Hello ppl me komal bak with the 8th part of LAMHE.....
RECAP:Zaib proposes to Kripa.......Sujal kashish meet in mandir ...........all the four ppl go to zaib's uncles house n chill out......Sujal takes kashish's pic without the knowledge of ne1 elzz......Sujal sends a sorry letter to Kashish
Kashish is very happy n is constantly thinking abt Sujal.......Kripa enters
Kripa:kashish teri packing hogayi
Kashish dosent reply
Kripa:kashish......kashish.......(she goes n shakes her) kashish r u ok?
Kashish(suddenly gets shocked):haan haan im ok kya hua bol
Kripa:teri packing ho gayi
Kashish:haan almost bas kuch aur kapde rakhne hai woh jab dry clean se aajeynge tab rakh doongi
Kripa:ok humari flight kal subah 6 ki hai ok chal ab main chalti hoon
Kashish:ok par tu jaa kahan rahi hai
Kripa(blushes lil):Woh Zaib ne bulaya hai usse mere saath kuch waqt bitana tha mere jaane se pehle
Kashish(teases her):offo akele mein haan kya baat hai
Kripa:c'mon yaar Kashish tu bhi na
Kashish:acha baba ja par jaldi aana tujhe toh pata hai na...
Kripa(interrupts):haan haan pata hai tujhe akele darr lagta hai aa jaongi bas ab bye
Kashish:ok then bye have fun
Kripa leaves ....Kashish is alone ...Shes thinking abt her house .......her family n all that
Zaib-Kripa are in a restaurant........
Zaib:Kripa tumne kabhi socha tha ki main tumhe propose karoonga
Kripa:well socha toh tha par sirf apne sapnon mein mujhe kabhi nahi laga ki mera yeh sapna ek din sach ho jayega
Zaib:tumhare sapne sach karna hi toh mera maqsat hai
Kripa:hw sweet acha tumhare us dost ka naam kya hai hum uske saath itne time se ghoom rahe hai par kabhi unka naam nahi poocha
Zaib:tumhe uska naam nahi pata uska naam hai Sujal.....Sujal Garewal
Kripa is shocked:what sujal garewal
Zaib:kya hua naam pehle kahin suna hai
Kripa:arre Sujal garewal toh Kashish ki family ki ek frnd Veena Garewal ka beta hai
Zaib:haan sujal ki mom ka naam Veena aunty hi hai
Kripa:tumhe pata hai Kashish Sujal ki mom ko apni mom bulati hai aur Sujal ke dad ko apne dad
Zaib:really par woh unhe itni achi tarah kaise jante hai family frnds itne close
Kripa:they are just like one big family Veena aunty aur Tulsi aunty best frns....Lalit uncle aur Mihir uncle....Kumkum bhaiya prerna bhabhi ....Sumeet bhaiya anurag bhaiya ...Tia Ranvir sabhi best frnds hai
Zaib:haan Sujal kehta toh tha ki ek aur family hai jo usse apni family jaisi hi lagti hai par woh toh koi Viraani's the
Kripa:haaaan toh Kashish bhi Virani family se hi toh hai
Zaib:ohhhh toh Kashish wohi ladki hai jiska Sujal kabhi kabhi zikar karta hai
Kripa:matlab?
Zaib:Sujal kehta tha ki ek beti hai us family ki jo uski achi frnd thi par use uska naam nahi pata tha
Kripa:oh wow Kashish yeh sunkar kitni khush hogi main usse abhi batati hoon(n she takes her cell)
Zaib pulls it frm her hand n cuts the call
Kripa:kya hua
Zaib:arre agar hum unhe bata denge toh koi surprise nahi hoga surprise toh tab hoga jab unhe suddenly pata chalega
Kripa:hmmmm ure rite ok then Sujal-Kashish ek dusre ke liye surprise hi hai
Zaib:hmmmmmm
In the hotel.....Itz 8 in the evening.....Kashish is getting bored....so she thinks of taking a walk down......She goes dwn n goes outside the hotel 4 a short walk.....
She's walking outside....Shes walking n lost in her thoughts .......Walking Walking she dosent realise shes come far away frm her hotel.....Suddenly her phone rings...There's a message........
Itz frm Kripa.....Kashish reads it...It says....
