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Posted: 12 years ago
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I had actually started this OS about a month and a half ago but than the pregnancy news
and than the news ab the show ending just put me of writing but in btw there have been some really beautiful ff and os by our forum members and i just had to try and finish it. So 2 things there is going to be a scene that is going to be missing from here and thats coz that part will be my 1st besharam scene so dnt get confused u havent missed anything. secondly remember when Sikka had sent her men to threaten whilst she was coming from work this is my take as to what could have happened next.
Krishna was totally exhausted and was hiding behind a tree with a stick in her hand which she had broken from a tree to defend herself if any1 found her. She had been coming from work when she noticed that Sikka's men had blocked the road up ahead with their vans. She had just gotten out of her bdo car to confront them when Pintu had called her on her cell and she told him what was happening. He told her he was a few minutes away from where she was and would come right away and that she should go back to the car and wait for him Krishna got angry at this and said that she could manage on her own. But he said if u don't care about your own safety than think about what would happen to me if anything happened to u. She went quiet than and took note of her surrounding , how deserted and remote the road was and how menacing the men looked and realised that if she carried on forward and those men did anything to her Pintuji would come and give them a beating and he could get hurt. So even though it was against her nature to back away she said she would go back to the car and phone for help and wait for him to come as she turned she saw that more men had gathered around her bdo car. She told her driver who was with her that they needed to get away from there and that they should run through the trees and hide from the men and he told her that they should go in different direction to confuse the men and she agreed.

In total exhaustion she had finally found this spot and had hidden at one point she had heard the voices of the men telling each other how they where looking forward to finding her and tearing her skin of her body as a memento for Sikka. As they carried on planning what they would do to her, to prevent herself from screaming she shut her eyes praying that pintu would find her soon so much so that she had been unaware that the men had gone. So when she felt a touch on her shoulder she got so scared that she blindly turned to hit the person with the stick pintu managed to grab her hand and said it was him and she finally looked at him properly with tears rolling down her face and hugged him. When pintu had come to the place krishna had told him she was at and saw that she was nowhere in site he was totally terrified with the thoughts of what they could have done to her but he had luckily seen Krishna driver and ran after him.

They held each another for a while but Pintu knew that they where still in danger and they needed too keep on moving until they reached safety and he told her so. He touched her face gently and told her that nothing would happen to her and everything would be fine now and she nodded but as they turned to leave they saw Sikka's men there. Pintu protectively went and stood in front of Krishna and as the men where slowly coming forward told her to keep out of sight and went forward. They all where coming at him from different sides and Pintu just pushed, punched and kicked as many as he could but he hadn't seen that one of them was coming at him with a knife until Krishna screamed and told him to watch out and he managed to move just in time. After that the numbers game became too much and the men started beating him up and Krishna could no longer hold back as she watched this happen and she blindly picked up whatever she could find on the floor and started throwing it at the man and screamed for them to leave him alone as tears fell from her face. But the men carried on hitting him and when she couldn't find anything to hit them with she went and bit the one mans hand so hard that she could taste blood and the man screamed and pushed her to the ground. He looked at her with blood shot eyes as he held his hand.

Pintu saw that Krishna was on the ground and one of the men was going towards her and with superhuman effort started to fight back and when he had fought them of he ran and pushed the man from behind to the ground. The man after a few seconds managed to wakeup and as he brushed the dirt from his face Pintu said if u where so desperate for a fight there was no need to attack defenceless girls all u needed to do was ask and I would have obliged u and motioned with his hands for him to come. The man immediately tried to punch him but Pintu caught his fist in his hand and whilst twisting it punched him in the face so hard that blood oozed out of his month. He continued punching him on his face until he was almost lifeless and Krishna knew that if she didn't stop him that he would kill the man so screamed for him to stop. When he didn't she went and touched his shoulder and told him to stop and he did. Pintu was still finding it hard to control his emotions he knew that if it wasn't for Krishna he would have killed the man he had gone out of his mind as he saw her lying on the floor and that man advancing towards her wanting to harm her. Krishna put her other hand on his chest and told everything would be ok and they would be fine and just like before the same words that had comforted her this time the words calmed him down. He finally managed to get control of himself and he looked at her and touched her face and as she smiled he couldn't help but smile back in relief and they hugged. As they heard the groans of the men they both knew that they needed to go and as pintu removed his hand from her shoulder he saw there was a little blood on her blouse and with alarm asked her if she was hurt and she said no and he told her to check and she checked and saw that it was just a small cut and said it was nothing to worry about and she had probably got it whilst running through the trees. At first he wasn't convinced but she smiled and said that she won't lie to him and she hadn't even been aware of it until he saw it so not to worry. Krishna could see the anger building up again in him and so took his hand and started walking telling him that every1 must be worried about them and they should hurry and get out of there.

Prishna where alone in a beautiful room Krishna was on the phone speaking to his family and Pintu was sitting on a sofa watching her. After walking for miles they had finally come across this house and the wonderful couple who owned it Dev and Kulsum Patel. After they had told them what had happened to them the Patels had refused to allow them to leave even though Krishna had found out that the police had captured most of Sikka's men. The Patels had just been so caring and loving that prishna couldn't say no and decided to stay.

