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Posted: 15 years ago
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Out of the gutter of filth and diabolically bad writing, a KB writer decided to secretly write a scene that was touching and fitting for the likes of the dushum, dushum, out of control melodrama that has graced us for the past three months. RS's reading of Simi's writngs was both well written superberbly acted by Alka Amin, Hanar Halli, Banwari Teneja and Waseem Musthtaq.
When someone dies, a writing of theirs or description of them is read during their funeral; it is done in praise and remember of the person. This reading was Simi's Eulogy a good-bye to her. Alka Amin was incredible; you could sense a combination of anger, regret, loss, shame, and sadness. Her pride overtaking her unwillingness to forgive cannot hide her grief at the thought of losing her own daughter not just to Abhi but in her own heart. While she will continue to remain steadfast in her desire to remove Simi from herself, she knows that Simi runs in her blood and vice versa and she will never succeed.
Her determination to fight has already started with the seperation of herself and RS (didn't I suggest that in my post that someone complained about last night😡, so where are now???).
For most viewers on this forum this scene was clearly not appreciated. Not one single post was mentioned about this scene all day!!!! Were we watching a different show? How could you guys have even missed this scene? It was nearly 1/3 of the show!!!!!????
I guess more forum members were aching for more melodrama and Abhi and Simi scenes. That's fine, but for someone like me who have studied acting, I was really impressed with Alka Amin's performance. She is amazing. Her ability to express a multitude of emotions in one moment are outstanding.
So KB; whatever mood you were in when you wrote this or whoever wrote this, this is what is called QUALITY writing. Thank you for bringing back a sense of humanity in Manju which I used to argue about earlier on. Manju is not an evil mother and I have said this in numerous posts. She is a mother who is very typical of many Indian parents who tragically think they know what is right for their children without realizing that someitmes they can be wrong, very wrong.
Disclaimmer: This post was not written as an attempt to write someothing postive. Should I get a patronizing response be perpared for a repsonse by me. 😉😡
As for the writer who wrote this? Run and hide, the KB team are looking for you for "ruining" their show!!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Manju was totally touched by the way Simi had written about Mera Ghar !!.. Somewhere deep inside she was feeling soo unhappy that Simi is not there.
Actually in a way its good As Simi is away from her now she will feel the distance and she will want to see her and then maybe she will reconcile with her daughter..

So you want more scenes like this !! This portion what the writers gave was good according to you?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Manju was totally touched by the way Simi had written about Mera Ghar !!.. Somewhere deep inside she was feeling soo unhappy that Simi is not there.
Actually in a way its good As Simi is away from her now she will feel the distance and she will want to see her and then maybe she will reconcile with her daughter..

So you want more scenes like this !! This portion what the writers gave was good according to you?

Is it wrong to ask for quality writing and acting? Why, what did you see when you saw it? What is quality writing and acting for you Shanti?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yes definately Script plays an important role.. I now hope the next phase of the life of Simi will be called in by the same writer !! Kuch dhamaak ho jaye tu achha rahega !! Otherwise I will ask themn to hire you😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was a beautiful essay . It is too early for eulogy. RS was just missing simi and read that essay which moved every one I did mention that in one of my post.

It was absolutely great scene even anuj was moved. For RS simi is not dead but very much alive so why would he do her eulogy😒. A loving father who was truly missing his daughter and found something beautiful that she wrote and read it remebering her That made every one missed her and remembr her as siimi no longer is coming to that house.
When daughter is married parents do miss and miss her the most when she leaves the house first time. It is not easy for loving father to forget his daughter because she is married. So he tries to remember by her work. He wantted to talk to her but he saw all her stuff and got emotional finding he diary.
I have no idea why would this be consider even eulogy the title really shocked me.😔
The entire scene was so heart touching that made me cry.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

It was a beautiful essay . It is too early for eulogy. RS was just missing simi and read that essay which moved every one I did mention that in one of my post.