Hey kashish i think il be late dont wait 4 me tum so jaana
Kashish sees that message n looks up to see that she has come far away frm her hotel....Now she gets really scared She dosent knw where to go.......She tries to call Kripa but itz off.....She dosent have ne1 elses no.
She is trying to contact every1 possible but she not able to....Suddenly a car with all drunk boyz comes n she gets even more scared now....She tries to run away frm that place...Shes running n running n she has escaped frm thpse boyz but now shes lost in a even more darker place n she dosent know where she is......She starts crying n keeps shouting 4 help....
Shes walking but she cant find any place where she can go....Shes tired but still she keeps on walking...shes walking walking until shes tired to an extent and she has fainted and is about to n fall dwn when sum1 holds her.......
Itz Sujal.....
Sujal is shocked to see kashish in this condition .....He tries to wake up kashish but she is unconsious....He then takes her to his car n takes a bottle of water n pours it on her.........Kashish slowly opens her eyes
She sees Sujal n quickly hugs him and starts crying....
Sujal:Kashish apko kya hua are you ok?
Kashish is crying....
Sujal(seprates her):kashish is everything ok?
Kashish:woh.....woh....i lost my way(n she starts crying again)
Sujal: woh toh main samajh gaya par aap behosh kaise ho gayi
Kashish tells him the whole thing half crying half ok
Sujal:WHAT!! who were those guys?? unhone kuch kiya kya
Kashish:mujhe nahi pata main bhaag aayi
Sujal:ure ok now na
Kashish:haan main ab theek hoon thanks
Sujal:chaliye ab apko apke hotel chod doon
Kashish goes n sits dwn in his car...Sujal goes n drives
They reach the hotel......Zaib n Kripa are standing dwn n Kripa is tensed....Kashish gets dwn frm the car
Kripa(runs to her n hugs her):Kashish tum theek ho na kahan chali gayi thi tum pata hai hum kitna pareshaaan hogaye the
Kashish:haan haan main theek hoon
Zaib:par Kashish tum gayi kahan thi
Kashish:woh main yunhi walk ke liye gayi thi aur raasta kho gayi
Kripa:kya zaroorat thi kahin bhi jaane ki main aa rahi thi na
Kashish:im ok baba chalo ab chalein kal subah mein humari flight hai kahin hum late na ho jayein
Sujal face gets sad hearing about their flight......
Kripa:haaan chal
Zaib:ok den u girls go hum kal subah milte hai
Kripa:bye
Zaib(hugs her):bye
Sujal:take care
Kashish:bye
The guys leave n the girls are in their room......
Kripa:kashish tum kho kahan gayi thi par
Kashish (tells kripa everything):bas mujhe yeh samajh nahi aaya ki Woh Zaib ka frnd wahan kaise pohoncha
Kripa:usse maine phone kiya tha
Kashish(shocked):kyaa tumne par kyun
Kripa:tum mil nahi rahi thi Zaib aur mujhe pata nahi tha tum kahan ho tho humne socha ki shayad usse kuch pata ho aur jab usse bhi kuch nahi pata tha tho mujhe tension hogayi phir S....(she bites her lips)
Kashish:kya ss.....
Kripa:phir soch hi rahe the ki tumhe kahan dhoonde ki zaib ke frnd ka phone aaya ki woh tumhe dhoondne jaa raha hai
Kashish:ohhh (shes feeling happy frm inside )
Kripa:chalo ab main toh so rahi hoon gud nite.....
Kashish:gud nite...
Kripa goes to sleep but Kashish thinks abt Sujal n smiles....
Next morning......Kashish n Kripa flight is at 10 n itz 8
In their room....
Kashish:kripa r u ready ?
Kripa:bas 2 min kuch samaan aur pack karna hai then well leave
Kashish:ok jaldi kar
Kripa is packing her things when she gets a call...
Kripa speaks sumthing on the phone.....
Kashish:chalein kya
Kripa:haan haan chal
Itz 8:30 both of them leave 4 da airport......
They reach the airport at 9....there is still 1 hr for their flight to leave....
