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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am so sorry for taking so long with the scene especially when I said that I wnt take long all I can blame it on is that I was bitten by a bug called laziness. And I have got to say dnt really have a proper ending for this OS coz as I mentioned before loved what happened in the show so this os is just about them being study buddies and getting closer together.

Part 2

Vidya, Chancal and Krishna where in their sitting room and Krishna was absent mindedly peeling peas whilst Vidya and CC where having tea looking at each another worriedly. When Chancal had woken up last night to see Krishna not in the bed she went to find her but had seen some1 coming into their yard so went and told her dad about it. They had both been surprised to see that it was Pintuji and where shocked at what he was telling Krishna. Vidya had wanted to confront Pintu on what he had said than and there but stopped himself coz he needed time to think coz he just dnt know what to make of what he had heard. He decided to speak to him when he met him the next day but when he did he found that Pintu was his usual self and he was even more confused after he had spoken to him. He and Babloo had been speaking about Krishna and how both of them where disappointed with her decision when he had seen Pintu coming towards them and he said loudly that the only thing that would make their disappointment disappear was if Pintu where to become a bdo. Babloo had immediately laughed and Pintu had been shocked for a second but had covered it up and said that Chacaji that u should know by now that rules and me never go together. He decided than not to speak to him coz even though he didn't know what to make of he had heard he had known Pintu for a long time. He knew his nature and ways and so knew that he would never deliberately hurt any1 and even though he didn't know what he was up he knew somehow that it would be in Krishna's interest and had told Chancal this.

He and Chancal saw that Krishna was struggled with her decision and so they thought they would help out a bit and CC said I was just thinking even though Babloo and Pintu are brothers they so different? This immediately got Krishna's attention and Vidya smiled at her cleverness and said on the surface but both are very good boys with good hearts they both might get things done using different methods but their aim is always the same. Pintu judgment is often clouded by his emotions and so even though he has a very emotional reaction to everything he is often right in his ways and will never do anything wrong. I trust him implicitly, even with my life and finally looked at Krishna who looked at him startled at what he said. Than he said Krishna I forgot to give u something and took out his old phone from his pocket and said that Ganga had given him a new phone as well as fixed my old phone coz Sonu had told her that he had been playing with my phone and had dropped it in the water. So I thought u should have my old phone and gave it to her and Krishna smiled and said thanks papa. He said there's a new sim card in it and airtime and I think about 50 free sms so u can keep in touch with any1 u want to. Krishna took her phone and left as her dad and cc continued with their chat and went to her room she was extremely glad that cc had mentioned Pintuji coz it helped her make her decision.

She dialed his number and when he picked it up and said hello she didn't know what to say and was silent Pintu on the other hand knew from the silence that it was her and smiled in relieve. He said Krishna I guess I dnt have to ask what your decision is and said he would be by her house after 10 and when she still didn't say anything said u know u going to have to eventually speak to me? And she finally said I dnt have to do anything I dnt want to and cut the call angrily the moment she heard his voice and how confident he had been that she would agree to his terms she got angry. She didn't know why but whenever she was around him she wasn't her usual calm, rational self and she really didn't know how she was going to be able to deal with Mr. Arrogant for the next few weeks.

Pintu on the other hand after receiving her call had tried to read one of Babloo's basic bdo books but it was just so boring, nothing made sense to him and things couldn't get any worse coz he was just on the 1st page and wanted to sleep. He thought to himself the next time he had trouble sleeping he was definitely going to be using this book it was an antidote to insomniac and wondered what he had gotten himself in for. After a few minutes of further torture he couldn't take it anymore and decided to sleep and set his alarm for 9 and prayed that Krishna wouldn't expect him to answer any questions.

Later that night Pintu reached Krishna's house and went to meet her on the roof top he had brought his bag which he had his junk food and coffee which he hated but it helped him keep awake. Krishna was there going over the notes and he went and sat next to her as if he had no care in the world and told her I am here so start and his behavior immediately irritated her.

But she managed to control her emotions and started the lesson and for the next 2 hours non stop she taught him the basic theories. Pintu was mesmerized with her as soon as she started speaking she transformed and he finally fully realized that being a bdo wasn't just a job, aim or a dream for her she lived for it. It was her life, her passion, her aim and telling her to not be that would be liking trying to tell some1 to not breathe and expecting them to do it willingly.

