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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: nimi2b4u

hi i really didn't know that rape reminds u about romance ,then iam sorry to say something seriously wrong with u. and u have mistaken me ,actually no one can find a rape as a romantic incident .that too being a girl myself how can u imagine i cant under stand what a girl goes through at that point of time ,i still cant forget that day in my life when in bangalore a most controversial case of Pratibha Srikanth Murthy
was raped and mudered was one of my freinds cousion when we friends went there i could not say what the family was going through , i could not even see helpless husband ,mother and father and relatives cryng beside her body who could not even touch her as the postmortem has been done ,only after that the call center's company's in bangalore made some strict rules for the safety of women employee's.
were we girls in india suffer physical abusment on day to day basis .let it be in a bus or standing in bus stand or even in work place and most public places,i personally had faced such incidents in bus ,the frist day i faced such thing i was crying i found myself so help less.then i felt y should i cry ,y i could not stand for myself and after that next time i took my sandals in my hand and then never felt help less. and coming to the point . i have read some of the FF's which were quite good the initial part bcoz i did not had time for going through all the ff 's ,i felt it was quite very different from the basic story ,i actually wanted to know suddenly what made her to write something like this to a character which i admire a lot personally , y did she took a such a drastic step of writing that part of the story ,i really wanted to know the reason for writing that bcoz as far now i have seen the writer herself talking about nari shakti and i really didn't know if it was written.which is not acceptable under any circumstances ,if its husband or who ever it is .actually a few month ago i read a article that rape is not that a unknown men forces u but if ur husband also forces u against ur willing it is also a case of rape .i personally feel love and marriage doesnot give licesence
for -------,its a feeling that both partner should feel and get along with each other.and plz guy's dont mistake me i do understand what a girl feels after such incidents,
i liked the story of 12/24 karol bagh was the main basic story line what a girl feels when she is rejected only bcoz she is at her age of 30 and bit bubbly ,i can relate myself to simi to a extend iam not married and s iam bit bubbly too,i also face those situation which she had faced in the marriage market ,i wish even i could get a person like abhi in my life who doesn't cares about the outlook but like's the interior beauti .

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Thank you for sharing such personal information. You do not need to defend or explain yourself. Just understand that this fan fiction was very disturbing to read and why the person wrote, best ask her as she never an answer.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: SValeCalGal

Here's how I envision events upto this point.

Anuj and Anita had met at a party hosted by Anuj's colleague at the bank. The colleague's wife and Anita were college friends. Poppa T. was not in favor of the union because he's a social snob and wanted his children to marry within his own socioeconomic strata. He's even more contemptuous of the Sethis given that Poppa S. runs a shop in KB and they live in the PP. Anita would have none of it. It was time for Abhi to return from overseas anyway to help run his father's empire.

As part of the events leading up to the engagement, the Sethis - including Chaacha and Chaachi - were invited for lunch at the Taj Mahal to meet the rest of the Tanejas. This was the first time Abhi met the Sethis and became really intrigued with Simi. Simi is 29 to his 24. Anita is 25 and Anuj 26. Neetu is 22, and Mili 21. The pre-wedding activities bring him over to the Sethis and he finds himself head-over-heels in love with Simi. He shows up at the University - where she is faculty in the History department - to give her rides home and looks for every excuse to be around her. Simi finds herself really attracted to him as well, but given their age difference and the fact that he is her prospective sinlaw's younger brother is fighting her feelings and holding him at bay as much as her emotions allow.

At the lavish engagement ceremony, Daadi notices Simi and Neetu for her Nakul and Omi. Nakul is an alcoholic womanizer and has a mistress on the side. Omi is somewhat mentally challenged, so Daadi considers the Sethis to be an easy catch given that her family is dripping with money (they can literally buy and sell the Tanejas). Nakul is 32 and Omi 26. The proposal is brought forth to the Sethis. Momma S. is beside herself with joy while Poppa S. has an uneasy feeling about Nakul (he had witnessed his loose behavior at the wedding events) and absolutely against his Neetu being fobbed off on someone such as Omi. Simi feels the same, but agrees, based on the fact that she has remained unmarried having had considerable difficulty finding a fellow of her own intellectual capability. Nakul has been presented to her as someone who has the requisite educational background (all a bunch of lies - the fellow has been a rogue barely making it through college).

Manju has been angry at Simi & resentful of her reluctance to marry from any one of the proposals that have been coming in from her KB friends (all completely unsuitable, like the fellow who worked for the phone company in some lowly position). Among the many past proposals was that of Bhalla. Poppa S. knows him from the KB Merchant's Association where he is notorious for his lewd and lascivious ways, & scoffs at the person who brings the proposal to the Sethis, stating categorically that the Bhallas of this world are not for his daughters. This gets back to Bhalla and that's where the enmity begins. He has succeeded in having the Sethi shop closed down (I'll have to come up with a reasonable scenario for why/how).

Anita and Anuj are married and of course, it's unthinkable that Anita would even consider living at the PP. She and Anuj move into the 'flat' purchased by the Tanejas as a wedding gift and cannot see why he needs to have much to do with his middle class family and sisters. This is a source of sorrow for the Sethis and Anuj because he is very close to his family. Anita is a spoilt brat and Anuj is no match for her. He's coming to realize her shallow, conniving way and her contempt for his family. She has him working at Taneja Industries alongside Abhi. The binlaws get along really well.

