THIS IS A FICTIONAL STORY BASED ON 2 CHARACTERS ASHWIN AND RHEA/ANVI ASHWIN ...
A widow, Gauri met her long lost friend Omkara in a family function, who still ...
Life Journey of two people poles apart in career, status and style. One is the ...
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Ria @~Angel~
18 years ago
wowwwww fab jobb
plz conttttt soooon
kutie4teen @kutie4teen
18 years ago
hey ur story is gr8 plzzzzzzz cont soon!!
Mehndi @-Cupcake-
+ 5
18 years ago
hii pritika ur story is awesome,plz cont soon
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
hey firstly i did not mind at all that u posted a long message infact i was happy 2 c someone posting a long messange 4 me
n thanx even i like my name but mostly all came me kripa or bebo(my petnames)
i just came online i will post the next part in abt 30 mins
ashita @ashita_tweety
18 years ago
gr8 work pritika I LOVED YOUR NAME
anyways i just started reading your fan fic yesterday and must say u r just toooooooooooooooo good
yesterday i just read the part when he goes in coma and then i had some internet problem and was soooooooo eager to know that i made my bro slove the problem 12 30 midnight
i loved when u introduced the remix gang .
cute scenes btw angad and kripa
and ya that 8 pm not going to the disco i couldnt stop laughing bcoz it reminded me of someone who hates going out at 8
and will make it a point to tell my frien also to read it
soory for posting a long messaga
lol
ashi
radhika @radz
18 years ago
pls continue soon bebo
dam kool
waiting 4 the big part
luv u n
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
hey sorry i rote such a small part but i promise in the evenini i will rite a big part n it will b very interesting
preview:a-k make up n some new characters intro
so keep checkin if i have continued cause the next part is very interestin ,believe me