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Chapter 5

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Hey ppl after 3 longg dayzzz here's the 4th part of LAMHE.......
RECAP:Kashish kripa have fun on their 1st day and kashish is scared in her room alone......Sujal and Zaib Introduced........Kashish n Kripa prepare 4 the show
Now letz see whats happening in the auditorium where Zaib's show is gonna be held......
There are 5 minutes left 4 the show audience is waiting to seee Mr. Zaib Khanna on the stage
Kashish and Kripa are in the first row of the audience.............
Backstage.....
Sujal:hey zab everything's done
Zaib:hey Sujal kahan tha yaaar im soo nervous
Sujal:woh tu kab nahi hota
Zaib:c'mon yaar mazak chodo bas 2 min reh gaye hai kisi bhi waqt mera naam announce hosakta hai n then im gone
Sujal:ya ure gone on the stage ........dekh yaaar agar tujhe itna darr lag raha hai toh kahe toh show cancel kar dein
Zaib:phir mazaak
Sujal:nahi nahi im serious
Zaib suddenly remembers sumthing
Zaib:Oh god
Sujal:ab kya hua
Zaib:main apna guitar toh practice room mein bhool gaya
Sujal:acha ruk mein le aata hoon
Zaib:nahi tu ruk main jaata hoon tu tab tak audiences ka mann behla
Sujal:nahi yaar tu kaise jayega........tujhe late hogaya toh
Zaib:isliye toh keh raha hon main hi jaata hoon dekh jitna late main aaonga utna hi intezaar ka maza hoga ok sun jab tak main aata hoon tu jaake kuch perform kar
Sujal:main tu pagal hogaya hai kya
Zaib:jaaaa naam bula liya hai jaldi jaa
Sujal:okok tu bhi jaldi jaa aur jaldi aana fine
Zaib:haaan

The host:Hello everybody a very warm welcum to all the beautiful ppl of London
So ready 4 the show
Audience:yesssssss
The host:ohh gr88 so no more wait heres Zaib 4 u
Audience(shouting):zaib ......zaib ......zaib.........
Some one comes and is in the dark light so people are not able 2 see him.....Its Sujal
Sujal:hello London
Audience:hiiiiii Zaib.....
Sujal:so ready 2 have zaib
Audience:yessssss
Sujal(comes in the light):but im sorry u have 2 wait more
Audience:noooooo zaib zaib zaib(they are shouting)
Sujal:ok London ek kaam karte hai jab takk zaib comes shall i perform 4 u
Audience:yesssssss
Sujal:Oh gr88 but i need a partner so whoz gonna join me (he looks towards the audience)u.....u.......ahh (he looks at kashish n kripa n he points at both of them)u...........u young lady will be my partner.....will you n he offers his hand
Kashish is fully blushing is about 2 give her hand when sujal takes kripa n goes away............Shes red with anger now.......
Sujal:so whats ure name
Kripa(happily):im kripa
Sujal:oh wow wat a nice name kripa........kripa ure wearing a lovely dress
Kripa:thnq
Sujal:so kripa which song would u like 2 perform on
Kripa:kya mujhe pyar hai
Sujal:oh zaib's song so u are a zaib fan
Kripa(blushing):yesssss
Sujal:ok dear zaib fan letz start
Sujal n kripa start off n they perform on the song kya mujhe pyar hai
Sujal:thnq beautigul lady 4 joining me here
Kripa:my pleasuree
Sujal:so London did u have fun
Audience:yessssss
Sujal:well dat was gr88 now i better leave n heres presenting u ZAIB

Zaib comes with the song.......
dilko tumse pyar hua.............n he performs on sheeshe se shisha takraaye n then finally he sings kya mujhe pyar hai
Kripa is blushing
The show comes to an end......Kashish and Kripa leave the auditorim
Kashish:so finally dekh liya apne angad ko live
Kripa(still thinking of angad):haaaan (she suddenly says) hey that other guy was also so good na usne kitna acha perform kiya with me(she blushes)
Kashish(jealous n angry):ismein good ki kya baaat hai i dont think he looked good
Kripa:c'mon yaaar he was so cute....
Kashish:hoga but i dint like him
Kripa:ahaan u dint like him or u dint like that ki he dint take ure hand n he took my hand
Kashish:bhaaa aisa kuch nahi hai i dont care he takes ure hand or mine waise bhi main usse jaanti hi kitna hoon jo uske mera haaath na pakadne par mujhe feel ho
Kripa:haan woh bhi jaanti nahi hai toh jaan pehchaan badha le na chal chalte hai na andar usse milne tu usse milna aur main zaib se miloongi
Kashish:noo main nahi aongi tujhe jaana hai toh jaa
Kripa(making a puppy face):tu mere saath aisa karegi
Kashish:haan
Kripa(more sadder face):aisa karegi
Kashish(turns away):haan
Kripa:dekh li teri dosti kashish yahan tak aake saath chod dena
Kashish(thinks 4 sum time):hmmm ok main chaloongi
Kripa:gr888 chal
Kashish:lekin meri ek shart hai
Kripa:mujhe teri har shart manzoor hai tu chal bas
Kashish:pehle sun toh le meri shart kya hai
Kripa:haan baba bol
Kashish:tujhe mere saath hi sona hoga aaj
Kripa:offo theek hai ab chal
Kashish:gr88 chal

