Prishna & Gudiya SS - Update on Page 3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Ragvir_Prishna

I wanted to see scenes of Prishna and their Gudiya too, I'm soo happy that your writing scenes of them Fiza, now I can imagine them, can't wait for you to update the first scene =)

Originally posted by: nivrenZS

Thanx fizu cute family pic.

Originally posted by: Rozey17

Thanks Fiza 😃Looking forward to reading ur SS, i jjst love Prishna and their little Gudiya, just wish we could have seen more of that, i just miss AB 😭, but thanks u Fiza for bring ur SS

Originally posted by: jasviren

Wow !!! Thank u Fizu 🤗 Eagerly waiting for ur update 😳

loved ur creation of Prishna n their Angel. Missing Pintu, Prishna and their Angel a lot 😭

Sorry for late reply Fizu

@Moni... Waiting for ur update also 😉

Fizu cnt wait to read the scene.

Originally posted by: sandiab

Fizu cnt wait to read the scene.

Finally posting my first scene of Prishna and their Gudiya SS, I hope you all like it 😳

Pinto came home from work all tired, he got out of his car and was entering the Singh Mansion, as soon as he stepped in the first thing he heard was his Gudiya crying, he got really worried and rushed upstairs to his room to check, he forgot about his tiredness and reached his room to see Krishna and Sonu trying to stop Gudiya from crying. He was relived to see everyone alright and walked over to them, he put his hand on Krishna's shoulder who looked up at him and smiled, she says "Look Pinto Ji, we can't stop her from crying, we tried nearly everything but she doesn't seem to stop crying" Pinto replies "Hmm, I know let me try" and was about to pick her up when Sonu says "Chachu, what are you going to do? Me and Chachi tried everything but she's still crying"

Pinto smiles at Sonu and replies "Sonu Babu, just watch how I calm your little sister down" Pinto picks his Gudiya up and smiles at her, he walks around with her and the baby stops crying, Krishna and Sonu look at each other surprised, they had tried nearly everything but they couldn't and finally Pinto did. Pinto turns around to Krishna and Sonu and says "See she stopped crying as soon as she came to me, isn't that right my Gudiya" and looks at his Gudiya who was playing with his Shades. Gudiya looks up at her dad and replies something in baby language and only she could understand and Prishna and Sonu smile at this.

Pinto takes Gudiya and goes to sit next to Krishna and Sonu. Gudiya is sitting comfortably on his lap and Sonu is making her smile. Prishna look at the Brother and Sister and smile, they look at each other and couldn't stop smiling, they were really happy with their perfect and complete family, and then Krishna gets up and tells Pinto to take care of Gudiya and Sonu while she helps out in the kitchen as it's nearly dinner time. Pinto nods in approval and smiles at her, he replies to her "Ok Krishna, you go help Ma in the Kitchen and you don't need to worry about our Gudiya and Sonu, I will take care of them" Krishna smiles and heads off downstairs while Pinto, Sonu and Gudiya play together.

Pinto lets Gudiya crawl around on the bed and play with Sonu, Gudiya had taken Pinto's Shades and was playing with it with Sonu, she pushes the Shades towards Sonu and starts crawling around on the bed, and Sonu kept rushing to different sides of the bed to prevent Gudiya from falling. Sonu then looks at Pinto and says "Chachu, where are Gudiya's toys?" Pinto looks at Sonu and replies "Sonu they're in the cupboard, wait I'll get them out for you" and stands up to take them out and Sonu replies "That's Ok Chachu, I'll get all my toys for her to play with" and with that he takes out the toys from the cupboard. Pinto smiles and watches Sonu play with his Gudiya; he gets up and goes to Gudiya, he picks her up and says "Gudiya, do you know you got beautiful eyes like your mum's, you made mine and Krishna's life even better" and kisses her lightly on the forehead, Gudiya lets out a small giggle and Pinto smiles at this.

Sonu sees that one of Gudiya's toy was broken, he tells Pinto "Chachu, look this one is broken" Pinto looks at it and places it away from Sonu and Gudiya, he says to Sonu "Sonu, I will get more toys for her and you to play with" Sonu smiles and says "Thank you Chachu, I'll go get my toys as well so Gudiya can play with them" and goes to get all his toys, few seconds later he comes in running with all his toys and Sontu spread out all of the toys on the carpet. Pinto places Gudiya on the floor and they all start playing with the toys. Krishna comes in and just admires the sight, she sees Pinto, Sonu and Gudiya playing together and couldn't help but stop and admire the scene, she came to call them for Dinner but didn't want to ruin the moment, suddenly she hears Ganga calling from downstairs which was heard by Sontu and Gudiya too, they looked up to see Krishna and Krishna says to them "Pinto Ji, Sonu you need to come down for Dinner, give me Gudiya I'll take care of her, I need to feed her as well" Pinto and Sonu collect all the toys and Pinto hands Gudiya to Krishna and they all head downstairs.

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Fiza, why didn't you apply as a writer for AB, I think the serial would still be on.👏