Kashish n kripa are sitting n waiting
Kashish:Kripa Zaib nahi aa raha
Kripa: nahi uska phone aaya tha ki he got sum urgent work so hes not able 2 come
Kashish:hmmm ok
Time passes by and itz 10 n the flight has arrived....... Kashish-Kripa board the flight but their seats are away frm each other.......The flight moves on n Kashish feels sad that she couldnt see sujal 4 da last time....
Someone comes n sits beside her ....Kashish is so lost in her thoughts that she dosent see who is sitting beside her....The air hostess comes n gives coffee to the person beside Kashish....The person takes two coffees
He offers 1 to Kashish....
That person:excuse me coffee?
Kashish(turns to him):thx(and she takes the coffee n turns that side again....Suddenly she turns again)Tum
Sujal:haan main
Kashish:tum yahan kaise
Sujal:hmmm bas mann hua tumnhare saath aur samay guzarne ka tho chala aaya
Kashish:stop joking yaar
Sujal:actually meri family bhi wahin hai so im going back to India
Kashish(very happy that he stays there but controls herself):oh u stay in India
Sujal:ya in Shimla
Kashish:ohhh Shimla main bhi wahin rehti hoon
Sujal:wow what a coincidence hum itne din se ek dusre ko jaante hain par aj tak yeh nahi pata ki hum dono same city mein rehte hain
Kashish:ya waise mujhe aapka naam bhi nahi pata whats ure name
Sujal:apko mera naam nahi pata I'm.....(hes abt to say when Zaib interrupts)
Zaib:hello Kashish iske saaath main bhi hoon
Kashish:hey Zaib tum bhi India jaa rahe ho
Zaib:haan mere parents bhi India mein hai but not Shimla
Kashish:phir kahan
Zaib:mumbai
Kashish:ohh gr88 kripa loves Mumbai
Zaib:hmmm isliye toh main wahan rehta hoon
Kashish laughs ........
Zaib:well main yahan isliye aaya tha ap logon se yeh kehne ki Kripa yahan aa rahi hai
Sujal:toh main
Zaib:tu mere saath chal na
Sujal:ok ......bye kashish
Kashish:bye.....
Kripa comes n sits beside Kashish
Kripa:kaisa tha surprise
Kashish:tujhe pata tha
Kripa:haan mujhe Zaib ne pehle hi bata diya tha
Kashish:toh phir surprise kaisa
Kripa:tera usse milne tho surprise hi tha na
Kashish:hmmmm
Kripa:kaise na ho use dekhte hi tera chehra achanak khil utha
Kashish(hiding her feelings):aisa kuch nahi hai mujhe usse kya
Kripa:acha......aisa kuch bhi nahi hai
Kashish:nahi
Kripa:matlab kuch hai
Kashish:haan......i mean nahi .....i mean nothin just shut up
Kripa:hehe kab tak chupaogi kashish ek na ek din tum khud is baat ko maan logi ki tum usse.....
Kashish:will u just shut up
Kripa:ok ok as u say ......she starts singing......Dilko tumse pyar hua
Pehli baar hua
Kashish(looks at her angrily):shut up.......
Kripa laughs.........
Kashish n Kripa dont talk now n after some time Kashish feels sleepy so shes off to sleep.....Kripa is not sleepy so she goes n sits beside Zaib n Sujal comes back to Kashish.......Kashish is sleeping n then she puts her head on Sujal's shoulder n her hand over him.....Well according to her shes putting it on Kripa n shes almost slept so dosent realise that itz Sujal n Sujal is shocked+surprised.....He dosent disturb her n lets her sleep like that....
After sometime Sujal also falls asleep.......They are asleep 4 a long time .....After sometime Kashish opens her eyes but she dosent move......She sees Sujal n tightens her grip n suddenly realises itz Sujal n removes her hand immidiately.......She wants to move her head but as soon as she tries to move her head her hair gets stuck in his collar....Shes trying hard to remove it but in vain....Sujal gets up n sees Kashish like this.....He signs her to stop by his hand....n he tries to remove it...
Sujal is trying to remove it ....Kashish is staring at him ....... direct into his eyes....Suddenly
Kashish:ouch
Sujal with concern:laga kya
Kashish smiles:nahi
Sujal smiles back n continues to try.....Finally he suceeds....He slowly moves her hair n Kashish takes back her head n both are staring at each other ......
