after shopping...they went back to their houses.....angad was searching kripa every where..... but she was nowhere to be seen......as he was searching...rocky came upto him...
ro: woh nahi ayegi....
a: kya matlab....?
ro: matlab yeh ke...kripa...hume seedhe discomein milegi.
a: ok....
they all leave for the disco.....angad was still searching her....rocky notice this.....
ro: kya baat hai angad...itni bechenis kyu intezaar kar rahe ho she'll be here any minute.....
a: mein kisika intezaar nahi kar raha hu....
ro: achha.....well waha dekho phi batana.....
he lifts his hed and looks ahead....he sees a gorgeus girl entering the disco.....she came straight to angad...it was kripa......she was wearing this:-
k: so mr angad khanna...apne mujhse kya kaha tha....oh ha.....mein doosri ladkiyose jealous hu....aur mujhe fashionka koi andaaj hi nahi hai.....kuch aisa hi kaha tha na?
a(mouth and eyes wide open):.........
everyone else comes to her......raj,josh are really shocke to see kripa like this....
m: kya hua......?
ali: kripa di hamare spencer college ki....miss spencer reh chuki hai...aur bachpanse unhone bahat sare competitions bhi jeeta hai......
ro: right and i was mr.spencer......
p: ya isiliye mein kehti hu ki spencer college ke judges mein koi taste hi nahi tha....ek langoor aur bandaria ko mr and miss spencer banadiya....hhmmmm
priya leaves.......rocky looks at her and then looks at kripa with so much of anger.....kripa makes a cute face and then rocky smile...she smiles too.....
ro: so kripa...wanna dance...?
k: sure....why not.....
they went to dance.........angad still wasn't out of his thought......he was lost in another woorld....after sometime....rocky went and angad asked kripa for dance....now they both were dancing.......both were looking in each others eyes...rocky was looking everything very closely......
the stuff in italic is kripa's thought....
no wonder ki itni saari ladkiya angadke peeche hai....in aakho ko koi kaise mana kar sakta hai.....how can some1 resist those eyes...aur yeh smile....uski ek muskurahat ke liye koi kuch bhi kar sakta hai......wait a min what am i thinking.....do i love him?....duh-uh...tu tabse usse pyaar karti hai jabse tum dono mile the.....par kya woh bhi mujhse....kripa forget it ....he is your best frien...usse apni jindagi eene de aur tu apni jidagi khud ji.....
she came to the real world and then....closed her eyes and shook her head......
a: kya hua?
k: kuch nahi....
angad went to get a drink when someone was mis behaving with kripa......angad came back....and saw this ...he dint want to create a scene so he just brought kripa back without saying anything......kripa was really mad...
a: kya hua....ek to usse bachaya uparse naaraz wah.....
k: bachaya nahi tumne...usse mein beg kiya hai mujhe chhodne ke liye...are yeh gubbare(balloons) jaise muscles kis kaam ke...?mar nahi sakte the usse?
a: arre yaar sab ladkiya chahti hai ki ham mard ladayi jhagdose door rahe aur you are telling me ki usse maaro...
k: ha hum aisa chahte hai par jab tum ladke yeh fight karte ho na to hume bahat hi achha lagta hai ki kamse kam tumhe hamari parwa to hai...ki tum usse mar rahe ho...par tum to....ugh
mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.....
kripa leaves with a speechless angad behind.....
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shilpaanilkumar @shilpaanilkumar
17 years ago
its awesome yaar...pls continue...its fun to see angad fall for kripa...
Simran @mannat.urwish
17 years ago
awsome part cont soon
cant c d pic
Saz @Chotii
+ 4
17 years ago
WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW!
i jus got bak 4rm skool (it woz my 1st day bak n.. im a senior now!! ) nyway, as soon as i got in i jumpd on2 d comp, n i jus HAD 2 read dis ff.. n im luvin it!! d last 2 parts were gr8! d end of d previus part woz briliant!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
kep continuin soon!!
xx its briliant xx
mebearynice @mebearynice
17 years ago
hi
just read ur ff its awesome
pls cont soon
girlie18 @girlie18
17 years ago
cnt see da pix. cont soon its ws gr8
shikha @crazy_princess
17 years ago
sorry......but cant do anything...well i can se it....
shikha @crazy_princess
17 years ago
the pic of th dress is....
can you see it now?
jazz @jazmeen
+ 2
17 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww nic part
bhumi @bhumishah
17 years ago
nice parts n i couldn't c wat kripa wuz wearin -the pic of teh dress wuzn't comin up so can u post the pic again
thanx
continue soon