What I would like to see

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Simi tries to tell Abhi what RB proposed.
Abhi (shocked): And what did you say?

Simi: I told him no of course, what did you think?

Abhi: I don't know Simi, you've got a habit of sacrificing yourself for you family. You married RB for Anuj and Anita and then your father. Then you agree to marry Nakul to save Neetu. Now RB wants you to sleep with him to save your house. So what made you say no this time?

Simi: Abhi, I am your wife.
Abhi: You were engaged to me when you agreed to marry Nakul. You took 7 pheras with me but you still agreed to marry Nakul. Now, all of a sudden this marriage means something to you? So you're telling me that if you were not married to me you would have slept with RB? You'd do that for your family? What am I saying, of course you would. Simi, why, why do you degrade youself like this? It is not a mahaan thing you are doing; giving into people who blackmail you,. Why?
Simi (crying): But Abhi, it was about my family....
Abhi: You cannot save the world Simi; think about it. And why didn't you tell me.
Simi (still crying): Because I was afraid -
Abhi: That I'd be some bachcha and go beat up RB? Yes, I want to beat him up; I want to throw him of this terrace, but I know that right now what good is that going to do? I get locked up and then what? But you Simi, you went to see him without telling me and then he makes such a proposition and you came home and you cried to your mother and you never told me?

Simi (still crying): Abhi...
Abhi: Weren't you the one who told me to trust you; to tell you what is going on and now look at you, you're the one is doing exactly what you told me not to do. You know Simi, this marriage, what you call a marriage is not working. After we get the house back and I know we will (because remember Abhi has a plan😉), I think you need to think about this marriage and what it really means to you. For me Simi, I think it's finished and perhaps, perhaps people are right, perhaps we were not meant to be for each other.
Simi (still crying): Abhi
Abhi walks away and Simi goes after him and he tells her that for now he really just needs to be alone to think...
And then when Abhi gets Simi the house back, he leaves her and goes...Simi thinks he's gone back home but when she calls the house, he is not there. Anushi does not know where he went...
Cliffhanger - what happened to Abhi and where did he go?
Sachin Tayagi's house - finally he makes it there😆
Then the promo will be: Kiya Simi Abhi ko apni zindagi mein wapass lah sakthi hai?
Then Neetu jumps in and says, wa'ahji Simi ji, Abhi ke jaane aap ki wahja hai. 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thats great script,hope somewhat same would happen on monday's episode and yes i would like to say to CVs-sikho kuch sikho aap log ab toh kuch sikho !!! laila,u r superior writer😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila2009

Simi tries to tell Abhi what RB proposed.

Abhi (shocked): And what did you say?

Simi: I told him no of course, what did you think?

Abhi: I don't know Simi, you've got a habit of sacrificing yourself for you family. You married RB for Anuj and Anita and then you father. Then you agree to marry Nakul to save Neetu. Now RB wants you to sleep with him to save your house. So what made you say no this time?

Simi: Abhi, I am your wife.
Abhi: You were engaged to me when you agreed to marry Nakul. You took 7 pheras with me but you still agreed to marry Nakul. Now all of a sudden this marriage means something to you? So you're telling me that if you were not married to me you would have slept with RB? You'd do that for your family? What am I saying, of course you would. Simi, why, why do you degrade youself like this? It is not a mahaan thing you are doing; giving into people who blackmail you,. Why?
Simi (crying): But Abhi, it was about my family....
Abhi: You cannot save the world Simi; think about it. And why didn't you tell me.
Simi (still crying): Because I was afraid -
Abhi: That I'd be some bachcha and go beat up RB? Yes, I want to beat him up; I want to throw him of this terrace, but I know that right now what good is that going to do? I get locked up and then what. But you Simi, you went to see him without telling me and then he makes such a proposition and you came home and you cried to your mother and you never told me?

Simi (still crying): Abhi...
Abhi: Weren't you the one who told me to trust you; to tell you what is going on and now look at you, you're the one is doing exactly what you told me not to do. You know Simi, this marriage, what you look a marriage is not working. After we get the house back and I know we will (because remember Abhi has a plan😉), I think you need to think about this marriage and what it really means to you. For me Simi, I think it's finished and perhaps, perhaps people are right, perhaps we were not meant to be for each other.
Simi (still crying): Abhi
Abhi walks away and Simi goes after him and he tells her that for now he really just needs to be alone to think...
And then when Abhi gets Simi the house back, he leaves her and goes...Simi thinks he's gone back home but when she calls the house, he is not there. Anushi does not know...
Cliffhanger - what happened to Abhi and where did he go
Sachin Tayagi's house - finally he makes it there😆
Then the promo will be: Kiya Simi Abhi ko apni zindagi mein wapass lah sakthi hai?
Then Neetu jumps in and says, wa'ahji Simi ji, Abhi ke jaane aap ki wahja hai. 😉

Hey Laila You are a marvellous writer, scripter and a great CV.
Hope, the CVs should read this and implement it on monday. I will be really happy to see such scenes. Great i simply loved the dialogues of Abhi.
CVs, if nothing is going in your mind. if you really want KB to be viewers choice, then please kindly read this or else vacate the place we have great CV named Laila.
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Totally awesome This is was is reality !!!