Just than they both heard Ravi coming up with CC and they quickly put everything away and Krishna pointed for him to go into the store room. They managed to squeeze themselves in there since it was filled with things in it whilst they waited for Ravi and CC to leave. Even though they had the books and Pintu's bag in btw them they couldn't help but feel awkward being so close to one another. At one point Pintu had removed her hair which had fallen on her face and put it behind her ears and they had stared at each another in the darkness and that awareness of each another that they had felt last night started again but even deeper coz they couldn't move away from each another. Just when Pintu was bringing his hand to touch her face they both heard CC saying that they where going to sleep and it broke whatever spell they where under.

Krishna had left Pintu and had gone downstairs he had wanted to stop her but at the same time he was glad that he was alone they needed a few minutes away from each. He knew he needed a distraction so that he wnt have to think about what had happened and so when he noticed the lamp it was a perfect distraction. He was all for learning outside but the lighting needed to be better when they where going over the question. He didn't know how she managed to read with just a lamp and not proper lights for so long, his eyes than caught sight of Pinky's roof top and he smiled as he found his solution. Just than Krishna came back and she brought with her some snacks for them to have neither wanted to speak so they just ate wordlessly. After that they went back to their lesson and by the end of it Pintu thought that Krishna was nothing more than a drill sergeant and the way things where going he would probably be ready to write the bdo exams with her.

Krishna was in the kitchen helping her mom out but her mind wasn't there and she was constantly making mistakes and having to apologize for it. She couldn't help but think about the past few days and how tense and awkward it had been btw her and Pintuji. It was fine if they where discussing their work but if they took a break the silence and tension btw them was just tangible and neither knew how to break it. Day by day she was getting more and more impressed with his mind and the way he thought of things he was very direct and smart and she liked that. She felt that she was learning a lot from him there was no procedure that he dnt question how to get out of and to use to his advantage his mind simply fascinated her. She than touched her lips as she remembered how after the 3rd night they had studied she had felt sleepy and so had taken a chillie and had been about to put it in her mouth when he had put his hand on her mouth. They had been both shocked but after a few seconds he had removed his hand and said that he had meant to grab her hand but instant had touched her mouth and he was sorry. After that Krishna just didn't know how to behave with him every time they mistakenly touched or looked at each another for too long she started getting weird thoughts about him and so she became more and more nervous with him every time they met.

Pintu was on his way to Krishna's house he hadn't wanted to go but he couldn't refuse when Sargam Bhabi had asked him to deliver gifts to the 2 bride's coz they had to go elsewhere. The thought of seeing krishna and having her be her normal cold self dnt at all appeal to him the last few days had been hell for him her indifference towards him and coldness frustrated him. And it was all his fault he remembered how the day after they had their 1st lesson he left early from home but hadn't gone directly to Krishna's house but went to Pinky's house. He luckily had seen a ladder in their yard the previous day and so had slowly put it against their house and went up. He couldn't help but look into their house when he passed a window and heard their annoying voices and dnt know how he dnt manage to fall as he saw that the whole family had face packs on. He tried not to laugh as he went further up, he than went to their satellite dish and turned it more towards Krishna's roof top he than positioned a touch at the bottom and at the top of the dish put a piece of foil on it and switched the touch on and immediately the whole of Krishna's roof was fully lighted. He than slowly went down the ladder and again dnt know how he managed to not laugh as he heard the mother and daughter duo scream and cry that they where going to miss their favorite program.

He had thought that it was a great idea but madamji there thought it was awful and got angry with him and went on and on about how he could have behaved like that way. She had asked him to go back and put it right and he had refused and that had started the cold war btw them. He than reached her house and he knocked on the door and he heard a bowl falling on the floor so rushed in to check what happened and saw krishna cleaning some mess from the floor whilst a frying pan filled with oil looked like it was going to fall on her at any second. He dropped the gifts on the floor and rushed and pushed the pan away from the heat before it could fall on her. Krishna looked shocked at him and he grabbed her and pulled her up and asked her if she had no sense that didn't she know that the oil could have fallen on her and she could have gotten hurt.

He let her go after a few seconds and managed to calm himself down but still looked extremely angry at her, Krishna on the other hand was taken aback by his anger. Just when she was about to thank him he asked her where her mother was and she managed to say that she had to go to visit a friend. He said arrogantly oh so that's the reason u where allowed in the kitchen coz it's pretty obvious from the mess u made in here u dnt come here often. Even though she knew what he said was true she got angry at him and said he should keep his opinion to himself and angrily started cleaning up. He couldn't stay angry at her especially when she looked so cute angry, he had missed this in the past few days and so started helping her by getting a cloth and wiping the tops where he saw dirt. She told him to stop him but he just continued and she had no choice after a while other than to let him clean up.

