PART-150
next mornig a-k return 2 the house
k-angad aaj kaha jaiye?
a-lets go side seeing!
k-gr8 idea
then a-k freshnup n go 4 side seeing
kripa sees someone n gets shocked
she starts shivering
angad looks at her n is shocked
a-kya hua kripa is everhing alright?
k-angad waha (n she points out 2 a direction)
angad can see someone's figure but since he is alredy runnning he couldn't see his face
angad stared running behing that person 2 see who he is
they ran 4 a while but then that person dissappeared in the crowd
a-kaun tha vo?
then angad went back 2 the place where he n kripa were but kripa was not there
a-kripa kaha chali gaiye?
he serched 4 kripa but couldn't find her
angad was scared n got tensed up
he wanted 2 call on her cell but his own cell was in the car
the went 2 the car but when he reached there
he heard some sound comming from the diccky of the car
he opened it n saw kripa there
her mouth was tied with a cloth n here legs n hand with a rope
angad was shocked n her quickly pick her up n untied the rope n cloth
kripa was crying n hugged him
a-kripa tell me who did this
but b4 kripa could answer ... she fainted
angad took her home n called the doctor
doc- maine usse sone(sleep) ki inection gi hai so she will sleep 4 10 hrs
a-thank you doctor
then the doctor left
angad went n sat next 2 her
he ran his hands thourgh her hair n gave her a kiss on the forehead
a-(with tears from his eyes) i love you
he fell asleep sitting next 2 her
next morning he got up by the alram ringing
BEEP BEEP BEEP
he switched it off n looked at kripa
she was still sleeping
he kissed her on the cheeks n said good morning
then he went 2 the kitchen 2 make breakfast
when he returned he saw kripa standing at the window -motionless
he walked quickly 2 her n hugged her from behind
kripa got scared by this cause she was still in shock
kripa tried 2 move away from angad but he calmed her
a-kripa relax its me
kripa hugged him n was crying n angad kisse her on the head n hugged her back n was calming her
a-shhhhhhh tumhe kuch nahi hoga i'll there with u
k-(crying bitterly) angad vo...vo wapas aagaya hai
a-kaun kripa who?
k-manek
a-
kripa r u sure?
k-(still crying) ( n now getting hyper) vo mujhe maarna chata hai .....(even more hyper now) he said that cause of me he is in this state....cause of me he did all that n i didn't love him......so now he is back n he said that he won't kill me so easily .... he will torture n kill me
(screaming) angad he wants 2 kill me.... manek wants 2 kill me
a-(screamt even louder) shut up
k - --
a-(firmly) nothing will happen 2 u u got it .... nothing
n then he hugged her n kripa hugged him even tighter with the fear of not dying but loosing him
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Arra Dollie @insia12
18 years ago
I m getting fida at ur writing pritoo!!!
Iqra
Sadiyah Pandor @SADIYAH
18 years ago
kitna accha likti ho tum!!!cont.soon
Hawa @hawoo
18 years ago
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!! IKNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW THAT YOU'D BRING MANEK BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT was so obvious but suspenceful.........but i lubb that the manek twist came a lil long while l8r...plz cont soon cant wait
Roshni @* ~ Roshni ~ *
+ 2
18 years ago
Gr8 part and gr8 twist, I had a feeling it would b manek, cud he and simone b working 2gether?
girlie18 @girlie18
18 years ago
It was gr8 I love da new twist plz cont soon
cute_angle92 @cute_angle92
18 years ago
It was great and I loveed the new twist plz cont.
Cute Angle
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
hey i hope u all liked the new twist!!!! i wanted 2 make it suspence n thriller type!!!!! but still since its my fan fic there had\s 2 b a bit of romance na