part 1
we aee the stage and the annnouncer comes......
a: now the time you've all been waiting has arrived.....give a big hand to THE KHANNA BROTHER....ANGAD KHANNA AND JOSH KHANNA.......
the crowd goes wild ...everyone start chanting angad and josh's name......the stage has a blast and then two bikes enters the stage...both of them come out and open there helmet...first we see josh and then we see angad...they sing DUS BAHANE(DUS) first and then some other songss......the concert got over(i dont like talking about concerts) the concert atarted at 11 and ended at 4...it was a super hit.......now angad and josh are backstag signing some auto graphs.....they go inside a room and start talking then they are flirting with some girls......josh looks at the watch and goes to angad.....
j: hey bhai abhi tumhe to college mein hona chahiye tha...usse lene nahi jaana kya?
a(looks at his watch): usse 5 baje lene jaana hai aur abhi to sirf 4 baje hai.
j(confused): kis desh main?.......india matlab yaha abhi 6 bajne wale hai....
a(looked at his watch again and taps it): oh sht she's gonna kill me...
he flies off from there.....and stops in front of the college.....he ran off....then he sees a girl sitting in the bench reading some book......the book has covered her face so we cant see he
a: kripa....(taking long breath)
the girl puts the book down and we see her face its kripa....she was really mad at him for coming late but sh dint show it...
k:(calmly) yes...may i help you?
a: kripa pls stop it ok.....mujhe pata hai i am late.....now common lets go...
k: sorry...but maine aapko pehchana nahi...(stands up) now if you'l pls excuse me...my friend must be waiting.....for me....
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Rim_ @Rim_
17 years ago
kool....go wit da attitude kripa!!!
Simran @mannat.urwish
17 years ago
awsome i like kripa'a attitude.plz cont soon
Abhilasha @MUNNIBABA2009
17 years ago
WOW DIJJU YOU FINALLLY STARTED YOUR FAN FIC WILL BE LOOKING FORWARD FOR IT
arun @miss_you_alot
17 years ago
hey guyz the firstpart will b up today may b in d evening or tom
Rachandeep @Rachu_1987
+ 3
17 years ago
very good intro!!!!! plz continue sooon
iram @angeleyez_786 17 years ago great intro cant wait for the first part
ADITI @-aditi-
+ 5
17 years ago
intro itself sounds intresting...pls cont soon
bhumi @bhumishah
17 years ago
nice intro .. can't wiat for the 1st part
continue soon
arun @miss_you_alot
17 years ago
hey great so you started a new fanfic too huh....dint even tell me...very bad...well so r you dedicating this too someone or its by yourself to yourself
shikha @crazy_princess
17 years ago
THE FIRST PART WILL BE UP TOMORROW.