After they had cleaned up she said Pintuji what are u doing here so early and he smiled and said that his ma and bhabhi had sent gifts for your sister for her wedding and for u. She smiled and said that your family is very considerate and sweet and he smiled and said obviously they just like me and Krishna smiled back but didn't respond back. She picked up the gifts and said that she would put it away and would be right back. Pintu looked at the puri if he guessed properly since most where either burnt or looked half cooked and didn't look appetizing at all. Her family was lucky that the rest had fallen otherwise they would have had a hard time disgusting her food and as he picked up one he so wnt want to be them tonight. When Krishna came back she saw him holding up one of the puri's and having a disgusted look on his face and she couldn't help but say that it was her first time that she had made the potato puri. And he said that's quite obvious and she got angry and said look here if u going to insult me but before she could say anything else he said how was she going to make another batch? She looked worried and said she dnt know since her mom had even taken the recipe books when she left to see her friend so she dnt know how to make it again. And couldn't help bt say that the whole day she had been distracted and now this her mom was going to be angry at her. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her she looked like a little girl at that moment and he said that he would go out and buy some for her. She immediately refused and said that her mom dnt like the way it was made outside and would only eat some if chaciji brought some for her since it was the only thing she could make properly.

Upon hearing dihati's name he got an idea and grabbed her hand and said he had an idea it was only once they had reached the door that he realized that he had her hand in his and let her go awkwardly. She didn't know why but she locked up without a word and went with him and was shocked to see that he had taken her to Pinky's house before she could ask him anything the door was open. And Pinky stood there shocked to see obviously Pintu and than screamed mommyji, see who came, its Pintuji and her mom came running with a towel in her head. She said Pintuji u, here what a lovely surprise Pintu smiled annoyed as he saw how they ignored Krishna and said it was coz of Krishna that he came to see them. They looked at her angrily and both just nodded at her whilst Krishna didn't know what to do standing there. Pinky than said come in Pintuji and looked at Krishna and said u to, Pintu knew that Pinky would try to get close to him if he was alone so said Krishna lets sit here and grabbed her and made her sit next to him. Krishna and the rest where totally shocked but than Dihati sweetly said that Krishna why dnt u get drinks for us since this is as much your house as ours. But Pintu said that she brought me her so we both are guest dnt u have servants to get us drinks and Dihati embarrassedly said of course and called for her servant to get them drinks. Pinky than came and sat next to them and every time she went closer to him he went closer to Krishna and at one point she felt as if he was about to sit on top of her and got up. When Pintu saw this he said krishna u are absolutely right we should leave and mother and daughter immediately said no but Pintu than said I have to even though I dnt want to. My friends asked me to get them potato puri's so I have to go. The duo immediately said that they would make it and not to worry and both rushed to the kitchen looking as if they could have tripped one another. He went and sat back in his place and smiled and patted the seat next to him and Krishna went and sat next to him and he said u got to admit it I am brilliant. Krishna smiled in disbelief at his behavior and wondered what in the world she was still doing here going along with his plan. Pinky came back and started her nonsense again and this time he grabbed krishna's hand and she knew he needed saving and said Pinky u not going to help your mom u know this is the first time Pintuji is going to eat your hand food. Crazy eyes looked at her angrily but than Pintu said that's so true I can't wait to eat something from your hand and she smiled and as she was leaving he mumbled that he would rather consume poison than eat anything made by her. She immediately stopped and Krishna said that he said that after having something made from u everything else will seem like poison. As soon as she left Pintu laughed and said u where amazing who would have thought u could have been such an asset in such a situation. Before she could reply he went on and said I really dnt know how u can ever be related to that fast girl but thank god u not like her she is slightly mad if u ask me. Krishna immediately said he shouldn't speak about her like that and she was her cousin and Pintu gave her a disgusting look and said u really shouldn't go around proudly saying that u related to that mad girl. Krishna had been about to reply when Dihati came and gave them the puri's in a bowl. Pintu looked at it and said wow it looks and smells amazing and they thanked her. Dihati looked at Krishna and asked why was she thanking her and Pintu said u know how she is polite and stuff and motioned for Krishna that they should go. They got up and the duo said he shouldn't go so soon and Pintu said that he had to and would come again to return their bowl. Pinky than tried to get closer to him and he couldn't take it anymore and said chacijie do u know that I was thinking about u just the other day. Dihati said really, why and he said that he had seen a outfit in a store that even Kareena Kapoor would wear and I knew that since u are a kk wanna be u would love it. She said that u think I look like Kareena how sweet, Pintu looked at Krishna who looked like she was minutes away from laughing and exasperatedly said u look better than Kareena and than looked at pinky and said u look even better than your own daughter, quite frankly she's too ugly to be your daughter. U should think about hiding her so that u not embarrassed since u are such a beauty queen. He and Krishna than left to the sounds of pinky scream and her mom saying what a lovely boy.