The Sethi girls are then engaged to the Dagar brothers. Simi has really uneasy feelings about Nakul but will not listen to Abhi who has told her that he loves her and knows that she loves him as well. In the face of these facts, he questions her rationale for marrying Nakul. Neetu has been convinced by Manju that this is a chance of a lifetime! The family has money, and Neetu being impressionable, is amenable. Abhi tells his parents of his intentions towards Simi. Poppa T. is furious at his son, who was meant to marry really well and threatens to disown him if he continues down this path and Anita just comes unglued that Simi is responsible for leading her brother astray. Anuj is egged on by Anita to pour recriminations on Simi's head and he pleads with Abhi to not be fool hardy. Simi finally comes to terms with her feelings for Abhi a and calls off her engagement with Nakul. Manju is completely aghast and heaps vitriol on Simi for showing the family in such poor light and being the cause of gossip in the lanes of KB. Poppa S. never cared for Nakul, is very fond of Abhi (who has been working to have his shop re-opened), and would move heaven and earth to ensure that Simi is happy

Daadi is extremely upset at the events, but Nakul pretends to be understanding and decides to take his revenge in a completely different way - hell hath no fury like a man scorned!!. Besides, he cares for Omi and does not want to upset that apple cart. The Dagars assure the Sethis that they only have everyone's best interest at heart. The Omi/Neetu wedding does take place as planned, but tension is so ripe, you could cut it with a knife. Abhi tells his parents that he and Simi are getting married with or without their consent. This is directed mostly at his father who promptly asks him to pack his bags and leave home. Anusha is distraught, but all her pleading with her husband falls on deaf ears. Abhi calls his TV reporter friend and wonders if he can move in with him until he can make other arrangements.

Nakul learns about the Taneja father/son rift and recognizes an opportunity to begin destroying Simi and Abhi. He offers Abhi a job with Dagar Enterprises.. Abhi knows about Nakul's lifestyle but cannot see how it has any bearing on things - after all, Nakul was very sanguine about letting the best man win. The job comes with a chauffeured car and an apartment. Abhi comes to 12/24 to formally ask for Simi's hand in marriage from her father. Manju is furious, but Mili is delighted (more on this later, since she has been encouraging and facilitating that romance). Given that there is such a rift in the families, Simi and Abhi decide on a very modest court wedding with only the well-wishers in attendance (we need to have friends from both sides!).

Now, Nakul begins planting the seeds of misunderstanding. He shows up at the apartment when Simi is home under the pretense of ensuring that everything is OK. Then, he begins propositioning her and she rebuffs his advances, but does not disclose these visits to Abhi thinking that she will succeed in putting a stop to these events. Abhi has seen him in the vicinity on a couple of occasions and wonders what this is all about. He asks Simi about Nakul and she pretends that she has no idea what he is referring to! She did not even know Nakul was in the area!

With all the stress of the shop being closed, Poppa S. has a mild heart attack. He has been ordered to rest and take things easy. Simi decides to move back to KB to be close to her father. Given Anuj's circumstances, she must play the part of a son until things improve. The thought of being cloistered in a Bursaati is not something Abhi is keen on. Bhalla has always lived at 15/25 KB and seeing Simi back in the neighborhood leers at her taunting her about her younger husband, questioning his virility i.e. being characteristically crude and vulgar. He similarly taunts Abhi about his predilection for older women ... mama's boy?! This is one source of contention between Simi and Abhi, which was one reason why he did not wish to move back to KB.

Nakul begins showing up at KB with the continued intent of creating problems between the young couple. Abhi arrives one day to find Nakul in the Bursaati, a little too close to Simi for his comfort. All this time Simi has been asking Nakul to stay away but he has threatened to make things difficult for Abhi if his propositioning comes to Abhi's attention. He has tried to make a pass at her but she has rebuffed him.

Abhi questions Simi about why Nakul is such a frequent visitor. That's when they have a massive fight and he begins to sulk and ceases being civil to her. Nakul begins making things uncomfortable for Abhi at the office. One day after a meeting, he asks Abhi to stay and begins to question him about his 'hot wife' and whether his sex life is fun. Abhi tells him to stop. The argument escalates to the point where Abhi decides enough is enough and resigns from the job. Nakul says that's fine because he was a worthless employee and was going to get fired anyway.
This sets the stage for Mili's assault.

