Chapter 14
recap:
suryaban went out of town for 2 days
now..........
a: chalo main bhi kuch help kardhungha thaki thoda exercise hojayi
k: exercise kisliye
a: ithna jo kilaya tumne
k: acha kabhi kabhi thoda jayadha kaliye tho kuch nahin hoga
a: acha tumko kisne bhola
k: i think you forgot that iam a doctor
a: ji doctor , kya abb main bhi thoda help kardhu cleaning
k: rehne dhijiye ye appki bas ki kam nahin hey
a: ye bath apko kisne bathayi hey doctor ji
k: kisiko batahne ki jarrurath nahin hey , mujeh patha hey
a: phir laghi sharth
k: sharth kis bath ki
a: main clean karsaktha hu
k: tik hey dekhenghey
a: aghar main jith gaya tho mujeh kya milegha
k: pehle jith kartho dikhao
a: aghar jith gaya tho
k: hmmmmmmmm........ jo tum mangoge vo dunghi
a: promise
k: promise
a: kripa you are in danger, Angad khanna kabhi kisise sharth nahin haregha(losses).
k: dekhthey hey, kuan danger main hey
k: angad aghar tum har gaye tho
a: jo tum mangoghi main vo dungha
k: ok aur........
suddenly phone rings so kripa goes to receive call she talks for like 15 minutes and sees that everything is cleaned
k: angad ye sab tumne kiya hey
a: nahin mera bhooth ne kiya hey
k: angad.......
a: kripa.........
k: your great angad
a: thank you i know that iam great, kripa kya dhoghi mujhe
k: main
a: haan tum sharth jo har gayi
k: sharth kuan sa sharth angad mujhe tho kuch yaad nahin hey
a: acha abhi batha tha hu kuan sa sharth
and he moves towards kripa seeing this kripa starts to run all over the house they come to living room kripa throws cushon pillows onto angad but he misses them and he runs towards kripa kripa was about to run but she trips on the pillow and fulls forward onto angad and they roll now angad is top of kripa. kripa has eyes closed and angad's arms around her waist. after a minute or like kripa feels that someone is staring at her she opens her eyes to see angad staring at her she mesmerized in those eyes angad comes near her faces pressing his body into hers now there lips are 1cm apart when tehre lips where about to brush each others they come back on to earth due to continous door bell sound, angad gets up from kripa and kripa goes to open the door its sakshi
sa:(getting in) kya di ithna dher kardhi apne door open karne main
k: oh main andhar kam main thi
kripa comes into living room finding everything back in their place and angad with a paper in his hands
sa: hi angad
a: hi sakshi how are you
sa: great, di mujhe bahuth bukh laghi hey
k: chal dinning roome
a: kripa i will leave now
sa: bye angad
kripa goes along with him till the gate they both don't talk
a: kripa iam sorry and he drives off before kripa can say anything
in the car driving
a: arey ye sakshi bhi na kabab main hadi ki thara sahi waqt pe ayithi
back at kripa's place
k: kya sakshi thu ghar ko agayi, thune kaha ki ajj teri friend ke ghar main rukhne valli thi
sa: haan di , lekin papa ne phone kiye ki oh bahar ja rahey hey aur mujhe gahr anna chahiye issliye main agayi , she finishes her dinner and goes to sleep
kripa is her room takes out the paper which has angad and her photo
k: kya angad ye pyar hey ya sirf attraction aur nahin tho kismath ka ek khel hey
hope you guys enjoy this part 
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awww tht was soooo sweet!! Theres sill time b4 ks dad cums so make things happen lol...
18 years ago
Nice part continue soon!!!
18 years ago
THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR READING MY FANFICTION I WILL CONTINUE IN THE WEEKEND AS I HAVE MY RPOJECTS TO BE DONE. SWEETYsweety22338762.3641319444
18 years ago
Thanks alottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ttttt yes i do have another fanfiction Two friends here is the link for it sweety
18 years ago
haha...awww i loved this part!!...it was sooo romantic!!...plzz continue...when are they going to fall in love??..
18 years ago
btw that was a great romantic part yeh saakshi bhi na, wrong timing!,next time they see remember the one thingkripa has to do he should juss ask for a kiss, but i dont know how they would get there to that point i cant wait for hte next part do uhave any other fan fics i want to read them! luv mira
18 years ago
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18 years ago
omg omg omg they were abt to kiss!!!! i'm so happy u updated two parts today but can u plz update juss one more part plz i beg of you!!!!!! continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soon continue soo
18 years ago
very nice and romantic part please con. soon
18 years ago
i luved it~~ it was great coninue soon Hina
18 years ago