Once in Krishna's house they immediately fall on the sofa and laughed and when Krishna managed to calm down said she couldn't believe that he had said that to Pinky she is so beautiful. He looked at her and said that what makes a person beautiful is their heart and your crazy cousin dnt have one. If she had your heart she might come close to being as beautiful as u but not that much Krishna didn't know want to say to that and so simply said thanks. Pintu couldn't believe he had said that to her and wanted to kick himself but he knew it was true and after a while had no regrets for saying it.

Krishna had said that she would make tea for him but he refused and said that he had to go coz his dad would be home soon. Krishna went and left him at the gate and even though they would see each another in a couple of hours neither wanted to leave the other. But both eventually parted knowing that somehow the ice btw them had finally been broken and after that they both where much more comfortable with each another. They texted each another at first but than Pintu started calling her during the day when she told him no1 was around or she was alone in her room and eventually their conversation turned more personal. They both started revealing their dreams and hopes to each another, Krishna knew how things where at home for Pintu and eventually just by her listening to him he told her he felt like he dnt really have a purpose besides wanting to be a good son. And Krishna just by being who she was made him think about his own future and he decided that after she wrote her exams he planned to find a job that he could be passionate about. And so the days and weeks passed with them being in their own world both dreading the day they wnt be able to see each anothe much and they would have to part ways.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww Sandia..loved the ending,,so sweet😉,,,Pintu and Krishna really so cute together❤️,,,loved the psycho family part,, tooo funny,,,they really were a comical family except for that silly girl,,,
thanks sandia,,finally👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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All things happen for a reason - And I had to cancel my short holiday maybe to read this splendid OS of yours as a Saturday treat!

Sandia this was too good that I had to analyse it...patience...please...

He said Krishna I guess I dnt have to ask what your decision is and said he would be by her house after 10 and when she still didn't say anything said u know u going to have to eventually speak to me?

A super confident Pintuji!

deal with Mr. Arrogant

I am sure Krishna loved him alright...never mind his arrogance?!!!

He thought to himself the next time he had trouble sleeping he was definitely going to be using this book it was an antidote to insomniac and wondered what he had gotten himself in for.

This really got me into my laughing mode...I was in splits and can well imagine Pintu thinking so...😆

prayed that Krishna wouldn't expect him to answer any questions.

He wanted to impress her some way - so maybe helping out in the exam was also a last try he aimed at...poor thing...

After that they went back to their lesson and by the end of it Pintu thought that Krishna was nothing more than a drill sergeant and the way things where going he would probably be ready to write the bdo exams with her.

😃

Pintu knew that Pinky would try to get close to him if he was alone so said Krishna lets sit here and grabbed her and made her sit next to him.

He always needed a pretext to get close to her...

Pinky than came and sat next to them and every time she went closer to him he went closer to Krishna and at one point she felt as if he was about to sit on top of her and got up.

🤣

Krishna went and sat next to him and he said u got to admit it I am brilliant.

Can we disagree??

Dihati said really, why and he said that he had seen a outfit in a store that even Kareena Kapoor would wear and I knew that since u are a kk wanna be u would love it. She said that u think I look like Kareena how sweet, Pintu looked at Krishna who looked like she was minutes away from laughing and exasperatedly said u look better than Kareena

😆

He looked at her and said that what makes a person beautiful is their heart and your crazy cousin dnt have one. If she had your heart she might come close to being as beautiful as u but not that much Krishna didn't know want to say to that and so simply said thanks. Pintu couldn't believe he had said that to her and wanted to kick himself but he knew it was true and after a while had no regrets for saying it.

This was the beauty which came out so well in their relationship - it wasn't ever for the exterior looks - Krishna too loved his nature more than his handsome looks and Krishna of course was a beauty of her own for only a few persons like Pintu to see...excellent!

But both eventually parted knowing that somehow the ice btw them had finally been broken and after that they both where much more comfortable with each another. They texted each another at first but than Pintu started calling her during the day when she told him no1 was around or she was alone in her room and eventually their conversation turned more personal.

So beautiful to have moved from a matter of fact conversation to being and feeling secure in sharing your thoughts. Prishna - you were adorable!