They both go to the green room in search of Zaib n Sujal ........there are press reporters everywhere n everybody's searching 4 Zaib..........Kashish gets a call so she goes to attend it
As soon as the reporters see kripa they run to her n take her interview
Reporter:hello maam apne angad ke frnd sujal ke saath perform kiya how do u feel
Kripa:ohh gr88 but i hope woh Zaib hota
Reporter:well everybody hopes that so ap bataye ap angad ki fan kabse hai
Kripa:jabse Zaib ne apna 1st show kiya tha
Reporter:yani jab woh 8 saal ka tha tab se
Kripa(blushing):haan
Reporter:thnq ma'am

Letz see whom is kashish talking to
Kashish:haan haan mom yahan sab theek hai aj show tha aur show bhi bahut acha tha ap apni sunao
Tulsi:main theek ho par tujhse naraaz hoon
Kashish:kyun
Tulsi:tune ek phone nahi kiya do din hogaye tujhe wahan pohonch kar kyun wahan jaate hi maa ko bhool gayi
Kashish:nahi maa kal bhaiya bhabhi or veena mom aur lalit dad ka phone aaya toh bhool gayi
Tulsi:bhool gayi
Kashish:arre maa samjho na
Tulsi:haan haan ma hoon isliye samajh rahi hoon
Kashish:acha maa papa kahan hai uar Ranveer aur Tia unlogon ne mujhse baat hi nahi kii
Tulsi:tere papa toh baat nahi kar rahe kyunki unhe teri aur yaad aayegi isliye aur ranveer iswaqt ghar pe nahi hai main usse kahoongi tumhe phone karne ok
Kashish:ok mom main ab rakhti hoon ap apna khayal rakhna papa ko kehna i mis him by..........eeeeeeeeeee
And she dashes into someone..............
Kashish(fallen down):ouch .........stupid idiot dikhayi nahi deta main yahan se aa rahi thi
That person gives a hand to kashish .......She holds n gets up
Kashish(cleaning her dress):jawab kyun nahi dete kaho......(she looks up)................TUMMMMM
Sujal:haan main aur maine apko nahi giraya ap khud hi dekh kar nahi chal rahi thi and u dashed into me
Kashish:watever main phone par thi toh tum nahi dekh sakte the tum apne side badal sakte the
Sujal:main bhi phone par hi tha ok
Kashish:so it was all ure fault chalo sory bolo
Sujal:ohho ek toh meri galthi bhi nahi upar se sorry bhi main hi bolo too much
Kashish:aey Mr. galthi tumhari hi thi ok
Sujal:nahi tumhari thi
They keep on fighting like this when kripa comes
Kripa(she dosent see Sujal as he has his bak towards her):Kashish tu yahan aur main tujhe saari jagah par dhoond rahi thi...........kya hua aur yeh kon hai
Sujal turns
Kripa(sees him n is kind of shocked+ surprised):ohh aap hum ap hi ke paas aa rahe the apko thx kehne
Sujal:thx kisliye
Kripa:apne mujhe select kiya isliye aur ap jo aap hum par favour karne waale hai isliye
Sujal(confused):favour??
Kripa:haan ap plz mujhe Zaib se mile denge plzzz plzzz
Kashish:kripa plz mat kaho yeh insaan plz ke layak nahi hai
Sujal:ohh toh apko yeh bhi pata hai main kis cheez ke layak hoon ya nahi
Kashish:haan
Kripa:kashish tu chup kar .......sorry haan yeh toh kuch bhi bol deti hai ap humein Zaib se milayenge na
Sujal:haan haan sure chalo
Kripa:wow thx so much

Sujal takes them 2 Zaib
Sujal:Zaib dekh tujhse milne koi aaya hai
Zaib(turns):kon hai yaar
Sujal(points to kripa):here she's kripa
Zaib:Hi Kripa......(and he gives his hand)
Kripa(fully blushing):Hii...iii(n she gives her hand)
Sujal:yeh wohi hai jiske saath maine perform kiya tha aur yeh tumhari bahut badi fan hai
Zaib:oh toh ap hai woh sujal keh raha tha ki ap bahut acha dance karti hai kabhi mujhe bhi mauka dijiye apke saath dance karne ka
Kripa(reddddd):ohh itll be my plaesure ap samajh nahi sakte ki im soooo happy meeting u it was a dream which has turned true...i jus love ure voice
Zaib:ohhh thats so sweet of u......thnq
Kripa(sees kashish beside her):ohhh main toh bhool hi gayi......shes kashish my frnd ]
Sujal whispers:yeh wohi hai jiska haath.....
Zaib:ohhh Hi Kashish
Kashish:hello Zaib
Kashish:ab mil liye na chalo chalte hai bye angad (angrily to sujal) Bye
Kripa:Bye n thx

