~Madhav & Manasvini OS - Abhi Na Jao~

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys
The boring and anxiety filled weekend has taken a toll on me, when will the Monday come. he suspense is making me crazy.. and this craziness has resulted in an OS for MnM😉
without further delay please read.



"It's getting dark Madhav, I have to reach home before sunset", says Manu.
"There is still time why are you always running away from me", Madhav asks her.
"So what if I am running. You can never catch up to me", Manu replies and turns away to walk. Madhav grabs her hand and pulls her towards him and holds her in his firm grip. He looks into her eyes and says "Tm Humari ho Manasvini, aur Tm humey chor kar kabhi nahi jaa sakti". Manu cannot break the eye lock but gets uncomfortable by the intense gaze and grip and proximity with Madhav. They had been friends for ages but never did her heart dance like butterflies before. She gets herself together and pushes Madhav away. He falls back a bit, he pretends to be hurt when Manu says "serves you right". She turns away to go when she hears
"Abhi na jao chhod kar
Ke dil abhi bharaa nahi

Adhuri aas..
Adhuri aas chodke
Adhuri pyaas chodke
Jo roz yun hi jaaogi
To kis tarha nibhaogi
Ke zindigi ki rahon mein
Jawan dilon ki chaha mein
Kayee maqaam aayenge
Jo humko azmayenge

Nahin nahin nahin nahin
Ke dil abhi bhara nahin"

Manu is so lost in his voice that she doesn't realize that Madhav had stopped singing and was staring at her. He calls her and ask "where are you lost?" Manu continues in her dazed state says "do you even understand the meaning of this song, the poet has so beautifully etched the words that everything is said yet a lot left incomplete. Ye adhure words do pyaar karne walon ki Kahani hai"
Madhav looks at her and says "ye ishq pyar wali baatein humey smjh nahi ati. Humey bs tmhari dosti smjh ati hai". Manu looks at him and his innocent heart. She looks so dreamy that Madhav questions " Kahin Tmhe kisi se pyaar tou nahi hogay jo itni pyar bhari baatein arahi hai Tmhe?? Humey jawaab do Manu!!"
Manu sees that Madhav has gotten serious, she says "woh Madhav Meri zindagi mey ek woh..."
He asks again "Kia woh Kaun woh? Humey batao". He holds her arms.
She replies "meri zindagi mey ek Bandar hi kafi hai. Pyaar Aur mey naa Baba naa" she laughs and pushes him and runs toward home. Madhav smiles at her fading image. Says "tm sirf Humari ho Manu".



the end


Rocks and chappals are welcome🤗🤗
I know this is stupid. but mera ye nadaan dil Madhav aur Manu k pyaar mey pagal hogaya hai😆😆😆

waise bhi it sunday... more stupidity can come your way😳😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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No chappals dear 😛 i want to claps for u 👏 boz its so nice i can fell their amazing scene in your os keep it up 😳 and today is no boring day boz today laksh and mahima perfomance na on ITA
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..very well written..Loved it..
Do write more..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicely written dear...👏 I am glad you started writing OS...will wait for more...waise Manu ka Naa me bhi hame toh haan hi laga...Maadhav ka Tum sirf Hamari ho Manu...fully agreed...
Thanks for this...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dibanzira

No chappals dear😛i want to claps for u 👏 boz its so nice i can fell their amazing scene in your os keep it up😳and today is no boring day boz today laksh and mahima perfomance na on ITA



Hahaha thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. 😊
Has the telecast date been announced yet?? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow..very well written..Loved it..

Do write more..😛



Thank you so much.
I am glad you liked it.
Will surely write more as I am in obsessed mode zone 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vyoman

Nicely written dear...👏I am glad you started writing OS...will wait for more...waise Manu ka Naa me bhi hame toh haan hi laga...Maadhav ka Tum sirf Hamari ho Manu...fully agreed...

Thanks for this...🤗



Thank you so much for the appreciation 😊
I am glad you liked it.
Sirf humey hi naa haan lagti hai 😆 😆
MnM ko bhi aqal ajaye tou din sanwar jaye humare 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Only hugs to you for writing such a fantastic OS
🤗

You are a fabulous writer. Loved it.

Please do write more. Would love to read some intense romance too😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

Only hugs to you for writing such a fantastic OS

🤗

You are a fabulous writer. Loved it.

Please do write more. Would love to read some intense romance too😳


thank you sooo much 🤗
I am happy to see such positive response... more stuff is on its way😉
Intense romance story will definitely PM you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Hahaha thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. 😊
Has the telecast date been announced yet?? 😕


I don't think the telecast date has been announced yet but i hope they show it soon.

P.s. This OS was amazing. Please do write more 😊

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