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So this is my first OS. It is only one part long, please comment and constructive criticism is appreciated
So Khushi has finally decided what she is going to do in terms of lucknow! She has thought to herself that there is no point going back without being able to help her perants and without any financial support, so what they have decided to do is send payel back now, and khushi will go a month later after getting some money to support her perants.
Khushi is coming back from the train station after sending her older sister off back to lucknow, it is the usuall starplus gunda scene-weather/night time/wind and she is in a ricshaw on her way back to nand kisore buaji. suddenly the rickshaw breaks down and the driver says that she will have to walk it, she is scared but our brave khushi is determined to get things right and get home so the first thing she does in the morning is find a job.
she starts walking and by now she has been walking for 20 minutes on a sunsaan road all alone, she has started to become tired and by now is drenched. she hears the sound of cheap moterbikes in the distance and drunkens laughter, she thinks to herself "tu peeche mat dekh khushi, tu apne kaam se kaam rack, woh gunde challe jayenge" however the gunde are now close and when they see a girl alone they try to take full advantage, they start to whistle and typical 'cheerna' meanwhile are hero saab Arnav has been to the damaged farmhouse building that got dameged in the rain a month ago(the same building he had sent khushi to), and he is driving with his car on that road however he yet cannot see the drama taking place with khushi,
meanwhile with khushi the goons have taken her dupatta off her and one is holding her by her hands and she is screaming and trying to run free, by this time arnav has reached the place and stops the car, and firmly yet with anger takes his coat off, still in the car. he gets out the car and khushi looks at him with relief yet confusion as to how and why he is here at this time.
Arnav: "ek larki koh akela kya dekh liya, to shuroo ho gaye tum loog"
and he doesnt wait another second and gets straight into to hitting them and protecting his beloved khushi. all the goon are on the floor except one, the goon creeps behind arnav with a knife, khushi sees this and shoutes "ARNAAAV" he quickly looks back and grabs the knife coming his way with his hand, allowing the knife to jerk a deep cut on his frim palm. he punches the goon and now they are all pretty much down.
Khushi is in shock, arnav however asks her "tum theek to ho na khushi" and passes her her dupatta, when she doesnt take it(becouse she is still in shock) he places the dupatta(in slow motion ofcourse) on her neckline, (rabba ve) (eyelock) he tells her to come inside the car so he can drop her home, he OPENS THE DOOR FOR HERRR and she fallows swiftly still in shock.
INSIDE THE CAR:
As arnav sees that khushi is completely drenched, he passes her his own coat, "isko pehen lo, warna tumhe taand na lag ja---" he suddenly stops as he doesnt want to show her too much affection and returns to his typical stern face, as khushi is taking the coat, she sees the very deep, now ooozing with blood cut on his palm, and in horror and utter worry she looks at arnav, and has a flashback of all the times he has saved her, (and thats quite a lot!) and is now guilty that because of her he is now in pain because of the cut, if only she knew that Arnav is in pain when he sees khsuhi in pain.
the drama closes,
please please comment and tell me your thoughts, this is my first OS and please tell me if I should go on writing more like these! thankyou so much for reading. 
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