It was absolutely great scene even anuj was moved. For RS simi is not dead but very much alive so why would he do her eulogy😒. A loving father who was truly missing his daughter and found something beautiful that she wrote and read it remebering her That made every one missed her and remembr her as siimi no longer is coming to that house.
When daughter is married parents do miss and miss her the most when she leaves the house first time. It is not easy for loving father to forget his daughter because she is married. So he tries to remember by her work. He wantted to talk to her but he saw all her stuff and got emotional finding he diary.
I have no idea why would this be consider even eulogy the title really shocked me.😔
The entire scene was so heart touching that made me cry.

I don't think you grasp the post or the meaning behind what was being done in this scene. The concept of a Eulogy is a remberance of a person. Simi's memory is being erased from the home. When the story Meri Ghar was read, that was her Eulogy - the rememberance of her. A way of saying "good-bye." I am sorry you do not grasp this but a lot of writers in the world where I am come from would.
Second, do you always feel the need to educate me with your opinion on things Ramas? I am a well educated person and know full well that parents miss their children when they marry them so why was there a need to tell me all of this? I find it rather unnecessary and added nothing to the point I was trying to make.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Yes definately Script plays an important role.. I now hope the next phase of the life of Simi will be called in by the same writer !! Kuch dhamaak ho jaye tu achha rahega !! Otherwise I will ask themn to hire you😉

I'd give ya'll more Abhi and Simi scenes that for sure - at least my version of them. Heck I wouldn't care about the TRP ratings😛😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laila2009

Out of the gutter of filth and diabolically bad writing, a KB writer decided to secretly write a scene that was touching and fitting for the likes of the dushum, dushum, out of control melodrama that has graced us for the past three months. RS's reading of Simi's writngs was both well written superberbly acted by Alka Amin, Hanar Halli, Banwari Teneja and Waseem Musthtaq.

When someone dies, a writing of theirs or description of them is read during their funeral; it is done in praise and remember of the person. This reading was Simi's Eulogy a good-bye to her. Alka Amin was incredible; you could sense a combination of anger, regret, loss, shame, and sadness. Her pride overtaking her unwillingness to forgive cannot hide her grief at the thought of losing her own daughter not just to Abhi but in her own heart. While she will continue to remain steadfast in her desire to remove Simi from herself, she knows that Simi runs in her blood and vice versa and she will never succeed.
Her determination to fight has already started with the seperation of herself and RS (didn't I suggest that in my post that someone complained about last night😡, so where are now???).
For most viewers on this forum this scene was clearly not appreciated. Not one single post was mentioned about this scene all day!!!! Were we watching a different show? How could you guys have even missed this scene? It was nearly 1/3 of the show!!!!!????
I guess more forum members were aching for more melodrama and Abhi and Simi scenes. That's fine, but for someone like me who have studied acting, I was really impressed with Alka Amin's performance. She is amazing. Her ability to express a multitude of emotions in one moment are outstanding.
So KB; whatever mood you were in when you wrote this or whoever wrote this, this is what is called QUALITY writing. Thank you for bringing back a sense of humanity in Manju which I used to argue about earlier on. Manju is not an evil mother and I have said this in numerous posts. She is a mother who is very typical of many Indian parents who tragically think they know what is right for their children without realizing that someitmes they can be wrong, very wrong.
Disclaimmer: This post was not written as an attempt to write someothing postive. Should I get a patronizing response be perpared for a repsonse by me. 😉😡
As for the writer who wrote this? Run and hide, the KB team are looking for you for "ruining" their show!!!😛



Superb review of the episode today Laila! Oh! What an episode that was, I was taken back to the times where I used to long to watch KB.
I was so caught up in replying to comments from today morning that I could neither watch this episode peacefully, nor I got to write anything about todays episode till now. But I did enjoy todays episode though I was frustrated by turn of events in the forum off late.

I have no interest in Neetu and her dramas. I care less for how much of hell she wants to create for herself at the Dagars. Neither am I interested in Abhi & Simi romance until they grow some confidence and depth in the characters Simi and Abhi respectively.

