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Chapter 13

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Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 17 years ago ok kimmy dear..tu likh.. me waiting palkein bichake....
komalsirwani
komal @komalsirwani 17 years ago hw swweet dii me gonna write the nxt part ASAP
Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 17 years ago [QUOTE=komalsirwani]sun_423 wrote:
kimmy yaar the part simply rocked... i loved it totally from the bottom of my heart.. kasam se keh rahi hoon dear kya likha hain tumne.. that was a very damn superb job done... me totally fida on this story the word which suits your story the best is perfect... it was simply amazing..awesome...superb.. marvellous...splendid... mindblowing... mindblasting... .... jhakaas...bindaas..... super duper coolllllll......marvelous...... excellent.... fantastic.. ek dum dhassu........you are totally a rockstar & your story completely , absolutely rocks , it is very rocking..... it is very coolllllllllll.... i loved all the scenes between sujal & kashish.... yipee sujal , kashish mil gaye , all happy happy...... very wonderful......the scenes were shooo cute..sweett... the emotions were all sooo goodd... they were expressed so wonderfully... simply stupendous yaar.. you are just tooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd i loved the part.... it completely bowled me over... me totally dumb-struck after reading the part.... oh i totally loved the part & i love your story completely..... dear i think main tumhari jitni bhi tareef karoon kum hain.... so yeh talliyan tumhare liye.. ab please continue soon... Hey di thx soooo much love 2 read ure comments....im very happy that u commented muaaahhhhh[/QUOTE]kimmy dear..me glad u liked the comment..... yaar do not thank me... dosti me no sorry..no thanku.... hotha hain...... & ur story is worth all the praise...samjhi... please continue soon.... me waiting fir the next part eagerly........love u....
komalsirwani
komal @komalsirwani 17 years ago sun_423 wrote:
kimmy yaar the part simply rocked... i loved it totally from the bottom of my heart.. kasam se keh rahi hoon dear kya likha hain tumne.. that was a very damn superb job done... me totally fida on this story the word which suits your story the best is perfect... it was simply amazing..awesome...superb.. marvellous...splendid... mindblowing... mindblasting... .... jhakaas...bindaas..... super duper coolllllll......marvelous...... excellent.... fantastic.. ek dum dhassu........you are totally a rockstar & your story completely , absolutely rocks , it is very rocking..... it is very coolllllllllll.... i loved all the scenes between sujal & kashish.... yipee sujal , kashish mil gaye , all happy happy...... very wonderful......the scenes were shooo cute..sweett... the emotions were all sooo goodd... they were expressed so wonderfully... simply stupendous yaar.. you are just tooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd i loved the part.... it completely bowled me over... me totally dumb-struck after reading the part.... oh i totally loved the part & i love your story completely..... dear i think main tumhari jitni bhi tareef karoon kum hain.... so yeh talliyan tumhare liye.. ab please continue soon... Hey di thx soooo much love 2 read ure comments....im very happy that u commented muaaahhhhh
sidra01
armaghan @sidra01 17 years ago awsome so cute and adoreable love the characters and also the one who made them it shows ur ability
Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 17 years ago
kimmy yaar the part simply rocked... i loved it totally from the bottom of my heart.. kasam se keh rahi hoon dear kya likha hain tumne.. that was a very damn superb job done... me totally fida on this story the word which suits your story the best is perfect... it was simply amazing..awesome...superb.. marvellous...splendid... mindblowing... mindblasting... .... jhakaas...bindaas..... super duper coolllllll......marvelous...... excellent.... fantastic..
ek dum dhassu........you are totally a rockstar & your story completely , absolutely rocks , it is very rocking..... it is very coolllllllllll.... i loved all the scenes between sujal & kashish.... yipee sujal , kashish mil gaye , all happy happy...... very wonderful......the scenes were shooo cute..sweett... the emotions were all sooo goodd... they were expressed so wonderfully... simply stupendous yaar.. you are just tooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
i loved the part.... it completely bowled me over... me totally dumb-struck after reading the part.... oh i totally loved the part & i love your story completely..... dear i think main tumhari jitni bhi tareef karoon kum hain.... so yeh talliyan tumhare liye..

ab please continue soon... sun_42339095.1394097222
Imaan-Ki-Duaa
Imaan-Ki-Duaa @Imaan-Ki-Duaa 17 years ago jus gng gr8... ....waitng eagerly as wht will happen nxt...continue sooon....
komalsirwani
komal @komalsirwani 17 years ago hey ppl thx 4 commenting n honii just wait n watch wat happens nxt
HhAaNnAa
Hana @HhAaNnAa 17 years ago wow komal tumhari ff awesome yaar it rocks great going me loved it tooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooood i think kum kum is lieng to sujal maybe she wants him to propose thats why all that natak par u never know maybe vijay stuff is true waiting eagerly for the next part continue soon once again mindblowing,fantastic, superb ,amazing part
iloveroses95
Sara Bukhari @iloveroses95 17 years ago Wow its rlly nice!Anxiously waiting for the next part!!PLZ update soon!
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