Liked some of it but the love story part between Simi and Abhi didn't deviate much from what we saw the on show. Abhi loves Simi, Simi sacrficies self, Abhi has to work hard to chase her down and convince her, she keeps secrets, Abhi works for loser Nakul...was not my cup of tea.
Still loved the language used and liked the Anita Anuj background storyline.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Liked some of it but the love story part between Simi and Abhi didn't deviate much from what we saw the on show. Abhi loves Simi, Simi sacrficies self, Abhi has to work hard to chase her down and convince her, she keeps secrets, Abhi works for loser Nakul...was not my cup of tea.
OK! In my defense: 😊
1. I said I was not going to go back and 're-do' some of the past, simply because that would have been too onerous a task. I also said that while it was 'loose' there were 'parallels' between the serial and my rendition (and recall, the serial was fairly decent at the outset, which is why some of us were beholden).
2. Although I cannot be certain, it appears that you did not read the recounting completely. In opposition to your assertion that Simi 'sacrifices' herself, I have shown that she does NOT i.e. she breaks off the engagement unilaterally. If this is not the case, then you must point out how/where you inferred this, because nowhere was I explicit (or even implicit) that a 'sacrifice' had been involved.
3. Abhi's pursuit of Simi is perfectly acceptable and understandable. You are not taking into consideration the mind-set of, effectively, most of the country where such unions are not treated with complete insouciance, much less in a part of the city such as KB! Furthermore, I posited that she had remained unmarried from not being able to find an intellectually suitable mate (and hence not a physically attractive one either. She never was engaged to Bhalla). There was no sacrifice involved in her decision to be engaged to Nakul - that was her decision alone & there was no coercion. Here, yes, I will confess to taking some artistic license. While, it would have been perfectly acceptable to have such an engagement never take place i.e. she could still fight her ambivalence of marrying a younger man and the complications that could arise as a result of his being her sinlaw's younger brother, I had to set up a reason for Nakul to hate the 2 and cause them pain in absolutely unthinkable ways. I also set up the latter situation to reflect that it would be months before the actual perpetrator might be discovered rather than the idiocy of the events in the serial. The friction between Nakul and Abhi via the job had the same motivation. It reflected on Nakul's base character and Abhi's thinking the best of people. Under these circumstances, Abhi does not consider Nakul a 'loser', nor is working for family - however distant - ever beyond the realm of possibility.
4. Laila, remember, I am trying to demonstrate how the serial could have been done differently (and better of course!) even with the same cast of characters and theme.
The defense rests its case! 😊
Edited by SValeCalGal - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

A remembrance of things past

Were Proust alive, he would find me doubled over in profound apology for the use of this title!
Laila - another 'romance'. Others may come to pass, but the story now needs to be put back on track.

She had a good portion of the night to ruminate and reflect. Her mind went back to that visit of theirs to Agra. Her mother labeled her defiant and a disgrace. This, after she had thrown one of her infamous tantrums, replete with tears to fill up a reservoir. Her decision was going to keep the rumor mill well greased ... the ultimate perpetual motion machine. Especially given the capable hands of Kalavati Bhalla at spreading the word! Who needed TV and radio with that woman to broadcast the latest goings-on?! Did she not stop to think of the humiliation?! How could she have allowed herself to fall in love with her sinlaw's younger brother, who should have been as much her own brother!! Unheard of!! If the pouring of recriminations were a virtue, her mother would be a saint.

Anita had reacted not much differently! Anuj said there was screaming to bring the house down and endless phone calls and visits to her mum and dad to help quash this insane decision of her brother. He was stark, raving mad!! He had had unbelievable girlfriends and he was settling for Simi??!! Granted she was bright and really quite handsome, but still ... did he not think of the needless complications given her marriage to Anuj??!! She just had her six month anniversary! He was bent on ruining everything! The man had gone quite, quite berserk!

Her decision was made and that's how it was going to be. She was determined to lead her life in a manner that suited her. This was a well known characteristic ... Simi was placid and non-confrontational until her mind was set on something. Then, wild horses would have been unable to divert her from her objective. She had had a Herculean struggle to come to the decision to be with the man she loved. A heart rending, sweat inducing effort! She had the intellectual capacity to understand that capitulating to outmoded social demands was not the way she wished to lead her life and this was one occasion where her needs were paramount. This had never ever happened before ... such resolve! She already had Mili's approval given how her sister had been aiding and abetting secret rendezvous! Her father had not only a particularly soft spot for her, but was, by all accounts, a rational being with a fine head on his shoulders. His concurrence, therefore was not unexpected. Neetu wasn't especially bothered being preoccupied with her coming nuptials. Little bothered her anyway! Miss easygoing!

She later heard from him about the contrary situation at the Tanejas. Mr. Taneja would have none of it! None whatsoever!! This is not what he had expected of his son, the heir to his ever growing business concerns - India was investing in green technology in a big way and 'Taneja Industries' were getting their foot in. This topic was not one for discussion. He was marrying Simi come hell or high water! Besides, if mom was amenable, how was it any skin off dad's nose?! He hardly knew Simi! She wasn't a flighty Anita! Know Simi??!! What was to know??!! What did he know about her??!! How long had this 'affair' been going on??!! Long enough!! The ultimatum was announced: if he was determined and did not back off, then the father-son ties were to be severed! His mother pleaded with her husband, but if the adage 'like son like father' held any water, it was in such matters.

They both needed to get away from the unpleasantness - this was how their mutual commiseration ended. To Agra they would go. His frugality during his overseas sojourn would pay off now. There was enough saved up such that the trust fund set up by Daadi would not need to be touched. It was inconceivable that he would accept any money from the family. He did, however, ask his mother for the use of her car, since the red Beast would not be the optimal means of transportation.

It would be wonderful to see the Taj Mahal (the real one, not Taneja Mahal) under a full-moon. The Oberoi Amarvilas had views from every guest room and spectacular ones from other places in the hotel. Were they to share a room, she queried a little aghast! Well, for a couple of days, it made little sense to be in separate rooms. They said the beds were huge, so they could carve out their sides. He promised to return her as pure as the driven snow! What would the staff think of an unmarried couple sharing a room?! The staff did not have time for such inanities given the number of guests they catered to ... even in this hot summer month. She was being silly!

It was left to her father to reason with, and assuage an inconsolable and hysterical mother. This kind of behavior was surely the work of devils!

