PART-7
kripa goes home in her black sports car
. When she reaches home there is a call on her cell
tring tring tring
(someone=s)
k-hello
s-kaise hai meri gudiya
k-bhaya mujhe aapse baat nahi karni hai
s-arre maine sorry keh raha hu na
k-i don't care
s-gudiya tumhe to pata hai na ki vo meeting kitni important thi main chakar bhi usse pospone nahi kar sakta tha
k-main aapke sab bahane jaanti hu
s-gudiya meri baat to suno .........n he is interupted by kripa
k-muhje kuch nahi sunna the point is that aapne mera itna bada show miss kardiya , pata hai main kitni nervous thi , mujhe aapke moral support ki bauhat zarurat thi par aap vaha the hi nahi
s-ab mein ne sorry kaha n gudiya
k-i don't care mujhe aapse baat nahi karni n bye
sayin this kripa cuts the phone n goes 2 her room n when she ons the light of the room she is surprised 2 c the hole room filled willed flowers non the table r her favorite choclates
she looks around the room n a smile spreads on her face n she says....
k-bhaya bahar aa jayea chupne ki koi jarurat nahi
then v c the face of a person who is commin out from bhind the door n first v c his eyes then v c his nose then lips n finally v c his full face n it is the very sweet
karthik!!!!!!!!!!
(karthik=ka)
ka-sorry gudiya (n he catches his ears)
kripa bursts out laughin n says its ok bhaya n next time don't take me 2 seriously
ka-matlab tum mujhse naraz nahi thi
k-(makes a innocent face) maine kab kaha ki min aapse naraz hu n she begines 2 laugh once again
ka-agar tum mujhse naraz nahi ho to phir main yeh sare choclates vapas leta hu
k-nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
n kripa runs 2wards her cholates n hugs them
ka-(laughing) kripa tum ab tak bachi hi ho jab bhi choclate dekhti ho tu kise ke saath share nahi karti
k-bhai aapko to pata hi hai ki mujhe choclates kitneeeeeeee pasand hai
ka-aur jab tumhare pati hoga aur vo tumse choclate mangega to tum kya karo ge
k-main......main......main.....main usse pit dungi
ka laughs n says - vaise kal tumhare college ka aa khri din hai na
k- are ha bhaya aur ek baat vo actually kya hai n ki college ke baad aaliya vapas mumbai ja rahi hai , n i wantd 2 spend sometime time with her afterall she is my best friend, so i invited her 2 stay at our house 4 atleast a week i hope u dont mind
ka- aaliya bhi mere chooti behan ki taha hai n y should i mind it infact i would love 2 have aaliya over here n spend time with both my sisters
k-thankuuuuuuu bhai
ka-anyways gudiya its late now n u should sleep now
k-ok bhaya good nite
kripa changes into her night dress n is not sleepy so she decideds 2 c tv
she keeps changin channels n finally she stops at a music channel the song chaska is goin
n after it gets over another song starts n it is of ANGAD
the song is jo tum nahi paas
kripa(to herself)-yeh to angad hai aaliya ka bhai,vaise maine yeh soocha nahi but he looks soooo cute n hot ,but isse dekhke to lagta hai ki bauhat hi attitude hoga n anyways boys who look good r very proudy of them selves
aftersometime kripa feels sleepy n goes 2 sleep
preview: ANGAD'S ENTRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
actually i have ritten many fan fics but this is the first fan fic fan fic that i have started on my own
i have ritten parts in fan fic romantic getaway n some other
but this fan fic is started itself by me
cutenash @cutenash
18 years ago
anywayz i read all the parts and they were very very gud
Loved it !! i do'nt belive this is ur first one u r too gud at this
cutenash @cutenash
18 years ago
Oh so sorry for u Pritu dear take care and plz take ur time there is no hurry
Luv u
Nash
maryam @nottyangel
18 years ago
pritika take ur time sweety
take care
lub
maryam
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
soooooooooooo sorry i could not continue actually a relative of my died n so i had 2 go there
i promise i will continue 2day n thanx 4 being so patient with me
Ria @~Angel~
18 years ago
that was a really gooood startinggggggg plz contttt
ssoooooooooooooooooooooon
kaash @kaash
18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....luv it pritika
zarna @zarna
18 years ago
continue yaar
tumhari kahani atak gayi wanna read about agnad's entry
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
actually i will continue tommorrow
pritika @angadkripafan
+ 2
18 years ago
thankuuuuuuuu divi n don't worry i will continue very very soon