They are distracted by an announcement ...........They are supposed to tighten their seat belts n Kashish sson tightens it n holds Sujals arm tightly....
Sujal:kya hua
Kashish:mujhe landing ke waqt bahut darr lagta hai
Sujal:tumhe kis cheez se darr nahi lagta darpok
Kashish (removes her hand):agar tumhe koi problem hai toh i wont put my hand bas
Sujal(takes her hand n puts it back on his arm):okok im sorry i have no problem go on
Kashish smiles.......
The flight lands....All four of them are standing on the airport with their bags....
Zaib:so Kripa hum chalte hai take care (n he kisses her on the forehead)
Kripa(hugs him):bye miss me
Zaib:i will
Kripa starts crying......
Zaib:arre Kripa u crying c'mon yaar stop crying bas kuch hi din ki toh baat hai then hum dono humesha ke liye saath honge main jaate hi mom dad se baat karunga
Kripa is still crying
Kashish:Kripa rona band karo na hum bhi jaate hi tumhe zaib ke paas wapis bhej denge bas
Kripa smiles
Zaib(wipes off her tears):dats better ab rona band karo n always keep smiling i cant see u crying
Kripa hugs him again....
Sujal(goes to Kashish):So kashish hum chalte hai hum itne din saath rahe agar maine tumse kuch iasa kaha jisse tum hurt hui toh .....
Kashish(interrupts):toh main tumhe maaf kar doon na haaan haan kar diya
Sujal smiles :nahi itne dino main agar mujhse koi galthi hui hai na toh tum yeh socho ki tumne kya galthi ki jisse mujhse woh galthi hui....(n he gives dat killing smile n turns away to go)
Kashish is shocked.......She slowly smiles ......
Kashish n Kripa now start walking .....
Kashish:kripa tujhse kuch din ki bhi dorri bardaasht nahi hoti
Kripa:jab tujhe pyaar hoga na tab pata chalega ki ek pal ki dorri kitni badi hoti hai
Kashish:mere saath aisa kuch nahi hai i can stay away( she says these words n remembers all the moments with Sujal frm da day they met thier fights their meeting in the mandir their moments in the flight till their last meeting on the airport).........
Kripa snaps:kashish kahan jaa rahi hai tu dhyaan kahan hai tera
Kashish (comes back to the original world):haaaan.... woh .........bas....... kuch nahi chalo
Kripa:chalo
They walk lil forward n see both the bhaiya's waiting 4 them outside the airport.....
Kashish n Kripa run to them......
Anurag:aagaye tum log kitna time laga diya
Kashish:kya bhaiya hum toh tini jaldi aa gaye
Sumeet:jaldi nahi madam ap log theek 1 ghanta late ho hum kab sa tum dono ka wait kar rahe hai
Kripa:toh acha hai na intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai
Anurag:acha kya meetha tha ismein
Kashish:hum dono sabse meethe phal
Sumeet:haan woh toh hai ab chalein ghar waale bhi tum dono ke intezaar mein pagal ho gaye honge
Kripa:bhaiya main pehle ghar jaaongi mom dad se milna hai
Anurag:ok tumhe hum ghar drop kardenge chalo
They drop Kripa on the way n Anurag Sumeet n Kashish go to Viraani house....
In Viraani house...
All the viraani's n garewals are waiting 4 Kashish to come........As soon as Kashish comes Veena takes aarti ki thali n runs to her welcome.....
Veena:aagayi tu kitna time laga diya hum kabse tera wait kar rahe hai(n she does the aarti)
Kashish(goesn hugs her):arre mom aaa toh gayi na
Tulsi:bas ek wohi mom se milti rahegi yaa main bhi yaad hoom
Kashish(runs to tulsi):maa apko main kaise bhool sakti hoon ap kabhi bhooolne doge kya
Tulsi:dhat pagli aise baat karti hai apni maa ke baare mein
Kashish(hugs Tulsi):oh mom ure the best
Veena:aur main
Kashish(puts one hand on veena's shoulder n one on tulsi's):you both are the bestest moms
Mihir :aur papa
Kashish(runs to him n hugs him):papa toh bestestest
Mihir:hw was ure trip?