Leaving Delhi was scheduled for 7:00 a.m. Timelines are hardly ever met. It was almost an hour later. Given the conditions of the road which could be miserable if it rained along the way, the time needed to take photographs, stopping for refreshments and food, it could well be early evening before they arrived at the hotel. All that did come to pass of course, including lunch at a roadside Dhaba, under a jamun tree. The first of the crop was available for sale at the dhaba. The owner gave her a complementary handful coated with kala namak to enjoy. She carefully ate each purple jewel relishing the sweet and salt taste. He begged for one by opening his mouth. She popped one and refused to part with any more. She looked like Frankenstein. Frankenstein??!! What was he on all about?! She needed to look at herself in the rear view mirror for an answer. She had forgotten how the fruit stained one's mouth. Her bluish lips, teeth and tongue were the source of great mirth. He played music specially selected for her. Oldies. Ones which she could relate to. They were from her 'era'. He got a fist in his arm for that.

What a hotel! What a room! This was just a regular guest room??!! Would it be possible to get a tour of the luxurious suites, especially the Kohinoor at an 'affordable' Rs 200,000 a night?! The staff would gladly oblige!

Simi took in the room, catching her breath. The bed, as promised, was enormous The wall behind was covered in gorgeous fabric to simulate a headboard. Throw cushions of blue and white were propped up against bolsters in the richest turquoise blue silk. The sheets were a pristine white and an embroidered coverlet lay at the foot. Round bed-side tables held lamps. A patterned rug in turquoise blue and white lay beneath the bed. To the left was a cabinet above which a flat-panel TV was mounted on the wall. On the opposite wall were framed black and white prints from the Raj period. A writing table lay beyond, positioned perpendicular to the cabinet. The ochre varnish of the wood was offset with white Mughal style marquetry around the rectangular top and down the legs. The undulating curved table skirt was similarly embellished. A table lamp of a glittering turquoise blue metal and phone lay on top. Above the table was an octagonal mirror in a gilded frame. Two armchairs in the same ochre wood with tufted silk seats and backs were positioned on either side of the table. Across from the table and in front of the bed was a large white and blue rug with huge turquoise blue paisley in the center. A capacious upholstered armchair and ottoman sat on the rug in the corner. A marquetry floor lamp stood to provide light and beside it a round table had a bowl of fruit. The wooden floor gleamed. French doors gave way to a balcony that had two chairs - both with the same turquoise blue seat cushions - and a table. And then ... a carpet of green, arising from which, was the central dome of the Taj, and three of the four minarets. A never ending expanse of blue with wisps of white was the sky that filled the picture. A heady riot of color!

She had dressed, she thought, with care, but this was a whole different experience altogether. It would be a long time before she would get out of the habit of silently exclaiming about how the 'other half' of the world lived. It would be an oft repeated refrain over the months to follow. A fear and doubt gripped her and she became extremely self-conscious about her decision to be with this man, questioning its appropriateness. Most of the rest of the day she had this new monster to fend off. A brief rest in the cooling evening air on the balcony would calm her unease slightly.

They sat on the balcony taking in the view. Soon the sun set and infused the white dome with a pink to behold. The dark descended gradually. It had been a long day and a shower was what she was anxious for. They had arranged to be driven to the monument to see it in its moonlit glory, so an early dinner was planned. It was late when they returned. She changed into her cotton nightgown with the embroidered yoke and he into a kurta-pajama.

She stood there gazing at the dark sky with a glorious silver moon illuminating the mausoleum. She heard him emerge to walk up behind her. He circled his arms around her, his head resting on her shoulder joking about who this stranger was and had he not seen her somewhere? Of course, he accosted strangers on a regular basis and set about to kiss them. He kissed her neck and the two stood there - her hands holding his arms - in silence enjoying each other's company. He walked back ready for bed. The bolsters were laid in the center of the bed to divide it into the obligatory two.

She slept restlessly, tormented by her earlier thoughts. It was almost 2:00 in the morning when she arose and walked out onto the balcony, opening the doors then shutting them behind her because of the air-conditioning. She sat huddled in a chair, her feet up, her arms circling her legs and her chin settled on her knees. Was she really making the right decision? Was her mother right? Did she have any right to deprive him of a companion his own age? Could she bear the guilt of the increasing rift between father and son and sister and brother? Could she ever get used to this alien lifestyle? Over and over again, it churned her mind into a frenzy. Utterly confused and broken, she wept very silently until she heard him behind her. She swiftly wiped her face on her gown. Hey what was the matter. Then he gently lead her by the hand as he sat on the other chair and had her sit in his lap. He engulfed her in his arms in a warm embrace as a mother would a child. She would speak to him about it the next day. For now, she let him hold her thus until her eyes were heavy with sleep.

The next day they toured the Agra Fort, Akbar's Tomb, and Fathepur Sikri. There was no more rain forecast until later in the week, but, thankfully, the July temperatures were already a good 5 degrees cooler than the searing May and June. It was early evening when they returned and he decided to take a swim in the magnificent pool. She opted to rest in his absence. She was sitting in the armchair, her feet on the ottoman, reading a book she had brought along when he returned. He sat to watch TV in his bathrobe.

It was about 9:00 when they dressed to have dinner at the restaurant Esphahan downstairs. He wore a charcoal grey surbhi fabric Kurta, a linen jacket in a sedate grey and white, and Kolhapuri chappals on his feet. She had thought to bring the sari given as a gift by his mother at Anuj's wedding. All the Sethi girls got a similar gift, along with beautiful silk clutches with gold plated filigreed/floral clasps. Her sari was a pale lilac chiffon with silver embroidery. The blouse had a deep neckline in the back - the only thing risque about it, and cap sleeves. She wore low heeled silver shoes with an insert strap across the foot and a smaller one for her big toe. She did have pretty feet. Very pretty feet, varnished in a deep pink. She carried the dark purple clutch.

