~Madhav & Manasvini OS - Stars and Moon~

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys
Long time no see...😆 I know i know this week hasnt been actually MnM sweet😆
I am dying of boredom too, but guess what happens when I am bored, I create imaginary scenes which then gets posted here as an OS.. Chalo now read and let me know how far streched is this 😉

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Lying on the ground in a small clearing on the forest, Manu says, "I just love these trees, the birds chirping, the sun shining"
"But I love the night, humey chand aur sitare ppasand hain", Madhav replies holding her hand, he continues "see this sun is too bright, it tries to compete with your beauty by burning itself".
Manu turns her side to see him gazing at her, she says "tmhari tabyat theek hai na?" And removes her hand from his and touches his forehead. Madhav catches her hand and takes it to his chest and places it on his heart and says "humari tabyat yahan se kharab hai, tmhare sath humari dharkan ka alag connection hai, tm pas nahi hoti tou ye pagal ho jati hai aur jb tm pas hoti ho tou ek alag sa sukoon hota hai"
Manu gets shy and bends her head down into the crook of his arm. Madhav smiles seeing her this close to her. Manu gets up and says "tm pagal ho Madhav, tmhe Blood pressure ki dawa ki zarurat hai, tm buddhe ho gaye ho, ye ek medical condition hai" and laughs at her own joke.
Madhav pulls her back down and says "agar hum buddhe ho gaye hain tou tmhe hi humara khayal rakhna hoga, warna hum mar ...... Manu places her hand on his mouth and doesn't let him complete the sentence. "Tmhe kuch nahi hoga Madhav, I will always be with you". "Hum yehi suna chahte the", madhav quips back.
Manu gets conscious and tries to change the topic, she says "tmhe chand aur sitare itne pasand hain par woh tou sirf raat ko ate hain, tm din mey kia karo ge?"
Madhav replies "hum yuvraj hain,I can even see them in daylight."
"Woh kaise?" Manu asks batting her eyelashes at his audacity of being a yuvraj.
Madhav pulls her duppata and spreads it over both of them, and says "the shiny sparkle of your dupatta are the stars and your face is my moon", Manu gets shy and dazed by his action and confession, how he deeply he felt for her. Madhav holds her face and brings her closer, Manu gets conscious of their proximity and second guesses his intentions, pushes him away and gets up to run away.. Madhav calls her she just turns smiles at him and starts running, Madhav runs his hand in hair and smiles at the bliss they share and gets up to chase her...

The end



Rocks and chappals are welcome🤗
Apologies for wasting your time with inane things.

@NeiraLover i wanted to write something romantic but abhi yeh cheesy dupatta romance se kaam chalo. 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u so much for this romantic os 👏 haye madhav and manu so much in love 😳 and our madhav is romance king 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dibanzira

Thank u so much for this romantic os 👏haye madhav and manu so much in love 😳and our madhav is romance king😛



Thank you 🤗
No doubt Madhav is romance King.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWW so sweet
even i love this madhav
hehe
totally
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Asking rocks towards the end of the OS was completely a mood spoiler! 😆
This story is so mind blowing, i'm literally like in the virtual fangirl mode how did u even think we'll throw chappals like really? 😉
Gr8 job keep writing! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I also feel like writing something dayum this is really good!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks you so much for writing such a beautiful piece.

Loved it. This one is for you!!!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonikaaax

Asking rocks towards the end of the OS was completely a mood spoiler! 😆
This story is so mind blowing, i'm literally like in the virtual fangirl mode how did u even think we'll throw chappals like really? 😉
Gr8 job keep writing! 👏


A writer is always on a thin line, one has no idea how the story would Be recieved.
Waise aise cheesy stuff par 😆😆 I expected some rocks..
I am glad you liked it. Amazing response 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

Thanks you so much for writing such a beautiful piece.


Loved it. This one is for you!!!!





Aww thank you for the bear.
I am glad you liked it. 😊

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