Chapter 10
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Oh guys I forgot to mention this to you the last time I updated but please imagine Amit Tandon as Manthan while you are reading this not the new Manthan. I wrote Manthan's part keeping Amit T. in mind.
Part 10 – Pyaar ki shuruaat
"Didi! Aap yahaan?" Isha yelled out. "Hum inko tutor kar rahe the aur barish bohut zyada thi toh inonhe hume ride dee." Nisha quickly explained. "Par Isha, aap yahaan?" Nisha questioned her sister. "Woh actually di, main slip ho gayi aur pani mein gir gayi aur phir Eklavya brought me here to change aur I kinda twisted my ankle so I stayed here," Isha said avoiding the part about Eklavya falling on top of her in the tub. "Aur maine saara homework bhi finish kar diya!" She quickly added to her sister's suspicious look.
Manthan was staring at Isha in disbelief and Eklavya seemed to be having the same reaction towards Nisha. The twins suddenly realized that Manthan and Eklavya didn't know that they were twins. "Eklavya, yeh Nisha didi hai, my twin sister." Isha said introducing her sister. Eklavya shook her hand with his mouth open wondering how two different people could look the same yet so different. "Aur Manthan, this is Isha." Manthan had a similar reaction wondering the same thing as Eklavya. "Ok, di, let's go" Isha said getting her purse and homework.
"Arre, Isha beta, bahar bohut barish hai, aaj raat yahi pe ruko." Damini came and insisted. After a lot of persuasion, Nisha reluctantly agreed and so did Isha. "Uhh, Manthan, Nisha, tum dono change kar ke aao" Nisha smiled and nodded at Damini. She followed Manthan to his room. "Uhhh, ek minute." Manthan told her. He went to get something from his sister's wardrobe because after her marriage with Joydeep, she hadn't used any of her modern clothes. Quickly he realized that Nisha would never wear anything except her salwar kameez. "Uhh" he said as he came into the room. "Woh actually sis ke kapde-" He stopped midway.
Nisha was on the dresser with a towel on her lap. He hair was still wet but she had already changed into a new salwar kameez and was looking in her purse for something. She clearly hadn't heard Manthan come in. She got a small glass perfume bottle and placed it on the dresser. She started humming and singing occasionally. She looked at herself in the mirror and made faces at herself. Manthan was enjoying her cute faces. So she isn't serious all the time, he thought to himself. Nisha flipped her hair mimicking the models in shampoo ads. Accidentally, her hair knocked over the perfume bottle on the dresser.
Manthan ran to her and went to get the bottle. "Ouch!" He said as he grabbed the broken glass which was what was left of the perfume bottle. Blood started to pour from his palm. "Manthan!" Nisha screamed figuring out that he had gone to pick up a broken glass bottle. Immediately, she took his finger and sucked out all the blood. "Pagal hoge ho aap?" She looked at him. "No, really it's fine. I'm ok." Manthan said to her, taking his hand away.
N: "Pehle bacho jaise harkat karte ho aur phir you say I'm fine? Who goes to grab a broken glass bottle?"
Manthan just looked at her feeling like his mother was taunting him for eating ice cream and then getting sick.
N: "Where's the first-aid?"
M: "No, really, I'm ok. It's just a little blood."
N: "Humne poocha first-aid box kahaan hai?"
M: "But there's no need-"
N: "I'll decide that! Now where is the box?"
Manthan pointed at a drawer. Nisha quickly got the box and started cleaning his wound with Detol.
M: "Lcchh!" Manthan said as the Detol went in and burned.
Nisha gave him a well-you-were-stupid-enough-to-deserve-this look. She got the white cloth band-aids and enveloped it tightly around his hand. "There! Next time you go to grab a broken piece of glass, I'm not going to be there to help you out." She said. She turned to leave.
M: Nisha?
N: Hmmp?
N: Chot mujhe lagi aur aaisa lag ta hai ki dard tumhe hua…
Please, please reply and tell me if you like it and if I should continue...
