Chapter 53
..lolz...
RECAP-Sujal and Kashish have left out for some dinner!...unplanned..
IN THE CAR!...
S-Kashish...can I ask u a question
K-U Jus did!..
S-Shut-up(hez in no mood for jokes)..
K-Yah...?
S-Why do u get so hungry..when your pregnant..
K-HOW SHOOD I NOE!...This is my first time 2!..
S-Relly?
Kashish who is looking at her nails...looks at Sujal..with the side of her eye..
N-NO!!.....she says sarcastlly..and for some reason excitedly!..lolz.
A Red light comes ...so they stop!..and a car stops...beside theres...(u no..like...how there beside eachother!)..which has a relly hot guy in it!...
Kashish starts staring...
Sujal who is focusing on the road..looks at Kashish...
S-Kashish what are you doing?...
K-Sujal..that dude is so hott(she says still looking at the car)...
S-Plzz...Kashish...ur married!!...
Kashish slowly turns her head!..
K-Ur Married..and u got another woman pregnant and shez living with us!....
From then its quite...aaalll the way!!...................................
Finally they reach Taco-Bell!...
They order threw...drive-thru!....
K-Finally!...(she says looking at her food)..
Sujal just roles his eyes..and pays the lady!...
And they start driving..
K-Sujalll..
Sujal applyz..the breaks..
screeeeeeeetch!....
S-WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
K-stop the car somewhere..I Dont want to eat in the car...it
S-Why?
K-It Makes me sick
S-Then eat at home
K-No...Its worse..there...
S-What...How?..
K-Theres someone there..that will make me loose my apitite(spelling) in total!..
Sujal just roles his eyes..and parks up by a park...near by!...
K-Yahh....Were here..!..
Kashish just runs outside..forgetting..about her food!!...
The thunder breaks..and it starts raining heavily!..
S-Kashish your food!!
Sujal yells...from the car...But kashish is to buzy playing..in the rain...
Sujal keeps watching her..and for some reason..he thinks its cute..how shez..about to become a mother...but shez still acting like a kid..
Sujal starts walking upto her...
Who is onli wearing..a tank-top(a guyz kind..that..guyz usually..wears...while working out!)..
Kashish is twirling around and arond..and has forgot were she is anymore!...
Until she stops...when her hand hits...Sujal..who is staring..at her...Kashish is looking bak at him...
and doesnt noe what shez doing...and she by mistakely trips on a rock...
But..Sujal catches her in his arms..and now there just looking..into eachother eyes...like crazy!...With Sujal having his arms around..kashishz..waist..and Kashish just holing onto the front..of Sujalz. shirt....
Lets end it here!..Plzzzzz..COMMENT!....Ill Be waiting!!
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Awwnn..Hun Ur Tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Kind...umm..I Cant say thanks..so Im going to saaayyy!.. I LUB JUUUU!
17 years ago
Fanks Hun! ...Keep reading!..and glad you liked it!
17 years ago
hey im a new reader.....just read ur story from start to finish.....and really luvd it....its way tooo cooooool....especially loved the last 2 parts..really cute.....plz do continue soon.... luv, vandana
17 years ago
shantelle dear your story is worth all the praise... your story is just too fantastic....u say my comments make your day but the fact is that your story makes my day.. fikhar not yaar me will never leave reading ur story kyunke i love it totally.. aur main kya bewakoof hoon ki itni achchi story na padoon.. agar nahi padoongi tho nuksaan mera hi hoga.. aur main apna nuksaan nahi chahthi... so me will always read your story & give comments that will make u blush.... just like this...... continue soon..me waiting..palkein bichake for you to continue.....& please don't thank me , ur story deserves all the appreciation............
17 years ago
Suri..Hunni....Ur liking mi fan-fic too much...i dont even rite that good!..sheeessh..lolz...your making me blush.....Mann..your comments make my day!..I wunder If I Wood have even been able to write this good..if i didnt have your support and comments..mann..luv you!!..u made my day......DONT EVER STOP READING MY FAN-FIC ....OR ELSE!!....lolz..jk...But Im sure you wont...thankssss afinity ...suri di........ill try to continue soooon..take care!!
17 years ago
WOW!!..It took you that long to read it?..lolz..wow i rite a lot..lolz...n e ways..glad u like it...and glad to have a new reader..welcome!
17 years ago
WOW!!..It took you that long to read it?..lolz..wow i rite a lot..lolz...n e ways..glad u like it...and glad to have a new reader..welcome!
17 years ago
oh my god....i dunt believe it........i read it from part one to part 49.......u know i strted reading it from 10 at nite till 4 at morning....it is gr8,awesome,superb(actually i am feeling sleepy as it is really too late).....Plzzzzzzzz Cont soon [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [ =D] [
17 years ago
gr8 part..... ...really cute.... ...continue soon....
17 years ago
shantelle yaar...you are justt too damn awesome... i love your story totally... kasam se keh rahi hoon... you are a damn good writer... hamesha you give a differnt & intresting twist... there is always a twist in the tale in your story... your story is totally fantabulous..splendid...awesome...amazing... marvellous....super cooll....stupendous... you are just tooo goodddd....me totally fida on your writing style... har bar tum itna achcha likhthi ho ki i'am in a total aw of it.. har bar jab tum likhthi ho tho mera mooh khulla ka khulla reh jaatha hain.... i seriously enjoy your writing very very very very very very very damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh tho sujal kashish se poochtha hain ki y do she feel soo hungry when she is pregnant.. aur kashish ka jawaab dena... uske liye... mujhe tho badi hasi aa rahi thi.... sujal , kashish hamesha bachcho ki tarah ladthe hain.. they are very cute.. & even their fights are.... me getting hasi on their haal.... kashish likes a guy... aur sujal kehtha hain ki she is married...ohh..yaa..lagtha hain somebody is very jealous.. yeh sujal ko bhi jalan ho rahi hain gooddddd... phir kashish ka usse mooh thod jawaab dena... oye..oye... me bajaing seethi... very coollllllllllllllllllllll..... zabardast....... loved it dil se.... then in car while coming back..kashish ki baatein indirectly pointing out at esha...sujal stopping the car... kashish playing in the rain... sujal getting attracted to her... he seeing her , admiring her beauty.... then kashish ka bhi sujal ko dekhna.. her tripping..but before she falls sujal catches her in his strong pair of arms... kashish catching onto sujal shirt.... un dono ka ek dusare mein kho jaana........... yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hye...hyee....balle...ballee....how very romactic is this.... man...very mind lowing.....mujhko tho sharam aa rahi hain... dear ek request hain aad thoda achche ac
17 years ago