Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 14

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul 11 months ago Shocking that kripa is dating prem.NP fb scene was sweet.sad that prachi is ignoring neev.
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago thanks a lot!
[QUOTE=goldi2]ok well.. hmm 1 + 1/2 down 1 1/2 more to go:P lol
great part lol goshish finnaly neev relaises .. wow did praachi just get kidnapped? lol
continue soon
[/QUOTE]lol not for long lol! after the next part the score will change lol! hmm you never know![QUOTE=angullgrl91]omg. wat happened? pretty plz cont soon. dat was a
nice long part. ur fan fic is so totally cool n i no say this like
everytime i comment but i cant help it. it just is. hope nuthin bad
happens. [/QUOTE]lol thats soo much! aww soo sweet! hmm as for anything bad we'll just have to c...[QUOTE=erier101]Ah, ok im gonna stop slacking off, i was gonna come up
with a nice big comment got hte previous part, but i had to leave nad
by then the part was posted...anyways, fab part, yay k-a are
together...and neev's way of getting together with prachi are already
seeming cute ... i just want the a-k matter settled soon, once and for all continue soon v[/QUOTE]lol thanks! yup k-a are together, and n-p well you'll find out in this next part what happened! as for a-k that will come up tomorrow!
[QUOTE=lil_desi_goddes]brillant!!

simply brilliant!!

please do continue!!


[/QUOTE]thanks soo much!
[QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]i am soooo sry i cudnt comment on the last prt.... was busy!!!! but i
read it & it was AWESUM!!!!
YAYAY.... they KA r together!!!! schoooo
schweettt!!!!

FINALLY he realized he loves her.... soooo cuteee!!! i LOVE the way
he's behaving with her.... its REALLY cute!!!! the flashback scene
was sooooo cuteee!!! i LOVED it.... OMG... wht happened to Prachi??? who
kidnapped her??? i hope she is ok... i think it MIGHT be a joke by
Neev to confess his love or sumthing!!!

ughhh.. Prem.... i am not liking him in this FF... he is seperating AK!!!
nd wht is wrong with Angad??? why is he acting like tht... he shud fight to
get his love back!!!! wierdo... welll hope things fix up between them
soon too....

i CANNOT wait to
MochaQueen
BellaRosa @MochaQueen 17 years ago haiii haiiii dat made me MELT lol girl r u sure dis is ur first fan fic???:O m speechless! lol i have a request cud u plz write in a darker colour or jus make it bold thnxxxx i gtg revise will post a longer comment next tym mwahzzzz
berkeleygirl818
Rutu @berkeleygirl818 17 years ago i am soooo sry i cudnt comment on the last prt.... was busy!!!! but i read it & it was AWESUM!!!! YAYAY.... they KA r together!!!! schoooo schweettt!!!! FINALLY he realized he loves her.... soooo cuteee!!! i LOVE the way he's behaving with her.... its REALLY cute!!!! the flashback scene was sooooo cuteee!!! i LOVED it.... OMG... wht happened to Prachi??? who kidnapped her??? i hope she is ok... i think it MIGHT be a joke by Neev to confess his love or sumthing!!! ughhh.. Prem.... i am not liking him in this FF... he is seperating AK!!! nd wht is wrong with Angad??? why is he acting like tht... he shud fight to get his love back!!!! wierdo... welll hope things fix up between them soon too.... i CANNOT wait to find out wht happened to Prachi & wht is going to happen between AK... so continue soon!!!
lil_desi_goddes
Aakriti Mehta @lil_desi_goddes 17 years ago brillant!! simply brilliant!! please do continue!!
Dark Love
Madiha @Dark Love 17 years ago Ah, ok im gonna stop slacking off, i was gonna come up with a nice big comment got hte previous part, but i had to leave nad by then the part was posted...anyways, fab part, yay k-a are together...and neev's way of getting together with prachi are already seeming cute ... i just want the a-k matter settled soon, once and for all continue soon v
angullgrl91
angullgrl91 @angullgrl91 17 years ago omg. wat happened? pretty plz cont soon. dat was a nice long part. ur fan fic is so totally cool n i no say this like everytime i comment but i cant help it. it just is. hope nuthin bad happens.
goldi2
Hina @goldi2 17 years ago ok well.. hmm 1 + 1/2 down 1 1/2 more to go:P lol great part lol goshish finnaly neev relaises .. wow did praachi just get kidnapped? lol continue soon
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