They both leave ......They reach their hotel
In Hotel Room
Kripa:wow kashish Zaib ne mera haath chua(she sees her hand) yeh haath wow im sooo happy
Kashish:and im very angryyyyyyy
Kripa:chal kashish ab chill yaar itz ok
Kashish:no itz not woh idiot how he dare he talk 2 me like this
Kripa:relax yaaar tune bhi toh uspe chillaya tha
Kashish:haan maine bhi chillaya tha par woh toh sorry keh sakta tha na
Kripa:haaan keh toh sakta hai.....(then she remembers sumthing) arre dekh hum bhi kitne pagal hai itne baar usse mile uska naam bhi nahi poocha
Kashish:naam jaan kar karenge bhi kya acha hai nahi pata
Kripa:ok baba ab tu plzz zara sa muskara de warna main aj tere saath nahi soungi(sleep)
Kashish:kyaa tune wada kiya tha nayi siya na il kill u
Kripa:acha pehle mujhe pakad toh lo......
And she starts running.....\Both of them all around the room n then play with pillows n all the cotton frm the pilows comes out n the full room is filled with cotton
Kripa:bas puff bas puff ab main thak gayi
Kashish:itni jaldi ruk ab main tujhe pakadti hoon.......(she goes to her ,holds her neck) nahi soyegi bol
Kripa:arre meri maa soyungi ab toh chod
Kashish:dats better(n she has a winning smile on her face)
Kripa:finally aap muskurai toh yeh muskaan dekhne ke liye hi toh maine itna naataak kiya
Kashish:kya toh matlab yeh sab naatak tha
Kripa:haan actually mujhe bhi akele neend nahi aati
Both of them laugh.........They talk 4 sum more time n go to bed.........This was the end of their second day in London

And this is the end of my 4th part.......
This part is dedicated to Honii.......Hope u liked it
n Hope u all liked it .........if u liked it plzz comment
What next??
will kashish know itz sujal??
Will zaib n kripa meet again??
keep waiting

tc,
kimmy komalsirwani39030.21875

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Jasmine @jasminerahul
+ 8
3 months ago Zaib singing kripa's favourite song and kripa blushing was romantic. SK nok jhok was funny.AK hand shake scene was sweet.

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komal @komalsirwani
+ 3
17 years ago hey thx soooo much every1 4 ure comments hey rachan thx 4 telling me dat i completely 4got itz zaib

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Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
17 years ago zabardat...totally awesome...amazing..kimmy dear justt tooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ab please jaldi se continue kar yaar.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly...

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anon343 @Anon12378

17 years ago great part continue soon please make the next part longer

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Hana @HhAaNnAa

17 years ago oh komal thats soooo sweet of you yaar bohot acha part tha it was great i loved it sach mein ....the way sujal n kashish fight omg it was so cute ab jaldi se continue karo .....

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Rachandeep @Rachu_1987
+ 3
17 years ago hey just read it very goood.....got confused tho u started off with zaib.....then wrote angad in half the story newayz continue soooon

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Jasmine @jasminerahul + 8 3 months ago Zaib singing kripa's favourite song and kripa blushing was romantic. SK nok jhok was funny.AK hand shake scene was sweet.

komal @komalsirwani + 3 17 years ago hey thx soooo much every1 4 ure comments hey rachan thx 4 telling me dat i completely 4got itz zaib

Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi + 10 17 years ago zabardat...totally awesome...amazing..kimmy dear justt tooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ab please jaldi se continue kar yaar.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly...

anon343 @Anon12378 17 years ago great part continue soon please make the next part longer

Hana @HhAaNnAa 17 years ago oh komal thats soooo sweet of you yaar bohot acha part tha it was great i loved it sach mein ....the way sujal n kashish fight omg it was so cute ab jaldi se continue karo .....

Rachandeep @Rachu_1987 + 3 17 years ago hey just read it very goood.....got confused tho u started off with zaib.....then wrote angad in half the story newayz continue soooon

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LAMHE Completed M

Jasmine @jasminerahul
+ 8
3 months ago Zaib singing kripa's favourite song and kripa blushing was romantic. SK nok jhok was funny.AK hand shake scene was sweet.

komal @komalsirwani
+ 3
17 years ago hey thx soooo much every1 4 ure comments hey rachan thx 4 telling me dat i completely 4got itz zaib

Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
17 years ago zabardat...totally awesome...amazing..kimmy dear justt tooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ab please jaldi se continue kar yaar.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly...

anon343 @Anon12378

17 years ago great part continue soon please make the next part longer

Hana @HhAaNnAa

17 years ago oh komal thats soooo sweet of you yaar bohot acha part tha it was great i loved it sach mein ....the way sujal n kashish fight omg it was so cute ab jaldi se continue karo .....

Rachandeep @Rachu_1987
+ 3
17 years ago hey just read it very goood.....got confused tho u started off with zaib.....then wrote angad in half the story newayz continue soooon