A walk around the colonnade was highly recommended. What a sight! The entire edifice was brightly lit and shone like one of those well known pieces of Mughal jewelry. The colonnade reflected the concept of the Chahar Bagh that had been part of the sub-continental architecture since Babur. The courtyard was divided into quadrants by the two intersecting marble pathways. Each quadrant was a pool with fountains. In the center of the courtyard was an intricate marble inlay in a geometric pattern. Low stone walls in a grill pattern cordoned off the pools. At the end of the four pathways were steps that led up to a pavilion with three bold arches. Comfortable seating was to be had looking out into the courtyard. The facade of the rest of the upper parameter was recessed from the facade of the pavilion. The arches along the length of the back facade made visible the floor to ceiling floral motif murals. They walked for a while holding hands letting the mist of water from the fountains cool them. She handed him her clutch to hold as he decided to sit it out on the steps his legs stretched out and his arms crossed, watching her as she continued her strolling down the marbled pathway, up the stairs into the porch of the pavilion. She in a semi-somnolent state from still being overwhelmed. There was that fear again! What was she thinking?! What was she doing?! She had no idea what effect she was having on him as he wondered if he would ever see her hair escape from the prison of that braid! She had no idea what awaited her.

They slowly made their way up to the room to sleep off the fatigue. She found him changed into a clean crisp kurta-pajama out on the balcony savoring the scenery still lit up by the moon. He was bent over with his arms resting on the parapet letting the cool gentle breeze ruffle his hair. She came and stood beside him. She found him looking up and gazing at her, then saw him stand up and very slowly turn around. She was pulled in, towards him. Then she felt him reach back and undo her braid. Her long hair, all the way down to her waist fell down around her and the gentle breeze ruffled the loose bits around her face. She felt his hands pushing back her hair from her face, then felt his arm around her waist pulling her in even closer. She felt him raise her face with his hand under her chin. That was the first time she had let him kiss her. Very softly and gently and first, then more demanding. Her heart was going to jump out of her chest given the fury with which it pounded. Her ears were glowing in the dark she was sure. She thought he came up for air until she saw his entreating eyes, felt his entreating hands, and heard his entreating voice. Would she? She shyly whispered that she would.
For some outstanding info. on the hotel surf on over to this website. I'm saving my pennies to be able to stay there at least a night. I'm up to $30.00 I think. Only another $570.00 to go! 😊
Edited by SValeCalGal - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
A remembrance of things past
SVG, this episode was superb dear, I liked the romance in it.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Please continue.....like always a great read !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

And then there was one

'Abhi, wake up! Abhee-ee ... wake up!! Abhi!' ... she shook him, then knelt on the bed beside him and kissed his ear. Hmmm ... see! He hadn't turn into a frog! Goodness! She had been around this man too long! Even his humor was beginning to rub off on her! He was sound asleep in his pajamas, his torso bare. This is how he usually 'undressed' for bed.

She shook him a little harder, coaxing him to awaken.

'Hunh??! Wha??!! Whazzup?!!', he said deliriously as he woke up lifting himself into a sitting position.

'Dinner's ready. Mum wants us downstairs. C'mon, hurry up!'

'Oh! OK! Hand me a clean kurta, wouldya?'. She picked one from the armoire and threw it to him, then walked out to go downstairs. He caught it mid air and put it on, yawning and stretching to shake off the sleep. He swung his legs around and snuck his feet into a pair of leather chappals, then shuffled downstairs still not fully awake. The trip to Gangtok had been unforgettable but enervating!

Mili, Simi, and his minlaw were finishing off laying the table. Simi called to her Papa-ji. The five sat around and enjoyed another delicious meal at the Sethis. Well ... mostly enjoyed. Mili continued to be eerily silent and in between the knowing glances exchanged between the remaining four, they tried to engage her in conversation. Her bruises had disappeared and the timely intervention with her broken nose had left her physically unscathed - relatively speaking. Her rib and nose were healing fine. There had been such confusion, despair, then rage when she told them about the identity of the perpetrator. According to her, one might say. There was no evidence of Nakul's involvement. It was her word against his. That was the popular scuttlebutt, but nary a Sethi believed it ... not even Neetu, who, over the months since her marriage last November, had taken a dislike to her binlaw .. what patent hogwash!! It was preposterous to think that Mili would be fabricating a tale such as this! Utterly and irrevocably preposterous!!! What would be her motivation anyhow??!! And yet, they were seemingly powerless in the absence of incriminating evidence.

Ordinarily, Simi would have helped put things away and help clean up, but her mother insisted they get some rest. Manju's transformation towards her older daughter and sinlaw had been slow but inexorable. To the point that if you hadn't known, you would have thought she had raised Abhi from infancy as a most beloved son!

She broached the assault issue with Abhi after dinner when they were alone upstairs. Every possible option had to be exercised for justice to be done. He needed to speak with his mother first, then, in turn, her cousin Shiv Anand, the Delhi Police Commissioner. He was several steps ahead of her. There was that to be taken care of, a new job to be found, and a place of their own ... in that order.

They snuggled up in bed, watching some inane program on TV, then their conversation drifted to reminiscing about the Sikkim trip and other such incidents ... like the Agra one! The only couple to have a honeymoon precede the wedding! She spoke fondly of their wedding, laying her head on his chest, occasionally gazing up at him. The TV blathered on in the background.