With great humor and interesting script
I wish those gray cells of these writers do kick in !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -NEETU-

thats great script,hope somewhat same would happen on monday's episode and yes i would like to say to CVs-sikho kuch sikho aap log ab toh kuch sikho !!! laila,u r superior writer😊

Neetu, I am flattered. Nearly every friend I have is a writer either amateur or professional. Some have had scripts made into independent films, some are short story writers, some write books on finance, scientific reports, witty articles, etc. I just do what I can, and compared to them I am nothing.
I think most of us here could do a better job than the CVs here, but once again, thank you!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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O Laila U r kidding me i know what you are in FF
I feel you should start writing your own blog with your FF on Abhi and Simi


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila2009

Neetu, I am flattered. Nearly every friend I have is a writer either amateur or professional. Some have had scripts made into independent films, some are short story writers, some write books on finance, scientific reports, witty articles, etc. I just do what I can, and compared to them I am nothing.
I think most of us here could do a better job than the CVs here, but once again, thank you!!!

hey dear, thanks for what as u deserve a huge complement thats so tiny for u!!!😃
and trust me u r very talented ,plz don't think urself nothing !!!
Edited by -NEETU- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila2009

Simi tries to tell Abhi what RB proposed.

Abhi (shocked): And what did you say?

Simi: I told him no of course, what did you think?

Abhi: I don't know Simi, you've got a habit of sacrificing yourself for you family. You married RB for Anuj and Anita and then your father. Then you agree to marry Nakul to save Neetu. Now RB wants you to sleep with him to save your house. So what made you say no this time?

Simi: Abhi, I am your wife.
Abhi: You were engaged to me when you agreed to marry Nakul. You took 7 pheras with me but you still agreed to marry Nakul. Now, all of a sudden this marriage means something to you? So you're telling me that if you were not married to me you would have slept with RB? You'd do that for your family? What am I saying, of course you would. Simi, why, why do you degrade youself like this? It is not a mahaan thing you are doing; giving into people who blackmail you,. Why?
Simi (crying): But Abhi, it was about my family....
Abhi: You cannot save the world Simi; think about it. And why didn't you tell me.
Simi (still crying): Because I was afraid -
Abhi: That I'd be some bachcha and go beat up RB? Yes, I want to beat him up; I want to throw him of this terrace, but I know that right now what good is that going to do? I get locked up and then what? But you Simi, you went to see him without telling me and then he makes such a proposition and you came home and you cried to your mother and you never told me?

Simi (still crying): Abhi...
Abhi: Weren't you the one who told me to trust you; to tell you what is going on and now look at you, you're the one is doing exactly what you told me not to do. You know Simi, this marriage, what you call a marriage is not working. After we get the house back and I know we will (because remember Abhi has a plan😉), I think you need to think about this marriage and what it really means to you. For me Simi, I think it's finished and perhaps, perhaps people are right, perhaps we were not meant to be for each other.
Simi (still crying): Abhi
Abhi walks away and Simi goes after him and he tells her that for now he really just needs to be alone to think...
And then when Abhi gets Simi the house back, he leaves her and goes...Simi thinks he's gone back home but when she calls the house, he is not there. Anushi does not know where he went...
Cliffhanger - what happened to Abhi and where did he go?
Sachin Tayagi's house - finally he makes it there😆
Then the promo will be: Kiya Simi Abhi ko apni zindagi mein wapass lah sakthi hai?
Then Neetu jumps in and says, wa'ahji Simi ji, Abhi ke jaane aap ki wahja hai. 😉

Laila this storyline is fantastic and it makes so much sense compared to the rubbish the cvs are dishing out at the moment. I had put in another post of mine that Simi needs a wake up call for her to realise what Abhi means to her and the last part where Abhi leaves her although is sad , needs to be done. Simi really doesn't realise what an amazing husband Abhi is. She thinks she knows and says it to herself but it really hasn't hit home. Abhi definitely needs to leave her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I hate to be part of this bandwagon but I also feel that is the only way Simi is going to start appreciating Abhi........
Up until now Simi has done nothing but taken advantage of Abhi and taken him for granted.....Now I want the tables turned.....How about when he is at Sachin Tyagi's house Abhi runs into Sachin's sister who is really hot....and Simi has to really work hard to keep the sister away from Abhi and make Abhi forgive her and come back.....ahahah sight for sore eyes....
Abhi needs to walk out like your post suggests Lailla and make Simi work for his love and try her damnest to win him back....
It's about time this story try and get back on track and bring back all the viewers it has lost over the past several months.....
Edited by daboo89 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This show has completely lost track of what it sold to the viewers. Had I know that this show would screw us over like this after three months, I would NEVER have watched this show. I chose to watch this show as I thought it would be a change to see a woman struggling to find a suitor, someone who was overweight, older than usual and not seen as attractive. On top of it she's bullied non-stop by her family. I really felt sympathy for Simi's character and really wished you could find a knight in shinning armour, I liked the fact that they didn't have a love at first sight. After the RB saga ended, I thought the writers would focus more on the love story and the struggles a women goes through when she likes a guy who is attractive but is not seen as attractive herself.
However, the writers knocked down Abhi's age, and then they brought in Nakul and then had Simi become some super mahan sacrificer. The whole Abhi-Simi story ended and we had Abhi do all this chasing after Simi 😕 It just didn't make any sense as to why a 22 year old guy would chase after a 30 year old woman who was not attractive.
Now we have them married, she's still sacrificing herself and he's become her pet dog. He as no dignity left. How can this show be appealing to anyone. It's awful. PR's Archana sacrifices left right and center, but she's likable and she is wonderful to Manav who doesn't even stand up for her!!!!!

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