OS : Cnt take my eyes off u(next part pg 2)

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

sandhya- DC ye tumhara fav theme music hain kya?
DC(his eyes closed)- hmmm.. mere funeral mein bhi yehi tone bajega (funeral dusnt mean that he is christian,just an expression used😊)
sandhya- DC?
DC-hmm? kya?
sandhya- nothing.. u sounded so strange...
DC- kuch nhi...? are dil mein kuch nhi rakhna chahiye.. shoot..
sandhya- wo baat hain ki... aap... woh...woh...
DC- oh god.. aab batao bhi... (smiles) kya baat hain?
sandhya- aap... kisiko miss kar rahe ho kya?
DC- haan.. roshni ko.. kyun?
sandhya- roshni ko? 😲
DC- hmm she was my only frnd here.. mujhe sabse zyaada samajhti thi...afar woh iswaqt yahan hoti... to... she wud have understood wats is exactly wrong with me...
sandhya- so.. wat is wrong with u?
DC- sandhya tum sawal itna kyun puch rahi ho? coffee peeogi? jao bobby ke saath kahin ghumkar aao.. meri gari lekar jao.. take a break...
sandhya- bt DC...
DC- okay mere saath jaogi? chalo fir..
he got up... sandhya said quickly- no no.. DC.. its okay.. i will manage... ok.. am leaving.. i wont disturb u... bye...
DC- bye...
she walked towards the door.. stopped for a second and turned back agen... then she smiled and said- waise DC.. i think i know whats ur problm...
DC looked at her bt didnt say a word...
sandhya- u r missing someone... very badly...
DC smiled back- jaoo...

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girls.. no .. stop stop.. u r doing it all wrong yar...
meenakshi threw away her scarf in anger...- wat the hell is ur prblm? aur kitna waqt loge? kal show hain aur aisa performance doge tumlog?
the dancers kept mum... meenakshi- this is gona be the last time ok? she was abt to show them the steps wen an attendant came to her with a phone and said- meenakshi tumhara call hain..
meenakshi(stretching)- kiska hain?
the attendan- pata nhi...
meenakshi took the phone- hello?
-hiii meenakshi kaisi ho?
meenakshi- kaun hain?
- wah.. meri awaz bhi bhul gayi?
meenakshi- sir.. itna sabkuch yaad nhi rehta mujhe.. bas apne danc steps yaad rakhti hoon.. so who r u?
-all the best for tomorrow... the line got cut...
meenakshi- hello? hello? kya yaar... she handed the phone to the attendant...

a hand switched on the TV... meenakshi was dancing... all her videos... her choreographed dances.. balleys and all.. meenakshi taking awards...
DC smiled to himself.. the song "cnt take my eyes off u" playing in the background...

the phone rang.. he picked it up- hello...
meenakshi- sir?
DC cudnt reply...
meenakshi- aapne call kiya tha?
DC- no...
meenakshi- aap mujhse milne aa sakte hain..
DC- no meenakshi.. i wont come... bt i will surely see ur performance...
meenakshi- par kyun?
DC- kyun ka koi jawab nhi hain meenakshi...
meenakshi- sir.. u made me...
DC- i tried to destroy u...
meenakshi- no sir.. u made me into what i am.. i have realised it.. without u.. i cudnt have been this...
DC- tum bht badal gayi ho.. kafi achi english bhi bol leti ho..
meenakshi smiled- badalna to sabko padta hain.. par aapke liye main hamesha wohi meenakshi rahungi...
DC- thanks... itna hi kafi hain...
meenakshi- aur...
DC- plzzz.. no more.. bye...

meenakshi put down the receiver and sighed... there was something between them... somthing.. which she cn neither explain nor expect... it was not anything like love or any kind of attraction... it was a bonding... a strange bond which generally exists between the creator and his creation... the creator is incomplete without his creation and so is the creation incomplete without her creator...
she missed him too... she loved akshat.. was happily married to him... bt... she cud nvr forget DC...

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Edited by kasturika_kashu - 13 years ago

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Shanti

@shanti05

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice one dear..

I still know DC can never harm Meenakshi... and that will always be there no matter what people think.. Quite a touching one, One day he will get his fair side of happiness.. And someone special for him...

It was quite touching and did make me cry for DC !😭

For me he is the man with the golden heart !😳👏

Edited by shanti05 - 13 years ago

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shanti05
Nice one dear..

I still know DC can never harm Meenakshi... and that will always be there no matter what people think.. Quite a touching one, One day he will get his fair side of happiness.. And someone special for him...