'Tell me again ... you know ... the part about how your heart stopped when you saw me walk into the court house ... in that gorgeous outfit'

'GROAN!! Not again??!! You needn't worry, Mrs. T., all this jogging of my memory ... I WILL remember every last detail to relate to your grandchildren ... oh ... did I ever tell you ... uh ... I mean ... when it is that you look your ABSOLUTE best? No?! ...Well ... you look your 'bestest' without an outfit of any sort!'. There he was, joshing with her ... in that inimitable habit of his!

'Sure hope you'll be all grown up by the time grandkids roll around! Can't stop with all your joking .. right?.Cannot just do what you're asked? Right?!'

'Uh ... no ... but if you're going to have me expend all that energy ... beating that dead horse ... AGAIN ... I need to be replenished, so you can just come on along with me to the Kulfi-vala on the corner! I'm going to miss that when we move out'.

Off to the kulfi-vala it was. Holding hands. It was a balmy night and rain was forecast for tomorrow, so a cooling breeze had also picked up.

They had returned from the Agra trip where the second fateful night helped banish any of that perniciously creeping ambivalence in her mind. They were meant to be together, physically and emotionally. She had never felt so whole before. Her mother and his father would continue to be unrelenting and Neetu was to be wed at almost the start of the 'wedding season' in early November. Very likely, it would be best if they married in advance so as to snuff out any spurious gossip that would tarnish that grand affair.

Theirs had to be subdued not just for 'obvious' reasons but also because each shied away from things too ostentatious. Weddings these days were lavish to the point of lunacy, and the end result, inevitably, was a circus - without the corresponding entertainment value! Schizophrenia of the worst kind! Sure, the likes of Mittal could afford the $30M for his daughter's wedding at Versailles, flying in - at least - the glitterati (almost never the 'literati') from around the globe, but that did not need to be the standard to aspire to!

They would counsel with the respective supportive parent about a court wedding followed by a nice reception for the 'select few'. No one else needed to be consulted. Marching to the tune of a superstitious Hindu clergy was unthinkable. Most of the world married without benefit of their 'knowledge' about the alignment of the sun, the moon, and the stars, not to mention the planets of the solar system. Some cultures even allowed for polygamy (polyandry a largely defunct tradition), with little ill effect. Early September would be the most ideal. That gave them more than enough time to take care of the bureaucratic paper work, make arrangements for the reception, and allow for a modest gap before Neetu's wedding. He had also made arrangements to move in with his friend at the TV station until their own personal place could be found. That was when the offer from Nakul came in. All was in place! He had a job. He had a home. He was ready for a wife.

Only well-wishing family and friends were to be invited. This, over the objections of Anusha Taneja who wanted it to be a semi-lavish affair. No, that was a criminal waste of money. Money he and Simi did not have. She was asked to spend only an amount that would be 'tasteful'. Any 'excess' would have to go to charity. Abhi, for all his having been born with the proverbial silver spoon, was born with the spoon full of social conscience. Fund raising for charity had been one of his many fortes through college. Such a stance, therefore, was perfectly in keeping with his character. Simi did not want to follow fashion with the diamond ring; a wedding band would be amply sufficient. The thought of a trousseau was laughable. Besides, there was Neetu's wedding expense to think of. Nor did she wish to be burdened with gifts from his side of the family.

Anusha would not be that easily brow-beaten! The venue was to be of her choosing and to her liking and Abhi was bound to respect her wishes at least to that extent! She loved the Taj Mahal hotel in Delhi and asked for a tour of their facilities - what a wonderful follow up to the earlier overture of the Agra trip! She opted for a terrace reception. The weather at that time of year would be perfect for the soiree. She reserved 2 suites to allow close family to arrive before the event as a place to change or put up one's feet. Certainly, Simi and Abhi would need that.

Shopping for her dresses was stressful and exhilarating all at the same time. This was the one extravagance she would permit her parents and was thankful that she wasn't expected to shop at the family store. Her two sisters were dying to help her choose. She favored the taste of her friend and colleague Lalita. Her's was the first recommendation she would seek and asked if she might have time to come along. Lalita was flattered and delighted! To the Meera& Muzzaffar Ali boutique in Saket all four dizzy women would head out.

She absolutely swooned when she saw the selection. It wasn't difficult to gravitate towards her dresses. For the morning wedding she chose a churidar suit, of which the top looked like someone had played holi in a very deliberate way. The bodice was multicolored with vertical stripes in a halter style with just enough to cusp her back - revealing it to well below her shoulder blades. The slit in the front was very elegantly deep to about mid-sternum. The round neckline sported a short standup collar. But the skirt! Oh the skirt! From the upper waist - where the bodice ended - to well below her shins was a chiffon riot of orange, yellow, fuschia, blue, purple, green, in tie-die. It seemed like there was miles of yardage that would flow and dance as she walked. The coup the grace was the 2 huge roses on the seam between the bodice and skirt. Two enormous roses in the same tie-die fabric! There was an accompanying dupatta. The most divine diaphanous rose-lilac with a thin woven silver border about 2 inches wide. (http://www.hamaraphotos.com/displayfullimage_336584_1.html)

She chose a sari for the reception. Courtesy of Anusha - who did not care about the expense. It looked like stripes, halter necks, chiffon, and rich jewel tones were what they were doing this year. A striped silk blouse in grey and silver with a floral motif in pink and yellow sprinkled randomly on the body of the fabric. The chiffon sari was a variegated pink transitioning from an almost baby pink to the hottest fuschia imaginable. It appeared to have a bright orange running through it as well. The almost 4 inch, plain, silver gota border made it absolutely ethereal. Absolutely heavenly! Absolutely sublime! (http://www.hamaraphotos.com/displayfullimage_336590_1.html)

She would have her styled in a loose languid hairdo and wear fresh roses for both events.