Kashish:it was gr88 dad
Lalit:aate hi meri beti se sawaal poochne shuru kar diye arre usse sabse milne toh de
Kashish:lalit papa (goes n hugs him) kaise ho app missed u sooo much
Lalit:missed u too beta
Kashish:baaki sab kahan hai prerna bhabhi kumkum bhabhi
Prerna n Kumkum come
Kumkum:hum yahan hai
Kashish(goes n hus her):bhabhiiiiii kaise ho aap
Prerna:yahan toh sab theek hai par humari yeh naand hai kaisi
Kashish(hugs prerna):arre bhabhi apki nanad ek dum theek hai par ap log bolo mujhe miss kiya
Ranveer:miss kaise na karte ek lauti behen humari
Kashish:hey ranveeer(goes n hugs him)hw ru bro
Ranveer:as usual perfect
Tia:di apne shayad yahan notice nahi kiya itz me tia here
Kashish:hello ms tia (hugs her) apko koi kaise nahi notice kar sakta
Tia:acha di temme hw was ure trip? enjoy kiya ?Hws Zaib?
Veena:bas bas ab koi sawaal nahi meri beti abhi abhi thak ke aayi hai
Tulsi:haaaan kashish beta tu jaa freshen up ho jaa tab tak hum khana laga dete hai
Kashish:ok moms
Kashish goes to change.....
In garewal house.....
Sujal enters the house but the servant opne the door....
Servant(shocked):Sujal sir aap .......aap wapis aagaye
Sujal:haaan main hi hoon par shhh n (he runs inside)
He goes to every room in the house but theres noone in any room so he comes out....
Sujal:arre sab gaye kahan
Servant:sir sab log viraani house gaye hai
Sujal:kyun
Servant:woh aaj Kashish mam wapis aa rahi hai na isliye
Sujal(confused):Kashish ??
Servant:haan Kashish maam mihir sahab ki beti
Sujal:oh woh mihir uncle ki beti uska naam Kashish hai
Servant:haan
Sujal(thinks):what a coincidence.....jisse main mila woh bhi kashish aur mohir uncle ki beti bhi kashish
Servant:sir apka khana laga doon
Sujal:nahi khana toh main sabke saath hi khaonga
Saying this,he takes a car n goes away ...........
Well ppl this part ends here.....Im so sorry 4 da delay .....Hope u liked it
So what nxt??
Will sujal realise that kashish is mihir's daughter??
Will Zaib-Kripa's realtion move further??
2 months agoKashish fainting and sujak catching her was nice.flight scene was really nice.Zaib kripa scene was emotional. Sujal didn't understand yet that she is the same kashish.
17 years agoHey ppl exams are up so cant cont till nxt fri im soooooo sorry il try my level best to write a small part if possible hope u ppl understand
17 years agokimmy dear going too good... me loving your story very very very damn much... you keep up the good work.....
please post the next part soon... me will be waiting....
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Jasmine @jasminerahul
+ 8
2 months ago
Kashish fainting and sujak catching her was nice.flight scene was really nice.Zaib kripa scene was emotional. Sujal didn't understand yet that she is the same kashish.
Hana @HhAaNnAa
17 years ago
komal dear continue soon me waiting
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
17 years ago
ok kimmy take ur own time..& ALL THE BEST for ur exams......
Hana @HhAaNnAa
17 years ago
okay komal dear we will wait work hard and best of luck in your exams..i will be waiting for your story continue soon.
komal @komalsirwani
+ 3
17 years ago
Hey ppl exams are up so cant cont till nxt fri im soooooo sorry il try my level best to write a small part if possible hope u ppl understand
Imaan-Ki-Duaa @Imaan-Ki-Duaa
+ 2
17 years ago
wonderful part.... ........now they wil soon meet again ....kool...
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
17 years ago
kimmy dear going too good... me loving your story very very very damn much... you keep up the good work.....
please post the next part soon... me will be waiting....
Hana @HhAaNnAa
17 years ago
komal dear continue soon me waiting
varallikka @Varallikka
17 years ago
great stry yar...u write sooooooooooooooooooo well tht i cabnt describe in words......just cont it soon yay..nd dis is 4 u
komal @komalsirwani
+ 3
17 years ago
hey honii thxx soo much il continue soon