Chapter 1
Chapter 2 [Part 1]
Chapter 2 [Part 2]
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Epilogue
Heyy this is RJOpal, please tell me if I should continue with it or not, cuz I'm new at this... This is going to be a Suspence/Thriller/Roamnce fic, tell me how you like it! If you think I should continue, please give ideas or suggestions of what you might want to happen in the future chapters... I haven't got many ideas right now... Here it goes:
On the RunChapter 1
Right now, Huda, Aalekh and Ali were already there around a desk, with a man who had his back to them, bent over something on the table. The girls didn't need to ask to know that it was their hero, their Shahrukh!
Captain Rajveer turned around a bit, a smile barely visible on his unshaved face. His tired yet determined gaze softened seeing the girls beaming at him, and paused at Naina, recognising the qualities he remembered about her, and taking in the changes in her, as if he wanted to keep her in his heart everlastingly.
"Rajveer Sir!" Pooja yelled with a huge grin on her face.
"Softly Pooja, or else everyone's going to wake up!" Ali warned her.
"He's right... and it's great to see you girls too!" Captain Rajveer said, with a hint of his old humour. His eyes lingered on Naina for some time, and she nodded with a smile to confirm his answer. Their exchange was interrupted by Pooja.
"Oye where's Yudiye and Dr. Shalini??
"That Drama King's gone to fetch his Queen... there they are!" Aalekh pointed at the newcomers, who were completely soaked from head to toe.
"It's raining so heavily outside! I hope Capt. Abhimanyu doesn't have any problems coming here, like we did!" Dr. Shalini voiced her concern.
"Don't worry Doc, I'm not such a bad soldier!" Capt. Abhimanyu joked from the door.
"I didn't mean that Captain! I was just worried - oh Capt. Rajveer! It's fantastic to finally see you! Oh my God, what have you done to yourself? You men really-"
"Now now Dr. Shalini, lets not get into the whole 'men vs. women' thing; we haven't got much time." Capt. Rajveer cut her off, noticing the change in his best friend's expression as the attention shifted away from him.
What's gonna happen next? Plz share ideas... I need some!
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