Neetu could not understand what she was thinking! Who would notice her at the events?! Boy, most of the other women would outshine her ... hands down! She was getting married not going out for a cocktail party - this from someone who wouldn't have known a cocktail from tomato juice!!! Anything other than a Manish Malhotra or Vikram Phadnis outfit was unthinkable!! Well ... she wasn't a young Neetu, would not spend her or his parents' money with abandon, and certainly wanted reuse out of the garments. Besides, at the reception, Anusha was insistent upon her wearing the jewels specially ordered from the Delhi branch of Jaipur's 'Gem Palace'! If that wasn't the epitome of opulence, she did not know what was! This was beginning to be far more overwhelming already! Please, could everyone just lay off for a bit?!

It was sad, that while her own mother would be persuaded to attend the 'festivities' - such as they were - Mr. Taneja and Anita would have nothing to do with it. He even arranged for a business meeting in Singapore and took his daughter along. It was time for one of her bi-annual shopping trips anyways. So, Taneja Mahal was available for that bare minimum of fun-filled events typical of Punjabi weddings. Similarly, 12/24 was the site of the Sangeet ceremony, her mehendi, the havan followed by her Mama-ji officiating over the wearing of the chooda and kaleeras (to that extent of a bride she wanted to be). The irrepressible Dolly Chaachi, ditzy as she was, could really light up an event! Anuj the very model of responsibility. Neetu and Mili at their fun loving best!

It was a lovely sunny day. Abhi wore a sedate version of an Arjun Khanna outfit. Cream colored silk achkan lined in a blue silk over a blue silk kurta with a woven buti motif. Silk churidar pajama and juttis finished off his ensemble. None of that compared to the brilliance of his smile though! He did not wish to outdo the bride at the reception, so it was a somber but very elegant black achkan, cream silk pajamas, and black juttis. Never mind his mother's flowing heart at seeing her sweet, lovely boy so adorned, Simi was stunned into an even more silent version of herself until life reminded her that such a look was not in keeping with the occasion! Friends and family from both sides participated along with the assortment of cousins who were not away being schooled. The Dagars were there in full force as well. Nakul the very model of good-will and composure. There were NO hard feelings. Oh no. None at all! The only thing the girls of the Sethi family missed was the reaping of huge profits in exchange for Abhi's shoes!! That was simply too unfair!!

Reflecting thus, they had walked over to the neigborhood park, sucking their kulfis until none was left. It was lovely outdoors, so they sat on a bench. She had put her feet up and was leaning against him. They sat huddled thus. She felt a warmth suffuse her body as she snuggled even closer.

This was the second time there had been binary fusion. Two people were as one.
Disclaimer: While I have long known, recognized and loved Muzaffar Ali's aesthetics (fully played out in a TV serial on Wajid Ali Shah) and hope one day to wear some of his and wife's stuff, the other 'designers' I know only through some of the 'research' I did for this piece.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Superb like always,nowadays look forward to your FF 😍 more than watching the actual serial!! 😡

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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
look forward to your FF
A woman of such DISCERNING taste!!! You and your kind who are enjoying this are few and far between ... but that's a GOOD thing!! Bravo!!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

One-Eyed Justice

'Hi Mom!'

'Abhi! How are you?!'

'Good! Hey, Mom ... this thing with Nakul and the assault is not proceeding down the right path. There is no doubt in my mind that Mili has been speaking the truth! None at all! I want us to speak to Shiv Mama-ji and see about how to bring this issue to a rapid closure. It's probably best if you speak to him first.'

'Abhi, it does not matter who speaks to him first. Give him a call and talk to him. I don't know what to make of Nakul! To think that this is where he ended up! And that too under Daadi's nose! How different our families ... your Nana-ji and his Dada-ji were second cousins but much closer than real siblings! This tainted blood must come from his Daadi's side of the family! I will call Shiv Mama-ji and let him know that he will be hearing from you'

He arranged to meet Shiv Mama-ji in his office at Indraprastha Estate. He would drive over on the Sethi scooter. Simi asked to be dropped off at the Metro station where she would catch the train to get over to the University. She needed to pick up some stuff to bring back and work at home the rest of the day.

He arrived promptly on time. Mr. Anand's nephew was here! What an army of well-wishers to cater to his every need and demand. For a man used to pulling his own weight, this was a necessary evil, an embarrassment, not something in which to revel. Yet, he could not help but show his urbane, kind self, thankful for all the help and good wishes. Besides, what a boost and vote-of-confidence for the Delhi Police's 'Parivartan' program to educate a deeply entrenched and backward mind-set about violence towards women! How true that evil knew no social bounds!