After a while of watching Krishna speaking to every1 pintu couldn't help but think that he was finally going to get some undisturbed moments with her. But when Krishna hung up she smiled at him and said that they should freshen up and go and see if the Patels needed any help and the smile disappeared from his face as she spoke. He was just about to follow her when he got an idea and he started holding his stomach and said that it was paining and Krishna immediately rushed to his side and took him to the bed and said she would go and get help. Pintu grabbed her hand and said there was no need for all that, that it might just be bruises he had from the fight and she maybe she could rub some ointment on it and said that maybe they had a first aid kit in the bathroom with something they could use. She nodded and rushed into the bathroom he couldn't help but smile thinking how brilliant he was as he waited for her return. Krishna finally found the kit and found some ointment to put on him and came back in the room and when she looked at him he closed his eyes as if in pain Krishna looked at him worriedly and hated seeing him this way. As she looked at his face and saw slight bruises there as well she went back to the bathroom and got a bowl of water and a cloth and came and sat on the bed next to him.

She said Pintu and he slowly opened his eyes I found the ointment to rub for u and he smiled at her and lifted his shirt and she looked at his body and saw that he had a few bruises and she felt like crying. It had all started as a joke to keep her near him but when he saw the tears in her eyes he felt bad and was about to tell her so when she touched him, her gently touch felt like nothing he had ever felt before. It felt with each place she touched and left she left traces of fire and it was beyond his control and he couldn't utter a word. She then went close to his skin and blow on the parts that she had rubbed the ointment on and kissed each spot. When Pintu felt her breath was on his skin the last bit of control he had snapped and in her innocent as she brought her lips to his skin a passion that was hidden for days came to the fore and was evident in his eyes. As for Krishna she kissed his skin in the moment as she would have done for child who had been hurt but the moment her lips touched his skin everything changed. She had not yet touched him in such an intimate way before and the feel of his skin on her mouth was so soft and inviting that she wished that she could kiss him all over. Krishna was shocked at her thoughts and had to steady herself before looking at pintu so she turned and got the cloth to clean his wounds but the instant she looked into his the look of passion that was reflected there stole her breath away coz she knew that she had the same feelings as well. So with shaky hands she forced herself to put the wet cloth on his face and clean it and with each second that passed and they looked deeper into each another eyes it felt like everything had stopped. Krishna could no longer maintain the look and was turning when he caught her hand and as he held her hand he got up and went behind her. Their eyes met through the mirror that they both faced and neither wanted to speak afraid that the moment would break and they would never get it back. So without looking away from her face he slowly ran his hand down her arm and eventually down to her hand where she had the cloth and noticing how she shuddered against his touch but never lowered her eyes. At first he just put his hand over hers and than their fingers intertwined and sunk deeper into the bed he than removed the cloth from her hand and he couldn't help but smile as he saw the disappointment on her face as his hand left hers.

His hands moved to her shoulder and as he looked at her he gentle started moving her blouse down her shoulder he expected to see confusion and wonderment mirrored in her eyes but all he saw was trust and he felt at that moment that he was the luckiest man in the world. Krishna for the first time lowered her eyes as she smiled with tears in her eyes she hadn't wondered what he was doing since she trusted him but she had still been taken by surprise when he had put the wet cloth on her shoulder and than the ointment. She had totally forgotten about the cut she had on her shoulder and she couldn't believe that he had remembered after the day that they had. At that moment she closed her eyes and thanked god for giving her the best husband in the world.

Pintu couldn't help himself and he brought his lips to her skin and kissed the place where the scratch was and he allowed his lips to stay there for a few seconds. But then he became hesitant he remembered what had happened on their wedding night and didn't want to upset her and was about to move away when she learned closer to him. Krishna had immediately felt him withdrawing from her and didn't want that to happen so she went closer to him and when she was as close as she could get to him she slowly turned her face to his and touched his face. Pintu closed his eyes the moment she touched him, he had waited for this moment so long that he just wanted to feel her touch and he needed nothing else. Krishna touched his face almost as if in a trance like she had never seen him before his forehead, temple, his perfect eyelids and than his lips and each place she touched she wanted to kiss. As she continued to touch his lips she leaned gentle and kissed him lightly on the lips he was so surprised at this gesture that he opened his eyes and when he did Krishna realised want she had done. She was about to back away when he put his 1 hand on her head and the other on her waist and kissed her properly and as he did so he slowly lowered her on the bed. But just than there was a knock on the door neither wanted to stop but neither could they continue and Pintu with a groan put his face in the neap of her neck and Krishna just touched his head and smiled and said we have to answer. He looked at her than and said I will go but before he left her he kissed her lightly again on her lips and ran to see who was at the door.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww that was such a great OS, I see the title is Part 1 so I am eagerly waiting for Part 2, that was a bit besharam as well ☺️ 😉 😃 😳
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Wow wow wow, so much passion, omg, that was totally amazing, will probably read a million times more, thanks,,,, wow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really beautiful part of OS. So passionate Completely loved it continue soon dear. I
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh Sandiab why do u tease us like this, this was a fantastic OS am so looking forward to part two.
As i was reading the last part i was like please no one knock on this door, but what a build up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The perfect one to keep us going...Thanks for this brilliant stuff!😊
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OMG !! What u did Sandia 😲 . This left me SPEECHLESS .It had so much love , passion in it that I don't have words to write for it's appreciation . U are such a beautiful Writer and amazing with words . Just AWESOME dear 👏 . Oh !! I can't wait for Part 2

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