Dosti Mein Pyaar 1

Dosti Mein Pyaar 1 Completed G

Chapter 10

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jasminerahul
Jasmine @jasminerahul 11 months ago Glad that prachi's tears are affecting neev and he feels guilty.np and KA scenes were romantic. AK nok jhok scenes were funny.
Numera*
Numera @Numera* 17 years ago lol thanks soo much! lol that was my favorite part of that chapter lol ohhh kavya lol[QUOTE=goldi2]hahahahahahahaha lol that was soo funny!@!! o gosh lol
why'd u have to stop writing lol hahahaha i wanna read MORE!! lol yes
yes i am very greedi girl lol well can u blame me lol!! no serisouly
man lol im like in love with this story:D:D:D and yea its sooo darn
good to know u continue everyday lol a lot of people on this forum
should start dooin that lol it would definetly make my life very very
very happy lol
o gosh i luved this part im gonna read it again or sumthing
lol
continue soon!! :D:D:D lol how about parts today?? lol it is monday after all lol
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE:D:D:D:D

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Hina[/QUOTE]lol sorry had to stop there or else i would have no story for the rest of the week lol! yup i like continuing everyday lol i cant believe im continuing today cuz i got a practice AP test tomorro and i gotta study but just came on to post it! anyways i added some funny stuff to part 10 and ill post it in a couple min since i already edited lol![QUOTE=erier101]Eek sorry forgot to comment!! awesome partss!! woot,
loved the previous part in which they discussed what happened, adn teh
dances, a-k's discussion, k-a's cute little dance [with uneasiness] and
then the neev-prachi thing was sad...hahah i knew it, remember i said
they gonna realized their feelings before hte other guys?!!!! lol!!
lol by the end of the week you will know if your right or wrong cuz someone is defintely hooking up this week! Loved Kavya'a portectiveness over his sister, was it a gentle
friendly punch, or a big punch? lol! whatever it was, i found it sho
cute!! When there was that knock on the door, i was thinkign it would
be neev apologizing, but hey it was a different story..

yeah i like it too! i wish i had an older bro who was protective like Kavya! lol it was a punch that hurt but not that a punch Kavya would give to someone he hatesThe guys are slow, they should have
angelic shaz
shazeena @angelic shaz 17 years ago omng dats was soooooo funi extremely gd continue soon
MochaQueen
BellaRosa @MochaQueen 17 years ago lol awwww kavya babyyyyy he ssooooo cute man i love him not just in serials now even in fan fics lol
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 17 years ago OMG!!!!!!! dat was jus toooooo hilarious....i cnt stop laughin.... how can he think of himslef as harry potter.... n btw liked seeing the protective bro side of kavya, it was really sweet!!!!
roshaa
roshaa @roshaa 17 years ago wondeful partt and lovely part !! i love it. heheheh kavaya is so funny but i am angry with his act as he came between angad and kripa romantic scean lol !! It was such a cute +romantic scean of angad and kripa !! continue soon ....i cant wait hehehe (lol) sabzz39196.202349537
angel_tia
saborni ahamed @angel_tia 17 years ago kavya...harry potter man that was xcellent...even the AK scene!!!!!!
berkeleygirl818
Rutu @berkeleygirl818 17 years ago ok... first of... i am soooo lateee.... sry abt tht!!! anywazzz.... AWESUMLY AMAZING & HILARIOUS prt!!! i LOVED it, like ALWAYS!!! awww.... poor Prachi... God... Neev ur in big trouble... u STILL havent made up with her!!! u better do tht soon... FINALLY... atlaest SUM1 realized it was loooove... sooooo cuteee... now Prachi needs to sleep on it & figure it out so tht one couple is down... with two more left to go!!! awww... Kavya's soooo cuteeee... i wish i had an older protective brother!!! well i think Neev shud consider himself lucky tht he is friend's with Kavya... or else he wud have been dead!!! ya... it IS a gud thing they didn't wear their nighties... but those poor guys... unlucky them!!! jk.... i havent really watched Smokin' Aces so dunt know much abt it... but ya... i HATE it when movies start of with 'obscene' scenes!!! nd well... guys just seem to LOVE it!!!! well... i think its a gud thing tht AK have opposite likes... coz like they say 'Opposites Attract' awww.... Neev, i am not TOO mad at him now... coz wht he did was REALLY cute!!! nd he's guilty... so i'll forgive him... let's say 50%!!! awww.... Kavya's a comfy pillow!!! he is sooooo adorable.... DAME... why did Kavya have to yell!!! AK's 'romantic' moment was ruined!!! but... tht was soooooo fing hilarious!!! he thinks he's Harry Potter who's afraid of spiders!!!!!! OMFG!!!!! tht's HILARIOUS!!!! OMG... i still cant stop laughing!!!!! "Ahhhhh big hairy SPIDER!! Don't eat me mate!!!! AHHH! I WANT MY MOMMY!! Why won't my wand work! Arachnophobia! ARACHNOPHOBIAAAAA!!!!" tht prt was THE funniest... well ACTUALLY the WHOLE last prt was HILARIOUS!!!! yup... he is sooooooo dead.... LMAO... i CANNOT wait to read more.... getting soooo interesting.... nd Neev better start apologizing in the next prt!!! continue soon
Supernatural_10
Supernatural_10 @Supernatural_10 17 years ago Awesome very cute and sweet and Kavya was hilarious
angullgrl91
angullgrl91 @angullgrl91 17 years ago hey. dat was a really funny part. it was so cute how anjali pretended 2 be sleepin so dat kavya would carry her n she heard him say ur so beautiful. awwwwwwwwwwwww. dat was soooooooooo cute n naughty anjali. . . n it was super hilarious wen kavya was pretendin 2 be harry potter. .
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