He was shown upstairs to Shiv Mama's office. The secretary who was seated outside, rose to greet him. She then opened the door and announced both him and the P.A. Mr. Malhotra - who had met Abhi at the reception and no accompanied him upstairs. A quick glance showed the interior to be appointed in a manner appropriate to the position of the Commissioner of Police. There had been no occasion for family to have paid him a visit before now. The walls were paneled in wood with raised panels, separated by stiles, top and shoe rails, beautifully veneered - the classically traditional style of offices and libraries. The wood floor in a deep mahogany added to the richness. Rich Agra rugs in unusual muted earthy shades were scattered around. Mama-ji's imposing desk was of a solid teak. Ceiling to floor built-in bookcases housed leather and fabric bound books and other technical material. An assortment of upholstered couches and chairs were available comfort and relaxed meetings. Potted plants in huge brass containers were placed around the room. Framed pictures of the founding fathers and art work hung on the walls. State-of-the art communication paraphernalia for video teleconferencing, computers, and phones were configured around the room.

Mama-ji got up from behind his desk and walked up to shake hands and hug his nephew. He motioned over to an ensemble of couch and chairs and guided him over with a friendly hand on his back. He turned to his secretary and asked that refreshments be brought in. She walked to the adjoining kitchenette to make arrangements for tea. It would arrive on a silver tray. Official gilded insignia embellished the white china of the tea serving and cups.

'So, son, this incident came as a complete shock when I heard of it. This is not the first time Nakul Dagar has been in the limelight - as we well know! Fellow's clever as clever comes! With that kind of smarts, he'd be any ally for the Delhi Police!! I've been keeping tabs on the latest on this front, but it appears that his story so far is pretty watertight.'

'I'm afraid so Mama-ji! But there is no reason for Mili to be conjuring up something this heinous! You know my history with this fellow - right?!'. Abhi related the incidents and Nakul's provocative behavior. Shiv Anand listened attentively, his eye-brows raised until they - not surprisingly - almost disappeared, his brow frowning and looks of disgust darkening his usually friendly face and demeanor.

'You know Abhi my boy ... sooner or later these fellows trip up ... inevitably ... I wouldn't be in the least bit surprised if something falls out from the skies ... straight into our waiting hands ... and then ... poof! Mr. Dagar will get to experience the comforts of Hotel Delhi Jail. In any event, Malhotra, I want our people to go over the area with an even finer toothed-comb. Also arrange for someone to tail this fellow to see what he's up to. I'd like a daily update on what you find. Abhi, we will do our utmost of course. Hope for the best, but be prepared for the worst. I only say this because as of now, no incriminating evidence has cropped up. It also does not help our case to have him connected at the Ministerial level. You know how things are in this country. But when the going gets tough for their cronies, these political types are the first to not know you from Adam. Nakul Dagar who? is what they will be singing. But, how is young Mili holding up? And the rest of the family? They are very lucky to have you as a member'.

The conversation drifted to more pleasant issues. His cell-phone had several missed calls, one of which was from Rajesh Mathur, Vishal's father. What could he be wanting he thought? Well, he would give him a call as soon as he was done with the current business at hand. Assured that every conceivable effort would be made on the assault front, he took his leave.

He walked to the lobby. The rain had started while he had been in conferring with Mama-ji. He had driven Rajinder Sethi's scooter, so rather than get drenched, he thought to wait for a while and take care of returning the calls.

Rajesh Mathur was anxious to see him about a job! Vishal had had no choice but to return to London, deeply regretful and distraught that he could not tarry for Mili. But with his parents, she was in the most capable of hands and she would rally again ... soon!! He would be back in almost no time and they would pick up where they left off! Mr. Mathur knew all about Abhi's predicament vis-a-vis that fiend Nakul and also the pig-headedness of Taneja Senior. Well, their loss!! Men like Abhi did not wash up on a daily basis! Besides, Vishal and he would make a formidable business team! When would he be available for more detailed discussions?! They settled on Abhi meeting him on the following day! Ah! He would soon have a job, and he would have a place to house the wife he already had!

The other call was from his mother. She had not seen the pictures of the Sikkim trip and wanted an update of what had transpired at Mama-ji's office. She would like to meet him and Simi over tea at the Oberoi Intercontinental. Tomorrow. Well, tomorrow was already spoken for. Could they defer it to the day after? Besides, he needed to check with Simi to see when she would be available.

The rain finally let up, so he decided to get back on the scooter to head home. Nothing worse than the humidity after a shower! And the scooter helmet! He would be a baked potato by the time he reached Karol Bagh! He was all of 5 minutes away when another downpour hit. He arrived with nothing of a baked potato about him. More like a drowning rat! It was mid-afternoon so the in-laws were undoubtedly in the arms of a siesta. Mili had actually ventured back to college accompanied by many of her good friends. Yet, there were dark clouds of fury and despair on that horizon that would need the balm of love from all directions for the healing to complete. There would be nothing wanting in meeting that need.

He walked up to the Bursaati. Simi was home and sitting in bed catching up on work. College paperwork was strewn all over the bed.

'Oh! You're back! How did it ... what happened to you?! You're drenched!!!'

She rose to help him get out of his wet clothes. He walked into the bathroom to take off his things. Towels were pulled out to wipe him down and dry his hair. He walked back into their room with a towel around his middle. She was all busy pulling out a set of dry clothes from the armoire lamenting as a lame wife about him catching his death from cold. Right on cue, to pull her leg, he feigned a sneeze or two. He got a glare in return! She handed him a kurta-pajama which he put on.

'You must be hungry. Did you want to come downstairs or should I bring up a tray for you?' She got ready to walk out when he came up and circled her in his arms. His appetite had shifted.

'WHAT are you doing?! It's the middle of the afternoon!'

'Come here ... Shhhhhhh' ....
Edited by SValeCalGal - 15 years ago

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