Pooja
Oh guys I forgot to mention this to you the last time I updated but please imagine Amit Tandon as Manthan while you are reading this not the new Manthan. I wrote Manthan's part keeping Amit T. in mind.
Part 10 – Pyaar ki shuruaat
"Didi! Aap yahaan?" Isha yelled out. "Hum inko tutor kar rahe the aur barish bohut zyada thi toh inonhe hume ride dee." Nisha quickly explained. "Par Isha, aap yahaan?" Nisha questioned her sister. "Woh actually di, main slip ho gayi aur pani mein gir gayi aur phir Eklavya brought me here to change aur I kinda twisted my ankle so I stayed here," Isha said avoiding the part about Eklavya falling on top of her in the tub. "Aur maine saara homework bhi finish kar diya!" She quickly added to her sister's suspicious look.
Manthan was staring at Isha in disbelief and Eklavya seemed to be having the same reaction towards Nisha. The twins suddenly realized that Manthan and Eklavya didn't know that they were twins. "Eklavya, yeh Nisha didi hai, my twin sister." Isha said introducing her sister. Eklavya shook her hand with his mouth open wondering how two different people could look the same yet so different. "Aur Manthan, this is Isha." Manthan had a similar reaction wondering the same thing as Eklavya. "Ok, di, let's go" Isha said getting her purse and homework.
"Arre, Isha beta, bahar bohut barish hai, aaj raat yahi pe ruko." Damini came and insisted. After a lot of persuasion, Nisha reluctantly agreed and so did Isha. "Uhh, Manthan, Nisha, tum dono change kar ke aao" Nisha smiled and nodded at Damini. She followed Manthan to his room. "Uhhh, ek minute." Manthan told her. He went to get something from his sister's wardrobe because after her marriage with Joydeep, she hadn't used any of her modern clothes. Quickly he realized that Nisha would never wear anything except her salwar kameez. "Uhh" he said as he came into the room. "Woh actually sis ke kapde-" He stopped midway.
Nisha was on the dresser with a towel on her lap. He hair was still wet but she had already changed into a new salwar kameez and was looking in her purse for something. She clearly hadn't heard Manthan come in. She got a small glass perfume bottle and placed it on the dresser. She started humming and singing occasionally. She looked at herself in the mirror and made faces at herself. Manthan was enjoying her cute faces. So she isn't serious all the time, he thought to himself. Nisha flipped her hair mimicking the models in shampoo ads. Accidentally, her hair knocked over the perfume bottle on the dresser.
Manthan ran to her and went to get the bottle. "Ouch!" He said as he grabbed the broken glass which was what was left of the perfume bottle. Blood started to pour from his palm. "Manthan!" Nisha screamed figuring out that he had gone to pick up a broken glass bottle. Immediately, she took his finger and sucked out all the blood. "Pagal hoge ho aap?" She looked at him. "No, really it's fine. I'm ok." Manthan said to her, taking his hand away.
N: "Pehle bacho jaise harkat karte ho aur phir you say I'm fine? Who goes to grab a broken glass bottle?"
Manthan just looked at her feeling like his mother was taunting him for eating ice cream and then getting sick.
N: "Where's the first-aid?"
M: "No, really, I'm ok. It's just a little blood."
N: "Humne poocha first-aid box kahaan hai?"
M: "But there's no need-"
N: "I'll decide that! Now where is the box?"
Manthan pointed at a drawer. Nisha quickly got the box and started cleaning his wound with Detol.
M: "Lcchh!" Manthan said as the Detol went in and burned.
Nisha gave him a well-you-were-stupid-enough-to-deserve-this look. She got the white cloth band-aids and enveloped it tightly around his hand. "There! Next time you go to grab a broken piece of glass, I'm not going to be there to help you out." She said. She turned to leave.
M: Nisha?
N: Hmmp?
N: Chot mujhe lagi aur aaisa lag ta hai ki dard tumhe hua…
Please, please reply and tell me if you like it and if I should continue...
Pooja
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