KrisHika story WRITTENIN OUR STARS ~ Part 4 updated.

My exams just got over today and i was sitting idle and @blueflames' OS made me feel like writing something so here it is.
Dk what to call it - Fanfic or Short Story or OS. U can choose whatever u like 😉
A kindof imagination on how the story will pan into the present, just after the current track of 100 years narration.
Its a lil long, so please bare with me.
Chappals welcome before hand itself.
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"Aur yeh vajah thi us shrap ki. Tumhe kuch toh yaad hoga Manu, kuch toh yaad hoga?" Devsena asked Radhika, shaking her a bit to bring her back to the present. Radhika was completely lost in her past.
With tears in her eyes, she collected herself.
"Aaj toh khud Yuvraj Madhav bhi yahan the Manu!"
She was shocked. A tear just slipped down her eye. She then pulled Smriti and Shridhar.
"Bahut raat ho chuki hai. Ab main chalti hoon." Radhika said.
"Par documentary ka kya Radhika?" her friends exclaimed while she pulled them away.
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They stood on the road.
"Yaar ab rehne ke liye jagah kahan dhunde?" Shridhar asked.
An old man came to them.
"Garudeshwar mandir ke paas hi ek ghar hai. Bandh pada hai 20 saalon se. Uski chabiyan padosiyon ke paas zaroor hogi. Aap chahe toh wahan ek raat ke liye reh sakte hain." He told them.
Radhika didn't want to go but because of her two mates, she decided to stay there the night.
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They opened the door and walked in the dark house. They switched on the lights. It was badly kept, but they decided to stay there for the night.
They entered one of the rooms, which was scattered with pieces of wooden furniture n glass pieces. Radhika was shocked to see a mirror with writing on it which read - Manu Kahan Ho Tum? She remembered the visual she had imagined - Madhav breaking the glass. But she couldn't believe it. Madhav of her visualisation looked like that arrogant guy who saved her at the cliff.
"Aisa nahi ho sakta!" she exclaimed.
"Yeh bilkul Radhika ke bachpan ki photo lagti hai." her friends were conversing.
She looked at the photo and said, "Meri bhi aisi hi photo hai. Bui maa usse hamesha apne paas rakhti hai." But then she realised what she was saying. She could feel herself related to Manu, but she didn't want to connect herself anymore.
"Par Radhika, tujhe woh dance kaise aata hai?" Smriti asked.
She was speechless.
"Aur waise, woh jo aadmi jisne tujhe girne se bachaya, woh kitna handsome tha."
"Kaun woh ameer shirt pant wala?" Shridhar asked.
"Haan. Kya mast dikhta hai woh banda. Kash uska naam, pata, kuch toh mil jata."
"Mujhe kisne girne se bachaya? Main theek toh thi?" Radhika pretended. She thought they had seen her with the man on the cliff.
"Oh madam. Aaj tera sar hi phoot gaya hota agar woh nahi aata sahi time par, tujhe behosh hokar girne se bachane.
Waise pata nahi woh aurat usse Yuvraj Madhav kyun bula rahi thi. Smriti asked.
Radhika's eyes widened. She turned and asked Smriti, "Kaun that woh? Kaisa dikhta tha?"
"Yaar tu toh chad hi rahi hai mujhpe?" Smriti said jokingly.
Radhika calmed.
"Acha dikhta hai. Choti ankhein, lambi height, daari bhi thi uski thodi si, aur woh ekdum fit banda tha."
All Radhika could imagine was the man who saved her from falling at the cliff. In front of her was the flashback, how Krissh saved her, and how they had an eyelock. She was puzzled. She wondered why she saw him as Madhav, and now him as the man who saved her in the temple. She had many questions in mind, and she was desperate to know their answers. Did she find her true love? Or did her past life actually exist?

This is sooo cute simple and to the point. 👏 👏
And I am glad someone came up with a story.
Mey akele pagal nahi 😆 😆

This is so good! I have a feeling that something like this could actually happen. Maybe something will happen forcing them to stay there.

Please keep writing more! 😊

This is cute<3 Loved it.

Wow its awesome 👏 i was lost in your os i was feeling that i m watching AKH in present track of krish radhika

