Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 12

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Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago [QUOTE=sweet_mittal]it is really good. i got tears in my eyes by looking at their friendship.

but it is excellent part

continue soon[/QUOTE]awww soo sweet! i didnt want to make you cry but thats very sweet!
[QUOTE=srk1]
plz make them friends again..[/QUOTE]lol im working on that...
[QUOTE=goldi2]wow soo many problem:| lol
i think now is the time they all started talking lol i really hope
the girls dont stop talking to each other and same for the guys lol
wow cant belvie hwo easily they all just stopped talking
well
continue soon
:D

o and awsome part:)


Hina[/QUOTE]yup yup, lol i had warned you guys that i was gonna keep it light hearted in the beginning and make it more drama filled later on! yeah they did stop talking easily, but it is a tender age when things like love starts to develop which somtimes changes relationships possibly for the better. before when they were younger and friends it wasnt much of a problem but now that they are older they are more aware of these feelings that they are more than just friendship.
[QUOTE=berkeleygirl818]OMG.... i am sooooo sry for not commenting on the last prt... so...
to make it up... i willl make sure this comment is EXTRAAAA long!!!!

ok... first of... both of the prts were WICKED ROCKING, like ALWAYS!!!!


Prt. 10
the way Neev pinned her to the wall was ridiculously hottt.... i LOVED it....
awww.... she FINALLY confessed tht she loves him.... awwww sooooo
cuteeee!!!! God... Neev's such a jerk... a typical guy thing... if a girl
tells them 'i love u'... they freak out & act all wierd... sooooo ridiculously
annoying... welll Neev better figure out he loves her soon too!!! this
is kinda like wht i am going through... except i dunt love the guy!!!

thanks a lot!!! lol yea i found that hot too lol yup she finally confessed and yes neev turned out to be a typical guy freaking out and all. he will defintely figure it out soon...awww... she misses him bugging her... sooo
sweetangle04
shagun @sweetangle04 17 years ago i just read ur whole ff..simply great...plz continue soon
angelic shaz
shazeena @angelic shaz 17 years ago omg wow every1 is going through different emotion anger upset jealously wow!!! keep it up continue soon
Cytherea
Cytherea @Cytherea 17 years ago WOW...tht was some intense action...poor prachi ..God she must b soo depressed..tht neev better hurry up b4 she decides 2 move on...lol...as for anjali...she shld do the same kaavya is doing ...flirt in front of him nd c the reaction...lol...Kripa..ur just being a mean jerk ...plz update soon
MochaQueen
BellaRosa @MochaQueen 17 years ago ok so now they all decide to ignore eachother! awwww i aint mad at angad though he shud b jealous after all kripa only belongs 2 him not dat stupid prem na lol my fav part woz when angad woz punching dat bag pretendin it woz prems face haha IF ONLY IF ONLYYY u go angadddd!!! neev its abt tym u realize ur dumb feelingzzzz anjali n kavya r jus da cutest coupleee
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago lol thanks for the comments guys! i'm going with some friends for now since i have no school but when i get back i'll update! it might be late so yea... sorry bout that! but i have no time to edit the part and post it as well rite now! lol as for whats wrong with me lol i was in a depressed mood yesterday LMAO nooo im kiddding lol but this fight will work to everyone's advantage one way or another! hint hint loL! keep guessing what will happen, leave predictions and/or comments if u havent already! you'll just have to trust me on this! and soon enough they will be back together well sorta.... ok im not talking bout it anymore! but yea when i get back i'll post it!
Rachu_1987
Rachandeep @Rachu_1987 17 years ago hailaaa wats happened here??? alll 3 couples fighting.....n omg all tht stuff kripa said to angad.....woahhhh harshhhhhhh even for her!!! n tht idiot neev hasnt he sorted his head out yet....n kavya wats he playing at.....god these boys can b very stupid.....prem seems decent.....angad is possesive over kripa bcuz he loves her but he just doesnt know it yet...ahh well Numera sort all the probz out sooon lol nah great parts! totally loved em....plz continue soooon
angel_tia
saborni ahamed @angel_tia 17 years ago hello numera wat happnd to u????? previously ur ff was funfilled!now it is turning depressing!!!!!yaar plzzzzzzz bring those fun filled days bakk!!!!
angullgrl91
angullgrl91 @angullgrl91 17 years ago wow. dat was such a strong part. n all the couples have probs now. hope they get solved soon.
lil_desi_goddes
Aakriti Mehta @lil_desi_goddes 17 years ago WOW!! brilliant!! very realistic!! please do continue!!
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