as they were going.......on the way..the car stops working....
k: kya hua?
a: lagta hai.....gaadi kharab ho gayi...
k: to dekho na.....
a: mein koi mechanic nahi hu......
k: par...kya kharabi hai woh to dekh sakte ho na.....
a: ok ruko.....
he sees and there was some problem(even i dont know what?)suddenly it starts raining......angad enters the car......
a: ab kya akre?
k: aas paas dekho kuch to hoga aaj rat gujarne ke liye....
they looks around throught the window of the car......kripa spots some light coming from somewhere.....anagd adn kripa run throught the rain and comes across a hotel........
k: wow...yaha to hotel bhi hai.....
a: ya chalo....
they enter the hotel....anagd goes to the reception....
r: good evening sir..may i help you?
a: ya...can i have two rooms pls....
r: wait a min(looks throught h e computer) i am sorry sir...tej baarish ki wajah se aaj yaha par bahat saare guest hai...hamare pas sirf ek hi room baaki hai.....
a: ok...i'l take it...thanx....
r: welcome sir....have a good night sleep.....
a: thanx...
a: sorry kripa sirf ek hi room mila.....
k: agar do kamre milte to bhi mein ek kamre emin akele kaha so paati.....
a: abhi chalo....
they entered the room.......anagd layed on the bed while kripa went to take a shower.....she found a nighty in the wardrobe......so she wore it.......kripa came out of the bathroom...anagd was staring at her.....her nighty was low from the top and short from the bottom .........so she had her hands around her....like hugging her self...she went to the window and looked out....
k: angad...yeh sab kuch bilkl movies ki tarah hai na.....
a: movies????
k: ya...beech raste mein gaadi ka kharab hona.....phir baasrish suru hona...paas himein ek hotel ka hona aur saare hotel mein sirf ek hi room khaali hona....it is all so filmy...hai na...
saying this she turned around adn found angad.... infront of her...he was very close to her.....
a(almost whispering): aisi situation mein kuch aur bhi hota hai na?
k: huh?!
(finally she got it)
she moved one step back.....but before she could go any further back...angad slid his hand around her waist and pushed her body closer to his without leaving any space between them........they both were looking into eachothers eyes......
k: angad....
a: ssshhhhhhhh
before kripa could say anything else......anagd sealed her lips with his.......first kripa tried to push him away but then she gae up and without knowing she put one of her hands around his neck and the other on te back of his head caressing it..........after few mins.....they part.....both their brains had stopped functioning.........slowly angad picked her up and lied her on the bed....slowly he put himself on top of her..... pulled the blanket on top of them and switched off the light.......
next morning......kripa slowly opened her eyes and found herslf in angad's arms......and also in his extra large shirt......she sits up and remembers last night....she blushes like crazy....
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shikha @crazy_princess
17 years ago
[QUOTE=Dikte]
Hi! Though I've been reading the FF section for a long time, this is the first time I've ever replied. Well...I also have the problem you mentioned-i want to change my story every now and then. I get this feeling that my characters don't do what i want them to do. Well...the best thing uis to write a brief summary first on each and every episode and build up ur episodes according to the summary. I do this and it is much more easier.
I've gpot the time prob too and I agree-it's hecticc! But I'd like it very much if you continued, cos I think u are doing a great job!!!
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thankyou soo much...but i tried that already and it still doesn't help me....my mind is multi tasker....so it keeps thinking of different ideas..i am never happy with one decision anyways...thanx alot for the help........
Eran @umrao_jaan
+ 3
17 years ago
Hi! Though I've been reading the FF section for a long time, this is the first time I've ever replied. Well...I also have the problem you mentioned-i want to change my story every now and then. I get this feeling that my characters don't do what i want them to do. Well...the best thing uis to write a brief summary first on each and every episode and build up ur episodes according to the summary. I do this and it is much more easier.
I've gpot the time prob too and I agree-it's hecticc! But I'd like it very much if you continued, cos I think u are doing a great job!!!
Madiha @Dark Love
+ 5
17 years ago
hey nice part! continue soon
Saz @Chotii
+ 4
17 years ago
OMG wow!! wot a cute hot part
briliant!! keep continuin
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
sehar @sweet honey
17 years ago
wonderful prt plz cont soon