Prishna New FF: Qabool Hai - Chapter 5 Pg 18

sandiab

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Posted: 12 years ago

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scream that was such an excellent chapter fiza i loved each and every part of it and i could just imagine the anger and concern that pintu would have. i just loved that part when he carries her i so hope that we see somthing like that here. and i just love the last part when they both falls asleep. cnt u update again for us just loved it. and thanks for the pm

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nehashtha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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absolutely lovely...😊waiting what will happen afterwards...lots of romance😉

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Fiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandiab
scream that was such an excellent chapter fiza i loved each and every part of it and i could just imagine the anger and concern that pintu would have. i just loved that part when he carries her i so hope that we see somthing like that here. and i just love the last part when they both falls asleep. cnt u update again for us just loved it. and thanks for the pm

Thanks Sandia, I'm really glad you liked it soo much, and I'm glad you could imagine all the stuff I tried to show and will update again soon, when I get the other chapter done 😳

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Fiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: nehashtha
absolutely lovely...😊waiting what will happen afterwards...lots of romance😉

Thanks Ashtha and yep a whole lot of romance coming up 😉 😳

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Fiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: pavi_19
luv it

Thanks Pavi, I'm glad you liked it 😳

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Taahir

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Fizu now this is what I call a piece of writers art , truely mesmerising this part was so interesting captivating wow you truely cannot make me wait too long for the next part.

I like how you have sketched Pinto's character so yeah it was very interesting

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Fiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: taahir004
Fizu now this is what I call a piece of writers art , truely mesmerising this part was so interesting captivating wow you truely cannot make me wait too long for the next part.

I like how you have sketched Pinto's character so yeah it was very interesting

Thank you soo much Taahir and I'll try to update soon 😃 😳 and thank you for liking how I sketched Pinto's Charater. 😳

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Fiza - It would be great if we get an update today - at least a short one!!!! please...😊

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Ragvir_Prishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow wow wow, what a great chapter, Pinto kidnaps Krishna, I hope you give a lot of romance in this, this is one awesome chapter, do continue soon please =)

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Fiza

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Posted: 12 years ago

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