A brilliant OS which I loved so much that my comment has been too long...
Wonderful Sandia...👏




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trinilisa


awww Sandia..loved the ending,,so sweet😉,orPintu and Krishna really so cute together loved the psycho family part,, tooo funny,,,they really were a comical family except for that silly girl,thanks sandia,,finally

glad u enjoyed it Lisa.
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All things happen for a reason - And I had to cancel my short holiday maybe to read this splendid OS of yours as a Saturday treat!

Sandia this was too good that I had to analyse it...patience...please...-thank u so sweet

He said Krishna I guess I dnt have to ask what your decision is and said he would be by her house after 10 and when she still didn't say anything said u know u going to have to eventually speak to me?

A super confident Pintuji!

deal with Mr. Arrogant

I am sure Krishna loved him alright...never mind his arrogance?!!!-me to always thought that she had a thing for him from the beginning

He thought to himself the next time he had trouble sleeping he was definitely going to be using this book it was an antidote to insomniac and wondered what he had gotten himself in for.

This really got me into my laughing mode...I was in splits and can well imagine Pintu thinking so...😆

prayed that Krishna wouldn't expect him to answer any questions.

He wanted to impress her some way - so maybe helping out in the exam was also a last try he aimed at...poor thing...-

After that they went back to their lesson and by the end of it Pintu thought that Krishna was nothing more than a drill sergeant and the way things where going he would probably be ready to write the bdo exams with her.

😃

Pintu knew that Pinky would try to get close to him if he was alone so said Krishna lets sit here and grabbed her and made her sit next to him.

He always needed a pretext to get close to her...- very true

Pinky than came and sat next to them and every time she went closer to him he went closer to Krishna and at one point she felt as if he was about to sit on top of her and got up.

🤣

Krishna went and sat next to him and he said u got to admit it I am brilliant.

Can we disagree??never

Dihati said really, why and he said that he had seen a outfit in a store that even Kareena Kapoor would wear and I knew that since u are a kk wanna be u would love it. She said that u think I look like Kareena how sweet, Pintu looked at Krishna who looked like she was minutes away from laughing and exasperatedly said u look better than Kareena

😆

He looked at her and said that what makes a person beautiful is their heart and your crazy cousin dnt have one. If she had your heart she might come close to being as beautiful as u but not that much Krishna didn't know want to say to that and so simply said thanks. Pintu couldn't believe he had said that to her and wanted to kick himself but he knew it was true and after a while had no regrets for saying it.

This was the beauty which came out so well in their relationship - it wasn't ever for the exterior looks - Krishna too loved his nature more than his handsome looks and Krishna of course was a beauty of her own for only a few persons like Pintu to see...excellent!-very,very true it was never about the exterior btw these 2 but the meeting of souls that brought them together and u hit it on the nail with the highlighted part coz that was probably the reason why we would never find krishna oogling Pintu coz she loved his sweet nature first.

But both eventually parted knowing that somehow the ice btw them had finally been broken and after that they both where much more comfortable with each another. They texted each another at first but than Pintu started calling her during the day when she told him no1 was around or she was alone in her room and eventually their conversation turned more personal.

So beautiful to have moved from a matter of fact conversation to being and feeling secure in sharing your thoughts. Prishna - you were adorable!- i didnt know that i was actually doing that but thats the magic of prishna and their friendship and ease with one another that came across so beautifully on screen that if u write a proper scene about them u cnt help bt bring that connection in.

A brilliant OS which I loved so much that my comment has been too long...
Wonderful Sandia...👏

Shanti I throughly enjoyed reading your comments I have to say that not even my ff's have been so beautifully analyzed and happy u enjoyed reading it


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Posted: 12 years ago
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And here is my gift for you - which might be distraction for those around!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, wow, wow and wow absolutely beautiful. Love the siggie and it's beauty is very distracting.
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Originally posted by: sandiab

Wow, wow, wow and wow absolutely beautiful. Love the siggie and it's beauty is very distracting.


You are welcome...
I was distracted making it as well!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, what an amazing OS !!!! love it from the beginning to the end 👏 there are romance, fun ... well, all things that I like. Our Prishna is too cute, love the way they relationship had progressed from the discomfort btw them to the attraction which lead them to love. It's just mindblowing Sandia 👍🏼 . I completely agree with Shanti's analysis which is very well thought out and love your siggie also .😉 Well done ⭐️
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Love this OS Sandia, Idk why I haven't commented on it yet, but I love it :D

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