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Posted: 18 years ago
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conti from page 1........

Sandeep... mujh se kuch galti hogayee.... urmi shakes her head.. nahi.....
Sandeep.......idhar dakho.......urmi nahi.........
Sandeep.. i want to tell u something........ urmis heart sinks more..she thinks..OhGod no...... plz dont ask me to stay for ur wedding..........i cant....just cant... ill die............and a tear rolls down urmis cheek, 😭 and sandep quickly catches it in his palm
and says... ab main is ko kahaan rakhoon.........urmi tries to take the tear but he quickly pockets it.........and says, its mine now..........
Urmi looks up at him in confusion...........Sandeep has this mischief smile on his face which urmi cant predict whats going on in his mind..............and shes staring in his eyes and he in her.........sigh............ and suddenly the taxis horn is sounded......... cutting the silence and the bring them both to earth... urmi turns to go saying... bye...
but she is abrutly stopped... sandeeps hand grabs her wrist ....stopping her .....i wont let u go.....
Urmi says, why not???.....Sandeep...I have to ans ur so many questions... then only u can go.......Urmi asks, what qs.. he said.... everyday u ask me qs and eat my brain... well now is the time to ans them..........first......... yes i want to
get married... but not too soon........after sometime......when im ready for it......... do u understand that?... Urmi.. hmmm...nods.....Urmis heart sinks more... I dont want to hear this plz........Sandeep... second , yes i do see a chavi of
my preetam....... and urmi looks up to him....still confused....................tears now rolling down her cheeks
Sandeep.... plz dont cry , icant see ur tears.. and how will u see my chavi if u keep on crying like that....... Urmi , i dont want to see ur chavi.... let go of my hand............i want to go...........Sandeep.. yes u can go.. but first u must meet my chavi..........(hehehehe) (do u want me to continue).........

Urmi is trying to free her hand.. but Sandeep is holding it tight... ouch u hurting me... sandeep... sorry... dont try to free it. i wont let u go unless u see my chavi.............. urmi closes her eyes tight... I wont see her and u cant make
me......strange thoughs are going through urmis head...... sandeep smiles and holding her hand leads her near the table...... urmis eyes r still close... sandeep stood behind her n whispers in her ear.... open ur eyes...... urmi shivers......... n says noo........... Sandeep ... plz for my
sake..........Urmi slowly opens her eyes and sees that she is in front of a mirror and all she can see is herself and sandeep in the mirror............Still confused she looks in Sandeeps eyes..........he had a strange look on his face n his
eyes were shining... urmi had never seem him like this before...............sandeep smiled and the min he smiled urmis head snapped.... she turned to face him and said angrily .........r u making fun of me........tears running hard now...

sandeep........... .noooo.........why do u say that????? U r my preetam ki chavi.........Urmi.... no im not... i know for sure u
dont love me...... Sandeep.......You know i dont love u, but i know for sure that i love u❀️......... (sighhhhh!!!!!!!!!!)( Arent we
dying to hear these 3 words from Sandeep babus lips???).......urmi...sacheee............sandeep.. nods ... urmi smiles .. still looking in to each others eyes....... eye talking.......
and then they hug... and she is crying more....... sandeep... now y r u crying........ cause i cant belive it....... Sandeep... well is it only one side love or what???? Urmi looks up to him and says what???? (aik tu urmi ko kyee baat samaj main hi nahi aati..............) Sandeep........ do u love me or not............Urmi yes... i do love you... a lot❀️....... Sandeep......breaths a sigh of relief............are you still going to go , leaving me all alone.........Urmi .. no . never.. and
then they hug ❀️ and together they go down and they send the taxi wala away........... Everyone is happy that urmi is not going... but noone knows the reason why....ONLY zoya and jugle knows what has happened..........They all know
that Sandeep can solve any problem. πŸ‘ ........Sandeep looks at jugle as if thanking him..........eye talk.......... and the 3
dewanas looking at jugle..... what has jugle done that they dont know off πŸ˜• ...(Jugle ki khair hai) πŸ˜† .......Sandeep then turned and looked at
urmi and their eyes talking......... hmmmm.........and from here on their love affair starts...............they decide to keep it a
secret for sometime..........till they both are ready to tell the world about their love..................... 😍
Edited by Fazila~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Honey and Fazila... you both did a great job πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I felt so good after reading both the versions 😳 😊 ... hope next episode will be like this... why these makers don't visit here and get some ideas from you guys πŸ˜• ... or maybe they do πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› ... let's see if they do... but I feel good already 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Fazila~

conti from page 1........