As you identified majority of todays episode was of that scene, but when that scene started, I was wondering now this Diary, is that something similar to those Simi's double degrees certificates and the PhD thesis(?), but then I could forgive for the drama that followed.

Devyani didn't have much to do.
Waseem and Hunar were apt. I don't know why they play ping-pong with Anuj. Waseem has good potential and why can't they utilize that, is something I can't understand.
I wasn't very happy with Banwari's diction when he started reading Simi's diary/childhood assignment, but it was ok because what he kept reading later on was clear and I was just listening to him. My full concentration was on Manju.

Today it was Alka's day and she rightly takes away all the adulation. I was just awestruck with her. Here was a mother who just a few hours back has announced to the world that she is going to perform the last rites of the eldest daughter, but when she sees how happy her husband was for their eldest daughter, she had lost half the battle. She was crying with mixed emotions. Mixed emotions of deception, anger, frustration, failure and loss.

How aptly you call that scene a Eulogy.👏👏 It was an eulogy for a daughter that Manju wanted to be thought as dead. The way she breaks down even more when RS reads out the lines about heart, blood and pluse, Simi will always remain as Manju's pulse until Manju's last breath. Manju cannot erase that how much ever she tries.

When Manju tells Anita, oh! you don't have to worry about going out in the street, I wanted to tell Manju, "oh! is that so Manju? Simi's deception made you this confident? Be like this for everything, give two hoots for the society who will not be there when you need them."

Finally Simi's book move into RS' room and out goes Manju. With this she would be left with only quarter more of her battle. Oh the clothes can be handed over to Simi when RS' goes to greet his daughter and SIL at her new abode. If they don't , then Abhi can always get her a new wardrobe.

I would like to mention the others in todays episode - Actor who plays Anusha is getting better, as I see some improvement, could be growing confidence in the actor with her increasing role.
I wasn't really convinced with Abhi (not Neil). For a person who just brought home his lover(or wife) after so much of drama, he needed more compassion towards his partner.
Creatives really made me disappointed again with Simi, very bad screenplay in those parts.
Simi and Abhi's was supposed to be a tender moment, but it lacked to evoke my sympathies, it was just very average. The dialogues and the screenplay didn't do justice for that scene.
It did look like the creatives have all the intention of returning RB again.

I liked the lines highlighted above in your post in blue.

I think 'superb' word will not do justice, so, let me rephrase it - What an awesome write-up for an awesome scene. 👏👏👏 Kudos for a well written post.👍🏼 Kudos also go for the creative team for that scene.👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Laila , bee very well said about simi writing about mera ghar. and manjus reaction. we could really feel what she was going through also RS's feeling . I felt RS over acted a bit the last part where he was crying and wiping his tears before anita coming into picture.
actually i wanted them to read more at least the way she sacrifices her happiness for her family and manju realising her loss....... but then they stopped there it self.
infact when RS was reading it simis abscence was really felt in the house and also her innocense in the letter or the writings.
coming to Abhi and simi, we cant expect a nice scene or a romantic scene for them now. imagine the sadness or the depression she will be facing as her mother has disowned her . she dosent know what her father will think about her .
I quiet liked the uncomfortableness they had between them when they both were there alone in the room. howmuch ever u know a person when u are alone together that also the first time after marraige there will naturally be an awkard feeling and also both of them diddnt know what to say to each other , also the way abhi said i will just come and simi shakes her head.they really showed the uncomfortble feeling they had.
Also i am not expecting any romantic moment so early. as they have to be used to each other first.
About neetu forget her . shes crazy , wonder what dram she will create now..... actually wanted her to tell daadi that shes pregnant and because of her simi was ready to get married to neetu. so in that way daadi and nakul might understand simi, lets see what happents today.
Our dear RB really has plans (and am sure not a very good plan) for abhi and simi.😉.
waiting for RBs chaal.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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laila,
i really can't write big debate bt i wanna say one thing that plz be as u r because u r outstanding with ur posts and ur above post was drastically spunky..and alka is very rocking actress of KB as you said and i would not be hesitate that she is even better than simi..!!!

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