Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 27

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Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago [QUOTE=erier101]Wait, so the parents still have more to notice?! LOL!! This is gonna be gooddd mann
Superb Parttt!! Loveddd the first bit man!! I cant even begin to tell ya how cute it sounded!! I could picture it in my mind, kripa hugging him, angad having his arms lightly around her, everyone watching them amusedly, parents watching them affectionately, yet with those mysterious looks which say they have something cooking in their brains.. (i hate those man, when my parents give em i go, uhh, this cant be good!)
So yea, loved that part, and aha, my favorite thing in the whole world was mentioned theree!! DETENTION!! yay!! lol!! not like i get detention, i actually did get it once, a couple months ago, my whole class got detention cuz this stupid guy threw someon's pencil case across the room, and the teacher caught it but like he didnt know whio threw it, and teh guilty guy didnt admit it so he is like, kk, since no one admits it, im giving everyone detention tommorow.
i was so pissed off, and get this- i wake up early in the morning, and actually get there five minutes early- just to find out that he cancelled the detention, i was like wtf, when did he do it? at midnight?! and half the ppl didnt even show up, and i felt like such a nerd, sitting at school so early. ah that jack***!!
LOL!! Anyways, lovedd their lil way of revenge. aw man kripa is such a goody goody, i would have thrown the keys into some sewer or something!! lol!! too bad i couldnt do that with my teacher-- the guy is so strict and scary, he would have gotten it and matched my fingerprints on it...
KK, im getting carried away. so, like i said ,part was superb!! i love it when i can relate with 'em, it makes it so.. i dunno, makes me give thought to it.. lol.. cant wait for the boy's retaliation!! Continue Soon!! **and you'll be glad to know, that I finally am on page 2 of the part for "Revoltions of My Heart" LOL! I know its short, but atleast its getting somewhere.. kk ima stop now..
cy
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 16 years ago Wait, so the parents still have more to notice?! LOL!! This is gonna be gooddd mann
Superb Parttt!! Loveddd the first bit man!! I cant even begin to tell ya how cute it sounded!! I could picture it in my mind, kripa hugging him, angad having his arms lightly around her, everyone watching them amusedly, parents watching them affectionately, yet with those mysterious looks which say they have something cooking in their brains.. (i hate those man, when my parents give em i go, uhh, this cant be good!)
So yea, loved that part, and aha, my favorite thing in the whole world was mentioned theree!! DETENTION!! yay!! lol!! not like i get detention, i actually did get it once, a couple months ago, my whole class got detention cuz this stupid guy threw someon's pencil case across the room, and the teacher caught it but like he didnt know whio threw it, and teh guilty guy didnt admit it so he is like, kk, since no one admits it, im giving everyone detention tommorow.
i was so pissed off, and get this- i wake up early in the morning, and actually get there five minutes early- just to find out that he cancelled the detention, i was like wtf, when did he do it? at midnight?! and half the ppl didnt even show up, and i felt like such a nerd, sitting at school so early. ah that jack***!!
LOL!! Anyways, lovedd their lil way of revenge. aw man kripa is such a goody goody, i would have thrown the keys into some sewer or something!! lol!! too bad i couldnt do that with my teacher-- the guy is so strict and scary, he would have gotten it and matched my fingerprints on it...
KK, im getting carried away. so, like i said ,part was superb!! i love it when i can relate with 'em, it makes it so.. i dunno, makes me give thought to it.. lol.. cant wait for the boy's retaliation!! Continue Soon!! **and you'll be glad to know, that I finally am on page 2 of the part for "Revoltions of My Heart" LOL! I know its short, but atleast its getting somewhere.. kk ima stop now..
cya
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 16 years ago thanks soo much!
thanks a bunch!
lol thanks!!
[QUOTE=iamsmart]gr8 part


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sana[/QUOTE]thanks soo much!
[QUOTE=*Ejaz4Hinna*]lol kripa and angad r just sooo mean!!!
but then again the professor deserved it:P:P
great pranks cnt wait for more!!
damn girl i love ur sense of humour! [/QUOTE]lol i know lol while writing it i was like awww poor guy lol but then again he could have given them a break lol you know teens dont exactly like to rationalize, its all on impulse lol!
[QUOTE=nehagupta_9]Awesome part!!!!!
Ohhhhh i wonder how the boys will retaliate, thatll be interestin,
n wat will da parent noticE??? I think it mite be dat kava n anjali r
like gettin along for once or neev n prachis relationship!!!![/QUOTE]lol it will be entertaining for the boys thats for sure! lol good guess!
[QUOTE=xobrown sugaox]amazing as always

continue soon

ishuu[/QUOTE]thanks soo much!
lol thanks soo much!! aww soo sweet! lol the hugging thing was totally random, it was never meant to be in there but while writing im like hmmm why not lol! lol my friend was saying she would do that at our sleepover to who ever went to sleep first i was like uhhhh are u serious i was laughing sooo hard i was like wow that is soo going in!
[QUOTE=angullgrl91]great part.
ur fan fic is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
cont soon.[/QUOTE]lol thank you!
[QUOTE=sameira-90]great aprt
i wonder what the boys will do?? [/QUOTE]lol you'll find out tomorrow! it will be funny for the boys though, lol not so much for girls!
[QUOTE=Iqbal Neha1]great part
hope angad and kripa get together soon
the detention was quite intresting
[/QUOTE]lol thanks soo much! lol glad you liked the detention! the keys thing was random too lol i was like what can angad do to get back at the professor hmm keys!! lol they will get together, just keep reading!
[QUOTE=ixi-shaj]funny detention- never had one myself...

anyway, classic Angad making it about him, and the fact everyone took pics of them sleeping-
roshaa
roshaa @roshaa 16 years ago wonderful part .... i love it contniue soon !!!
Shazia_haya
Sumra @Shazia_haya 16 years ago my my.....i really loved the beautiful part...do continue soon......man you write gr8........plz write longer ones...i can read it all day
Aabha
Aabha @Aabha 16 years ago Wowwwwwwwwwww!!! I JUST started reading your fanfic and I must say that I'm verrrrrrrrrrry IMPRESSED!!! I enjoyed it SOOO much that I read all 26 parts in one shot lol I know that sounds crazy, but when you've got free time and something entertaining to read, like your fanfic, reading through 61 pages is nothing! I really like the story a lot and I look forward to reading the upcoming parts as well! Thanks for writing this for us!
monikaseth
monika @monikaseth 16 years ago awesome dear i hope angad kripa jaldi eak ho
angel_tia
saborni ahamed @angel_tia 16 years ago excellent and not to 4get hilarious too!!!!!
nerdynerd
nerdynerd @nerdynerd 16 years ago cool story...that duffer kripa needs to admit her feelings already. gosh!
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