Sandeep... mujh se kuch galti hogayee.... urmi shakes her head.. nahi.....
Sandeep.......idhar dakho.......urmi nahi.........
Sandeep.. i want to tell u something........ urmis heart sinks more..she thinks..OhGod no...... plz dont ask me to stay for ur wedding..........i cant....just cant... ill die............and a tear rolls down urmis cheek, 😭 and sandep quickly catches it in his palm
and says... ab main is ko kahaan rakhoon.........urmi tries to take the tear but he quickly pockets it.........and says, its mine now..........
Urmi looks up at him in confusion...........Sandeep has this mischief smile on his face which urmi cant predict whats going on in his mind..............and shes staring in his eyes and he in her.........sigh............ and suddenly the taxis horn is sounded......... cutting the silence and the bring them both to earth... urmi turns to go saying... bye...
but she is abrutly stopped... sandeeps hand grabs her wrist ....stopping her .....i wont let u go.....
Urmi says, why not???.....Sandeep...I have to ans ur so many questions... then only u can go.......Urmi asks, what qs.. he said.... everyday u ask me qs and eat my brain... well now is the time to ans them..........first......... yes i want to
get married... but not too soon........after sometime......when im ready for it......... do u understand that?... Urmi.. hmmm...nods.....Urmis heart sinks more... I dont want to hear this plz........Sandeep... second , yes i do see a chavi of
my preetam....... and urmi looks up to him....still confused....................tears now rolling down her cheeks
Sandeep.... plz dont cry , icant see ur tears.. and how will u see my chavi if u keep on crying like that....... Urmi , i dont want to see ur chavi.... let go of my hand............i want to go...........Sandeep.. yes u can go.. but first u must meet my chavi..........(hehehehe) (do u want me to continue).........

Urmi is trying to free her hand.. but Sandeep is holding it tight... ouch u hurting me... sandeep... sorry... dont try to free it. i wont let u go unless u see my chavi.............. urmi closes her eyes tight... I wont see her and u cant make
me......strange thoughs are going through urmis head...... sandeep smiles and holding her hand leads her near the table...... urmis eyes r still close... sandeep stood behind her n whispers in her ear.... open ur eyes...... urmi shivers......... n says noo........... Sandeep ... plz for my
sake..........Urmi slowly opens her eyes and sees that she is in front of a mirror and all she can see is herself and sandeep in the mirror............Still confused she looks in Sandeeps eyes..........he had a strange look on his face n his
eyes were shining... urmi had never seem him like this before...............sandeep smiled and the min he smiled urmis head snapped.... she turned to face him and said angrily .........r u making fun of me........tears running hard now...

sandeep........... .noooo.........why do u say that????? U r my preetam ki chavi.........Urmi.... no im not... i know for sure u
dont love me...... Sandeep.......You know i dont love u, but i know for sure that i love u❀️......... (sighhhhh!!!!!!!!!!)( Arent we
dying to hear these 3 words from Sandeep babus lips???).......urmi...sacheee............sandeep.. nods ... urmi smiles .. still looking in to each others eyes....... eye talking.......
and then they hug... and she is crying more....... sandeep... now y r u crying........ cause i cant belive it....... Sandeep... well is it only one side love or what???? Urmi looks up to him and says what???? (aik tu urmi ko kyee baat samaj main hi nahi aati..............) Sandeep........ do u love me or not............Urmi yes... i do love you... a lot❀️....... Sandeep......breaths a sigh of relief............are you still going to go , leaving me all alone.........Urmi .. no . never.. and
then they hug ❀️ and together they go down and they send the taxi wala away........... Everyone is happy that urmi is not going... but noone knows the reason why....ONLY zoya and jugle knows what has happened..........They all know
that Sandeep can solve any problem. πŸ‘ ........Sandeep looks at jugle as if thanking him..........eye talk.......... and the 3
dewanas looking at jugle..... what has jugle done that they dont know off πŸ˜• ...(Jugle ki khair hai) πŸ˜† .......Sandeep then turned and looked at
urmi and their eyes talking......... hmmmm.........and from here on their love affair starts...............they decide to keep it a
secret for sometime..........till they both are ready to tell the world about their love..................... 😍

fazila,become a writer!!!!u r great,kya story liki hain.tum fan fiction kyun nahin likhti.its great.keep it up!!!!!πŸ‘

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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: arvanu

good ones friends,do continue,it feels great!!!!!!!i was really imagining these scenes. 😳

Yeah come on arvanu......please write a scene as well. I would love to read it.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvanu

fazila,become a writer!!!!u r great,kya story liki hain.tum fan fiction kyun nahin likhti.its great.keep it up!!!!!πŸ‘

Yeah she is really good, I think that we should all try to convince her to start a fan fic. I would love to read it.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fazi you are GREAT!!!! Seriously this just the best scene ever. I think that we should print it out and send it to the writers of ACHPM and this is how the confession scene should be............you are tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oo good.

Now you wanna know what I am thinking....you shoul start a fan fic. You are really talented and I know that everyone would love to read your fan fic. Please consider it our dear and sweet fazi.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: purva

Honey and Fazila... you both did a great job πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I felt so good after reading both the versions 😳 😊 ... hope next episode will be like this... why these makers don't visit here and get some ideas from you guys πŸ˜• ... or maybe they do πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› ... let's see if they do... but I feel good already 😊

hey!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for taking ou thte time to read it.........😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvanu

no....... i m no writer.... it was just a fluke......thanks for reading it and liking it......... imm think about fan fiction :)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey425

Fazi you are GREAT!!!! Seriously this just the best scene ever. I think that we should print it out and send it to the writers of ACHPM and this is how the confession scene should be............you are tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oo good.

Now you wanna know what I am thinking....you shoul start a fan fic. You are really talented and I know that everyone would love to read your fan fic. Please consider it our dear and sweet fazi.

thanks a lot for reading it... i wrote it cause of u...... so all credit goes to u... ill thnk about fan fic.. im busy for next 10 days... i hsouldnt be here........but im am....:(....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh my god..i didn't read this....how fantastic is this.....you guys write really well....

You've written so much as well!!! πŸ˜ƒ


Seriously well done!

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