Chapter 1

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Hey guyz…I'm back with another One-Shot…was getting bored sp thought to write it. I wrote this in less then 30 mins so don't know how it came out. Please comment and do tell me your views.
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It was a very busy day at Sanjivani hospital. Riddhima was sitting in the canteen after her duty along with her other friends. But Armaan wasn't their yet. Armaan and Riddhima barely get time to spend together as they also have responsibilities of their interns. When Armaan is free, Riddhima is busy and when Riddhima is free, Armaan is busy. So they talk on phone more. Even though they work in the same hospital, sometimes they don't even see each other due to their busy schedules.
 
After a while, Armaan joins them. Riddhima gets up and hugs him. They settle down, and Armaan notices that the gang is in no mood to have fun right now. Everyone seems tired and bored. Then he gets an idea.
 
"He guys…aaj shaam tum sab free ho?" Armaan asks.
 
"Yeah" everyone replies.
 
"Good…mein bhi free hoon" he said
 
"Tum free ho?" Riddhima asks getting all happy.
 
"Haan…" he replies.
 
"Toh hum kahin bahar jayein?" she asks.
 
"Not today Riddhima…mein soch raha hoon kyun na hum ek choti si party rakhein?" he says. And everyone gets happy except for Riddhima. She just wanted to spend time with Armaan alone.
 
"Great idea yaar….kitne dino se party nahin ki humne" Atul said getting excited.
 
"Ya, it's gonna be fun" Rahul said.
 
"Ok then today evening 7 pm sharp at my place" Armaan says. He noticed Riddhima, who didn't look happy. But he knew how to make her happy. So he drags her to the fire escape. "Guys…we'll be back in a minute" he says and they both leave.
 
"Armaan tum mujhe yahan kyun lekar aaye?" Riddhima asks.
 
"Hmm…ab batao ki party ka naam sunte hi tumhara mood kyun kharab ho gaya?" he asked cupping her face.
 
"Kyun ki…mein tumhare saath time spend karna chahti thi aaj akele…itni mushkil se toh hum free hain aur tum party karna chahte ho…I don't want to go to any party" she said pouting.
 
"I Promise you jaan ki hum party mein ek saath hi honge and trust me you'll love the party…it's going to be the best party ever" he said while winking.
 
"Lekin…" Armaan didn't let her complete the sentence; he kept his fingers on her lips.
 
"Lekin kuch nahin, tum theek 7 baje ready rehna….I'll pick you up" he kissed her cheeks. And then they both went back to the canteen. Riddhima still didn't want to go to the party.
 
"Lekin yeh party kis khushi mein hai?" Muskaan asked.
 
"Umm…aise hi.." he replied.
 
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Armaan had invited all his close friends and their family members. Riddhima's parents were also there, but Riddhima didn't know that. Right at 6:50 pm, he was outside of Riddhima's house. He called her and told her that he's waiting. As Riddhima walked towards his car, he was stunned looking at Riddhima. She was looking drop dead gorgeous. He was mesmerized by her beauty and fell in love with her all over again. She looked like an angel in that red sari that he had given her, especially for the party.
 
He didn't notice when Riddhima came and sat into the car, he was lost in her thoughts. "Armaan…Armaan…" she shook him. "Huh…" he then came back to reality. "Chalein?" she asked. "Riddhima you look dazzling" he couldn't take his eyes off her. "And you look Dashing" she replied and they both exchanged smiles full of love. They drove off after praising each other. 
 
As they stepped into Armaan's house, they felt that they were walking on a rose carpet. There were rose petals on the ground and the room was dark. There was no light. As they walked a little more, Armaan clapped once and the lights turned on. There were Armaan and Riddhima's pictures on every wall, and the room was decorated beautifully with red and white drapes which matched their outfits and some spot lights. And all the people in the room were looking at the cute couple. Riddhima was surprised to see all this. The room was filled with the essence of love; she was touched to see their pictures everywhere. Then Armaan told Riddhima to look at one of the walls, it said "I Love You Riddhima". Then suddenly the lights went of and the spot light was turned on…which followed Armaan and Riddhima.
 
Then Armaan took out a ring from his pocket; he bent down on his knees and proposed her "Riddhima will you marry me?"  This time Riddhima had tears in her eyes and her heart melted looking into Armaan's eyes, which were filled with love. She hasn't expected all this. She then smiled and nodded in yes. She wasn't able to say anything. She was touched by seeing Armaan's love for her and she was speechless. "Yes" she was finally able to say something. Armaan then placed the ring into her finger and kissed her hand. The lights turned on and everyone clapped. As soon as Armaan got up, Riddhima hugged him tightly. She didn't want to leave him; she was pleased by his surprise. "I love you Armaan" she said still not breaking the hug. "I love you too" he broke from the hug and placed his lips on her and kissed her with full passion and love for the very first time.
 
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plz pm me if u write more...............plz...............can u giv me link 2 other ff of ursssssssssssplzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

14 years ago

lovely yaar............................too guddddddddddddddddd

14 years ago

dat was soo cute .................. it was soo sweet da way he proposed

14 years ago


thanxx....[/QUOTE]
pm me if u write more[/QUOTE]
okie..will pm you

14 years ago


thanxx....[/QUOTE]
pm me if u write more

14 years ago

[QUOTE=AR_kash]it was very cute...
keep it up[/QUOTE]
thanxx....

14 years ago

[QUOTE=REDnBLACK]hey woooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwww ria......................

awesome ............ so cute............

i just loooooooooooooovvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddddd it.................

just cont givng such awweeeeeeeeeee shots .............. i just lovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeedddddddddd it

love
sanna[/QUOTE]
thanx sanna...
glad you liked it!!
btw my name iz reema

14 years ago

[QUOTE=SaziArmaan]awwwwww so cute!
Armaan's surprise was so sweet...
AR are so adorable....
great going dear....
i really loved the one shot....

do write more plzzzzz....
nd thnxxx for da pm!

Luv SAZ![/QUOTE]
thanx Saz....
glad you liked it!!
will do write more..

14 years ago

[QUOTE=ria020594]
Hey...
It was a great one shot....
No extreme drama or anything like that.....but simple n sober.....that's what i always like....
Well you have portrayed it very nicely....loved the way you wrote it....
Do write some more one shots....
Love
Ria[/QUOTE]
thanxx ria...
glad you liked it!!
will surely write more...

14 years ago

[QUOTE=simi2]hey reema
just read the story
awww it was soo cute one .sweet lovely romantic oh i loved it a lot
wow ., ,armaan way to propose her was too good loved it a lot

well would love to read more and more of these kind of stories from you

loved it a lot .doo try more stories and please do pm me with that
take care
simi[/QUOTE]
aww thanx simi...
will deffo write more and pm you!!
glad you liked it!!

14 years ago