Loved it..well written..😊

Hi everyone!
Thanku for all ur compliments...
I just tried a continuation for the story:
I really enjoyed writing it.
Really long
Give it a try maybe? 😉
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They slept on the hall floor last night. Next morning, Radhika woke up, and got dressed. She had a lot of difficulty in the bathroom because it wasn't that really clean, but she managed however.
Her friends also got ready after sometime and they went out, to a nearly tea stall to freshen up with tea. Just then they saw a bunch of jeeps leading and trailing a white car, getting into the broken lanes. From the white car, a well-suited man got down.
"Yehi hai na tera, hero!" Shridhar commented.
"Radhika dekh isko kitna sahi lagta hai." Smriti nudged Radhika.
Radhika was least bit interested in looking at the man. She constantly sipped tea from her glass. Just as her tea finished, she turned to look at the man (because of Smriti's constant irritation), and commented-
"In bodyguards mein se tera hero kaun hai?"
He had gone into the house.
Smriti hit her and said - Mera hero in bodyguards mein se koi nahi tha. Woh toh andar chala gaya. Woh tere dekhne ke liye thodi na wait karega!"
Radhika paid the tea-man and left. She could hear people murmering "Yeh Krissh sir hai na?" "Haan, Uttar Pradesh ke sabse ameer admi ke bete. Yeh apne Papa ka karobar sambhalenge!" and "Itne ameer hain, phir bhi hum gareeb logo ka kitna dhyaan rakhte hain." Radhika tried to look into the house among the crowd, to see who the man was. But in vain.
Smriti pulled her, and caught a tonga and left the place.
Radhika told the tangawala to take her to the Namishya Jungle, to the Nishidh shetra. The tangawala was surprised. He told her that no one could enter the area, but she was adamant to go there. So he took them there.
At the entrance:
Smriti n Shridhar refused to get in. She tried to convince them that it would help their documentary, but they still refused. So Radhika took the camcorder from Shridhar, and entered into the jungle, alone. Smriti and Shridhar were worried. They asked the tangawala to get in and help her, but he refused. There were some old people in the area, Shridhar asked them too for help, but they too refused. The tangawala asked them to stay calm, and assured that she'd be safe, because she was very confident of herself.
The royal cars parked in there. Krissh got down with his bodyguards trailing him. Smriti was happy to see Krissh, and Shridhar thought of a plan. He called out to Krissh "Excuse Me", but his bodyguards stopped him. One of his bodyguards told Shridhar that Krissh was in prayer and they could not disturb him until his prayer was over. Krissh entered the jungle, without shoes (in socks) with a lota in his hand, filled with milk.
Radhika walked carefully in the jungle. She was frightened by the noices. She wanted to feel the fright and somehow wanted to connect with whatever Devsena had told her about her past. She passed the tree where she was killed under, according to what she was told. She could visualise everything she saw in her dream. She was extremely frightened. She turned back and fell over a support. She opened her eyes and found, the man who saved her at the cliff. He was stern, rigid, with no expressions on his face. She was a bit relieved but then she scolded him - "Tum yahan kyun aaye? Kahin tum mera peecha nahi kar rahe? Main tumhari madad ke bina bhi reh sakti hoon."
He took her hand from his chest, moved it away and walked towards the tree silently.
He kneeled down, and poured the milk near the bark of the tree, slowly. Radhika saw this, and was shocked.
He got up, and commented - "Tum itni bewakoof thi, mujhe nahi pata tha."
Radhika's eyebrows raised.
"Itni bewakoof, matlab kya hai tumhara? Haan tum hi sabse intelligent ho."
"Tumhe shayad pata tha ki yeh jungle kitna unsafe hai, tumhe pata tha ki tum un pahadon se gir sakti thi, phir bhi tumne woh kaam kiya jo tumhe nahi karna chahiye tha. Aur phir kehti ho, ki main tumhara peecha kar raha hoon. Bewakoof nahi ho toh kya ho?" Krissh walked ahead.
"Tum mujhe aise bewakoof nahi bula sakta. Tum hote kaun ho?" Radhika walked ahead in speed, when suddenly her foot got stuck into the ground. She screamed for help.
Krissh stopped and looked behind. He immediately ran to help her. He initially tried to remove her foot from the hole, but in vain. So he commented, "Zameen ke ghade toh dikhte nahi, phir kehti ho tum bewakoof nahi ho?"
They tried harder, Radhika's foot was out, but her slipper got stuck in the hole, so Krissh lifted Radhika and walked towards the entrance again.
Radhika wanted to get down, but Krissh didn't leave her down. She kept hitting him. He held her, inspite of all her hittings to him.
She visualised all that she had seen in the past - Madhav carrying her the same way, away from Badi Amma, Manu's times in the jungle with Madhav, and Manu helping Madhav to take his foot out of the hole.
Shridhar and Smriti were sitting worried about Radhika in the tonga. Suddenly Smriti heard Radhika's voice. They sprang up from their seat, and were shocked to see Krissh bring Radhika out in his arms. Her took her till the tonga, and dropped her on the seat. He went to the entrance, wore his shoes, sat in his car, and drove away, leaving the driver and bodyguards behind.
Radhika kept yelling, "Tumne mujhe bewakoof kaise bulaya?", then stopped as his car left the place. Her friends sat in the tonga, shocked, and asked the tangawala to take them back to the house, near the Garud mandir.
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Omggg! Please carry this on! This is honestly really well written. Dying to read more! 😃

i can actually visualize all this happening 😆

Originally posted by: iSophiaMalik

Will there be a part 3?

Do u want a part 3? Ok, I'll make something! 😊