It was quite touching and did make me cry for DC !😭

thank u dear.. i dnt know the CVs will understand it or not.. bt i want something like this in this story... something intriguing... something unexplainable.. nt mere words or phrases bt something which probes us to think... think hard yet nvr find a solution...😳
t this usual boy getting girl thingy.. bt something much higher than that.. i want it to be realistic... multidimensional and not clear.. vague things are more ysterious...😉

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya2025
Beautiful Kasturi. :))

thank uuu 🤗

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BeverlyHills

@Arreyaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

wowww amazing do continue aahead...

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Voldemort033

@Voldemort033

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very nice...actually awesum kasturika, loved it...
i know DC will b always there for meenu no matter what,..and after finding the truth about DC, at first may b meenu gets angry but she will understand him, she has to understand him

I actually want a deep, unpredictable and mysterious love story of DC-meenu...but don't want to spoil actual concept of the show

As for now show is doing awesum, so im in no hurry for any love track b/w them, just want more DC-meenu scenes...they hardly show one or two

Edited by juwi - 13 years ago

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: juwi
Very nice...actually awesum kasturika, loved it...
i know DC will b always there for meenu no matter what,..and after finding the truth about DC, at first may b meenu gets angry but she will understand him, she has to understand him

I actually want a deep, unpredictable and mysterious love story of DC-meenu...but don't want to spoil actual concept of the show

As for now show is doing awesum, so im in no hurry for any love track b/w them, just want more DC-meenu scenes...they hardly show one or two

👍🏼 agree with each and everything u say... i am also at no hurry 😆 coz it tastes better when u r patient u know...😉 bt tho AKSHI is gud at this point of time.. it will become draging and a bore afterwards... so want variations and new twists u know in the life of meenu.. and DC falling for her is the best twist one cn have to garner TRPs...😉 also to make it more entertaining...😆

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Ekta

@SandCastle.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing OS Kasturi ! 😳

I mean it kind of showed wat cud happen in this Story ! It cud maybe 1 of the many possible tracks of ASA, has bright chances too ! I've always said that I dont want a Typical Angle between DC-Meenakshi though I wud Love a One-Sided Love thing obviously by DC's Side but in a Positive Way, Just like the 1 you showed in this OS ! It was really very touching & realistic @ the same time ! Realli I believe some relations r truly BEST wen unexplained, not evry relation shud have a name but @ the same time it cud be well, Special 😳 M in Awe of It ! Awesome Job ! 😳

Edited by ..Ektaa.. - 13 years ago

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ektaa..
Amazing OS Kasturi ! 😳

I mean it kind of showed wat cud happen in this Story ! It cud maybe 1 of the many possible tracks of ASA, has bright chances too ! I've always said that I dont want a Typical Angle between DC-Meenakshi though I wud Love a One-Sided Love thing obviously by DC's Side but in a Positive Way, Just like the 1 you showed in this OS ! It was really very touching & realistic @ the same time ! Realli I believe some relations r truly BEST wen unexplained, not evry relation shud have a name but @ the same time it cud be well, Special 😳 M in Awe of It ! Awesome Job ! 😳

thanx...😳😳😳😳 i also dnt wanna see any typicall romance story.. like bda guy turning good coz of this angel eyed girl... and al... i want a more realistic approach towards their relation...😳 which all human beings cn relate too...😊

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kasturika ghosh

@kasturika_kashu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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akshat stormed inside the room - hey meenu... guess what?
meenakshi stop practising and looked up- what?
akshat(all in smiles)- i love u
meenu smiled back- uff.. tum bhi na akshat... harwaqt mazaq karte rehte ho...
akshat(surprised)- mazaq? tumhe ye mazaq lagta hain? hamara pyaar ek mazaq hain?😭
meenu- are nhi... aisa nhi hain...😳 i love u too...
akshat- 😆 dekha ... mujhe acchi tarah se pata hain tumse i love u kaise bulwaya jaye...
meenu- pagal...!!
she cntinued her practise.. with akshat watching her lovingly...
he said- meenu pata hain tum jab istarah dance karti ho na.. to bilkul ek swan ki tarah lagti ho...
meenu(turning and turning)- o really? she tripped.. akshat caught her... an eye lock between them...
meenu pushed him away and smiled- tum kabhi nhi sudroge...
akshat- to kya tum chahti ho ki yeh pagal sudhar jaye?
she kissed him on his cheek- no.. kabhi nhi...
akshat- aww.. that was cute... thank u...
meenu- u r welcome..!! abhi mujhe plz practise karne do.. kal mera show hain na..?
akshat- as u wish madam... he moved out and closed the door behind him... meenu smiled to herself...

