Thanks this poem is born out of me crying from getting grass clipping in my nose badly sneezing and crying while walking with a friend and thinking of a story line and relating the idea of this poem to story line then. But it pretty much relate to simi and KB chracters as well.
Tinke ki Kahani Tinke ki Jubani
Main Hoon chhota sa ek tinka (grass clipping)
Jameen pe mujhe giraya hai
Hawaone mujhe udaya hai
kisiki ankho ne mujhe samaya hai
Inhi ankho ko maine rulaya hai
Phunk phunk ke mujhe nikala hai
Main hoon chhota sa ek tinka
Jameen pe mujhe phir giraya hai
Pairo ne mujhe kuchala hai
Pani ne mujhe phir ugaya hai
Mali (gardner) ne mujhe phir kata hai
Main hoon chhota sa ek tinka
Hawaone phir mujhe udaya hai
It is pretty much relate to any woman. it relates lot more to Simi. Like the way simi was treated in her house with the line pairo ne mujhe kuchla hai.
Mali ne mujhe phir se kata hai manju cut her relationship with simi and asks her not to return to KB. manju here a is mali .
Hawa one phir mujhe udaya hai she was again forced out of Tarnejas. So here simi is a tinka
Kisiki ankhone mujhe samaya hai.
Inhi ankho ko maine rulaya hai.
this will apply to Simi and RS. RS loving simi so much and simi not listening to him and ready to marry Nakul making him cry.. it also applies to abhi and simi. as abhi loved her so much and she made him cry again and again.
Edited by ramas - 15 years ago
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