n still a faith ,, the trust she fully have.. !👏⭐️👏

It's true that Raghav had hurt her deeply and she is extremely angry with him but she can never leave him. And also she can never stand someone saying against him. Even if it's her parents. She knows him so well and have faith in him even after all this.

I wud surely like to know Raghav's POV... cos without that no judgement wud be passed.. !
I know Raghav is sensible n was not intentionally refusing the marriage n in my opinion... he never wanted this marriage to be thrown upon Trisha... He loves her but cant play with her life n emotions... !
You have understood Raghav's character well. He can never hurt Trisha. Even the marriage was unexpected for him too.

N for Trisha... this marriage changed her life in a second... ! N the refusal broke her..
Will wait for the next... to see more of RaTri scenes n more exploration... ! No matter what... i am joining Raghav when he will be telling his views.. to Trisha n to us..

Marriage had changed her life a lot. Next part will be more light hearted after all the shocking drama you guys deserve some light hearted moments

Thanks Uma... for this very unique subject you have formed in this story... Loved it.. !⭐️ 👏

I am glad that you liked the story I was hell nervous while updating this story



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

guys pls check Amreens birthday thread made bu me


Have wished her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Uma 🤗
First of all a very nice banner and a cute Reva -- RaTri's daughter. Loved the story track and finally got the time to say something. Told U yesterday, and you are so understanding, many thanks for that.

Taking care of a little girl as a single parent, Bravo Trisha 👏👏
She has seen the worst days of her life. She is unable to tell Raghav who has forgotten everything of the time period he married her.
Her only hope is waiting for Raghav to come into his true senses and remember everything of their past. Gotta know about her life from her boss. But felt so bad for her when she is so helpless and can't express herself to the world. Her feelings are palpable.
Raghav is in his previous mood every time. Teasing Trisha and knowing her feelings of jealousy are not a big thing for him. But for Trisha, it's a life so tough to lead to see him dating a beautiful girl, though for the case.
I felt a very helpless but a very strong Lady in Trisha. All alone she has taken care of her daughter. Her views makes her go to Raghv every time. She can see Raghav's image in Reva and there she is happy that she has Reva who is so obedient, plus a good girl and a support during her lonely life. She helps her coming out of depression, the same way Raghav used to. Loved it ⭐️⭐️
Very bold issue, nice projecting of the theme and very well written. Expressions are your plus point. I really loved to read both the chapters. Thanks a tonne Trisha, loves ❤️

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