PART-156
ANGAD CALLED THE COMMISSIONER 2 ASK IF THEY HAVE FOUND ANY INFO ABT WHERE MANEK N KRIPA COULS B?
com-dekhiye mr khanna hum apni puri koshish kar rahe hai u don't worry hum jald hi mrs khanna ka pata aga denge
a-wat the **** do u mean by don't worry?
com-calm down mr khanna
a-(chills out) ok n i'm sorry 4 the rude language
com-its ok mr khanna i can understand ur situation n v r trying r level best
a-ok bye
then suddenly aaliya rushes into his room n switches on the tv
aa-bhai u need 2 look at this
aaliya put it 2 a news channel n it came that the reporter was saying.........
reporter -there is a breaking news humarem studio ko kisine call up kiya n has told us that kripa khanna is kidnaped buy a guy named manek , yeh manek vo hi hai jisne pehle bhi angad khanna ko marne ki koshish ki thi lekin vo court jate samay bhaggaiye the
b4 lisning any further angad took the remote from aaliya's hand n switched off the tv
a-main us manek ko chodunga nahi , ussne hi call kiya hoga
aa-bhai just relax ok , kripa mil jaiyegi u dont worry
a-i have 2 find her , bye i m going
aa-bhai ruko , where will u find her? the poliec is also at the case n if they haven't ound any clue yet then how can u do anything?
a-i don't care aaliya atleast i want 2 try instead of sitting here n suffering
angad sat in his car n drove 4 hours n showed ppl manek's picture n asked if they had seen him somewhere but no 1 had seen manek
angad was crying in his car n he decided 2 head 2 the beach
he was sitting on the rocks n looking at the waves n remembering all the sweet moments between him n kripa n tears would not just stop flowing from his eyes
a-(2himself) kripa i love u
i can't live without u
i need u
i want u
i can't live without seeing u by my side
he returned home
a few days passed n angad would still try 2 find kripa
the poliec was still on the case but not even a clue could b found
kripa on the other hand haden't eaten much just once in a while she had food
manek would threaten her n frighten her
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Arra Dollie @insia12
18 years ago
Do watever u want pritoo!!!only thing i want is u 2 cont!
Hawa @hawoo
18 years ago
lolz well i dont know u got me so used to it besides the one b4 was to kind of tease uso now u rite it the way u want...but i'd like romantic partz but dont make it tooo romantic but also make a lil sad...hehe lolz
Hira @Hiraa
18 years ago
Hey,, finally i read the whole fan fic, and it's awsome.
I was blushing while reading every part .
Bring kripa home, bechara angad .
about killing manek, hmmmm i don't think "you should kill manek", then it wont be that interastning if you understand what i mean( i don't mean that it's not interastning, it's awsome) let him go to tha jail first and suffer there, and then kill him. But plzzzz bring kripa home sooooooon. and plzz cont. soon
pink sky @pink sky
18 years ago
yeah kill manek the villain please no more sad parts only romantic parts
pink sky38847.4526967593
sehar @sweet honey
18 years ago
aagggggghhhhh manek no more sad parts plzz
Sir-Please @Sir-Please
+ 5
18 years ago
fab and sad parts
keep up the gud work
cont soon
kill that idoit manek
Divjot_10 @Divjot_10
18 years ago
yeah..... totally kill manek and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no more sat parts at all. PLzzzzzzzzzz.....plzzzzzzzzzz
Divjot
lucky-moon @lucky-moon
18 years ago
yeah killl manek i hate him and plus no more sad part
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
first u all shout at saying that don't make ur blush sooo much ( n specially u hawoo ) n now when i m not making u all blush u all r shouting at me saying that i should make u all blush
if i don't write romantic parts then it has 2 b a sad part
so now u all decide whether u all want romantic parts or sad parts
if u all want romantic parts then i will kill manek ealry n end this manek situation
so now tell me should i write romantic parts or sad parts
Hawa @hawoo
18 years ago
kya yaar ajj rula
diya na warna hamesha mujhe blush karwati ho...ajj to kuch bhi nahi hua huwy up and make me BLUSH cont soooon