PART-63
then kripa n karthik go 2 thir home n so does dadi
then the camera goes 2 maneks room he is shouting someone at the phone
m-tumhe ek kaam kaha tha tum vo bhi nahi karsakte the u useless person
guy-sorry boss gali ho gaye
m-i don't want any more sorries tum bas aapna kaam thek se karo
then he shuts the phone
2himself-hey angad maine kitne baar koshish ki vo mar jaiye lekin ........... is baar bhi vo bach gaya
(it manek who is trying 2 kill angad!!!!!!!!) vaise achha hi hai ki logo ko lagta hai ki yeh ek accident hai
next morning kripa comes 2 meet angad
they both r talking in angad's room when suddenly manek comes n asks the address of a place(its a tourist centre)
a-manek tum ghumne jaa rahe ho
m-ha maine soocha ki i'll c around
a-kripa tum ek kaam karo u take manek around n show him some cool places
k-tumhe is halat main chod kar main akele nahi jayungi
a-kripa don't b silly yaha sab hai na mera khayal rakhne keliye hai na
k-ha par....
a-kripa manek is r guest n come on b a good grl
k-ok fine
m-main aapne coat leke aata hu
as soon as manek goes out of the room angad pulls kripa 2wards him
a-mujhe zyada miss mat karna
k-kisne kaha ki main tumhe miss karungi?
a-ofcause u will
k-vo sab chodo , tum khana thek se khana varna aunty tunhe daat degi
a-ok
k-bye
a-achha suno
k-kya?
a-jaldi aana i will miss u
k-
i will miss u 2
a-ek aur baat
k-kya?
a-mera good bye kiss
k-
just then manek entres the room n is jealous 2 c a-k so close
but a-k never realise that manek is standing at the door n a-k r cooming closer n closer n they r only 1 cm away from kissing
when manek caughs 2 bring them back 2 their sences
a-k r blushing n manek says -kripa main tumhara neeche gadi main inta gaar karta hu galdi aana
then manek left
kripa stood up n said bye was abt 2 go when angad pulled her again
a-mera kiss?
then a-k give a passionate kiss n they blush then kripa leaves
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gita @guddi085
18 years ago
hey krips....where r u????????????????????????????????????????????????//...plzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....continue sooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...
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guddi
Khushi @khushi19
18 years ago
hey great fanfic pls cont soon
kutie4teen @kutie4teen
18 years ago
Great Part
Plzzz cont. soon
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
thanx 4 ur comments all u ppl out there
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
hey sorry i will not b able 2 continue any more part 2day or may b i will i m not sure i m just sooooo excited that i got my first cell 2 day
Sir-Please @Sir-Please
+ 5
18 years ago
amazing parts
congrats kripa
cont soon
gita @guddi085
18 years ago
hey kriiipppsss....connggrrraaaattttsssss...n GREAT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzcont inue soooonnnnnnn......love every bit of romance in ur fan fic....
luv
guddi
farry @karipa
18 years ago
wow congrates n gr8 part con soon
Arra Dollie @insia12
18 years ago
Congrats an continue soon!!
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
hey everyone 2 day i m getting my first cell n so i m veryyyyyyyyyy happy n so i m giving u all a treat by continueing many parts hope u enjoy reading them