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DC in his old chair... listening to a different tune this time.. eyes closed...

this is the tune..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LvdJ9cPiJZU

a knock at the door... he opeed his eyes- who is it?
sandhya came inside- sir.. ye post se aya hain... dekhiye...
she handed him an envelope... he opened it.. there was a pass inside...
DC- kisne bheja ye?
sandhya- pata nhi sir... apke naam ka post aya tha...
DC- mazaq kar rahi ho mere saath? u dnt know u send it?
sandhya tried to avoid his eyes- no DC.. i really dnt know..
DC shoved the envelope at her- wapas kar do.. jisne bhi bheja hain.. wapas kar do use..
sandhya- DC kyu? why? she WANTS u to come..!!!!!
DC shouted- bt i DONT.. i DONT want to go there... i am going to feel like a fool... A FOOL... waise bhi agla season shuru hone wali hain... i have to make arrange,ments.. i will be busy...
sandhya- aur kitna excuses denge aap? aur haan ye aapki galat faimi hain DC.. wo apki bht izzat karti hain...
DC- main jana nhi chahta bas...
sandhya- thk hain... mat jaiye... uska dil tutega.. isse zyaada to kuch nhi hoga na?
she stormed out of the room with full attitude... Dc was stunned...

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akshat.. maine thk kiya na?- meenu asked him with guilty eyes...
akshat held her face in his hands and said- meenu tumne kuch galat nhi kiya hain.. ok?? DC sir hum dono ke liye bht maine rakhte hain.akhir unhi ki wajese hum aaj saath hain... jo kuch bhi hua.. use hum kabka bhul chuke hain... par lagta hain DC sir khud apne aapko kabhi maaf nhi kar paya.. tumne thk kiya jo tumne unhe pass bheji...
meenu- tumhe kya lagta hain woh ayenge?
akshat- ye to main nhi keh sakta menakshi.. bt if he comes.. then its gonna be really gr8...
meenu smiled- u think so? she hugged him...- i love u akshat.. i love u.. mujhe itni acchi tarah se samajhne ke liye.. itna pyaar dene ke liye.. am so lucky to have u in my life akshat...
akshat-- wow.. itne sare cmpliments eksaath? i love u too my sweet wify.. 😳 he hugged her tightly...

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DC- am really sorry meenakshi..main hi hamesha tumhara dil todta hu... lekin maine tumse kahan tha na.. mujhse koi ummeed kabhi mat rakhna... kyunki mere paas tumhe dene ke liye kuch bhi nhi hain...aaj tum ek bht bari star ban chuki ho.. main is baat se bht bht zyaada khush hu... ki maine is chamakte hue taare ko pehli nazar mein hi pehchan gaya tha... main jan gaya tha ki tumhari jagah kahan hain... aur aaj tum wohi aasman se aage.. us sapno ki jahaan mein pahuch chuki ho.. isse zyaada na mujhe kabhi kuch chahiye tha.. aur naa kabhi kuch ho sakta hain... this is lyf meenakshi.. accept it.. accept it and move on.. the world is waiting for u... embrace it.. embrace ur destiny... just as u have embraced ur life with ur hero akshat... (smiles) use bhi maine sirf tumhare liye hi chuna tha...and DC is alwayz right... kyun? (laughs)

meenakshi sleeping peacefully on the couch.. she had fallen asleep while watching the rehersal videos... akshat crept inside the room.. careful nt to wake her up... he sat down beside her and stroked her hair...his eyes welled up... as he said softly- i love u soo soo much meenu... my meenu...my lil angel... i just cnt stop myself frm loving u more and more each day... i want to give u everything u need.. everything u yearn for... i want to make u trmendously happy... trust me meenu.. i will become better.. i will become the best husband in this whole world.. i will take all ur responsibilities on myself... bht ho chuka hain.. main aab aur baccha nhi rehna chahta... main tumhe kabhi disappoint nhi karunga... par... meenakshi... main tumhe samajhne ki bht koshish karta hu.. par kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hain ki tum koi aur hi ho... meri meenu nhi... aisa kyun hain meenakshi? kyun tum... meenakshi... tumhe samajhna hoga ki... he bit his lips...-- no... its okay... tum jaisi ho thk ho... i love u and i will always love u.. he kissed her gently on her forehead.. then got up and wrapped the sheet around her.. and left the room...

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