Chapter 20

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EPISODE-20

 

 

Naina stayed back in Srinagar looking after Rajveer. A week later his plaster was cut and he was discharged. His hand wasn't in a too good condition but his only concern at that point of time was Navin. They had to leave for Delhi. But before going to Delhi Rajveer decided to meet Neetika at Phagwara. Neetika felt much better after meeting Rajveer. They decided to stay back for the night. It was around midnight when Neetika saw Rajveer in the living room.

"Raj tum soye nahin abhi tak? Tumhe subah-subah nikalna hai."

"Nahin...bas woh..." he looked restless.

"Navin ki fikr ho rahi hai...haina?"

"Yeah...Naina so gayi?"

"Haan. Tum kuch baat karna chahte the na?"

"Ammm....nahin woh...main..."

"Oh come on Raj...I know that. Tum Naina ke saamne Navin ke baare mein baat nahin karna chahte the. But right now she is sleeping and I know you want to talk."

"Actually you are right. Naina bahut dari hui hai. Uske saamne Navin ke bare mein baat karne ki himmat nahin hoti."

"I know."

"Neeti... we can't deny ki.... Navin might just not come back."

"I really hope nothing like that happens."

"I hope so too. Tum Navin se last time kab mili thi?"

"Around a week before his transfer at Pulwama. Main leave pe Pathankot gayi thi. Waise ek baat poochon?"

"Kya?"

"Tum karne kya waale ho? I mean how are you gonna find Navin?"

"To tell you the truth even I don't know. Maine Naina ko promise to kar diya hai ki I'll find him out but samajh mein nahin aata kya karoon."

"Don't worry Raj. Where there is a will there's a way.  You are the last hope Raj."

Rajveer looked at Neetika. He has always known her as a very strong person. But today she wasn't the same Neetika. She looked weak and emotionally drained out.

"Tumhare liye bhi Navin ke missing hone ki news utni hi shocking thi jitni Naina ke liye but you couldn't even say that kyunki tumhare upar Naina aur Uncle-Aunty ki bhi responsibility hai. I can understand Neeti what you are going through."

"No Raj.... You can not understand."

Rajveer looked at her in surprise. Her eyes were moist....she was so close to tears.

"Neeti is everything alright?"

She shook her head in no.

"Kya hua...Tell me."

She was quiet. She was struggling very hard to control her tears.

"Neeti say something"

"Raj I know right now tum pe bahut zyada pressure hai Navin ko dhoondhne ka but..."

"But what?"

"You'll have to bring him back to me Raj.... at any cost....I m counting on you completely."

"Neeti please tell me whats the matter."

She looked at him for a while....without answering him. Then she turned away her face.Her eyes were closed tightly  as she answered, "I am pregnant....."

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[QUOTE=pinka_anshu][QUOTE=sanyamalhotra]
Now just Imagine yeh actually ek K-show hota to iske baad kya hota..............
Lemme guess......
Raj Navin ko search karne ki bahut koshish karta lekin woh usko nahin milta. Naina k parents Neetika ko blame karte ki woh 'manhoos' hai isliye Navin ke saath yeh sab hua. Lekin jab unko Neetika ki pregnancy ke bare mein pata chalta to woh log Navin ki 'Aakhri Nishaani' ko Neetika se cheenna chahte. Naina apne parents ko oppose karti but without much results. Neetika ko badnaami se bachane ke liye Rajveer usse shaadi kar leta. Naina ke parents use Rajveer se milne ke liye mana kar dete. Naina se door hoke Rajveer ko pata chalta ki haila...usko to Naina se pyaar ho gaya hai. Lekin woh ek achche husband ki tarah yeh bat chupa jata aur apni wify ka poora dhyaan rakhta. Naina khud ko poori tarah se kaam mein duba leti aur apne parents se theek se baat bhi nhin karti. Slowly usko bhi realize hota ki usko Rajveer se pyaar hai. Lekin woh apne aansoon pee ke reh jaati. Baby ke birth tak slowly and gradually Rajveer aur Neetika ko ek-doosre se pyaar ho jata. Aur tabhi achanak Navin ki re-entry hoti. Usko pata chalta ki uski fianc ab uske frnd ki wife hai aur uske baby ke naam ke aage Rajveer ka surname hai to woh apni barso ki dosti bhula ki Rajveer ka Enemy No-1 ban jaata. Phir Naina ko lagta ki yeh golden opportunity hai Rajveer ko 'HAASIL' karne ki isliye woh bhi apne Bhaiyya ki help karti un dono ko alag karne ke liye. After a long-long series of conspiracies Navin ko jail ho jaati. Naina yeh news sunte hi sheher chod ke kahin underground ho jaati apne dil mein badle ki bhaawna liye.... Aur phir 20 saal baad woh jail se nikalta APNA BADLA POORA KARNE KE LIYE aur is baar unke raaste mein khada hota Navin ka apna beta...jo ki apne Dad Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ki tarah hi ek nek, imaandaar aur saaf dil ka insaan hai......lekin jab usko pata chalta ki Rajveer uska real dad nahin hai aur uske parents ne usse itni badi baat chupayi hai

17 years ago

Abhi to sirf ek 20 yr leap liye hai..nxt leap k liye bhi to kuch masala chahiye na!!

17 years ago

[QUOTE=sanyamalhotra]
Now just Imagine yeh actually ek K-show hota to iske baad kya hota..............
Lemme guess......
Raj Navin ko search karne ki bahut koshish karta lekin woh usko nahin milta. Naina k parents Neetika ko blame karte ki woh 'manhoos' hai isliye Navin ke saath yeh sab hua. Lekin jab unko Neetika ki pregnancy ke bare mein pata chalta to woh log Navin ki 'Aakhri Nishaani' ko Neetika se cheenna chahte. Naina apne parents ko oppose karti but without much results. Neetika ko badnaami se bachane ke liye Rajveer usse shaadi kar leta. Naina ke parents use Rajveer se milne ke liye mana kar dete. Naina se door hoke Rajveer ko pata chalta ki haila...usko to Naina se pyaar ho gaya hai. Lekin woh ek achche husband ki tarah yeh bat chupa jata aur apni wify ka poora dhyaan rakhta. Naina khud ko poori tarah se kaam mein duba leti aur apne parents se theek se baat bhi nhin karti. Slowly usko bhi realize hota ki usko Rajveer se pyaar hai. Lekin woh apne aansoon pee ke reh jaati. Baby ke birth tak slowly and gradually Rajveer aur Neetika ko ek-doosre se pyaar ho jata. Aur tabhi achanak Navin ki re-entry hoti. Usko pata chalta ki uski fianc ab uske frnd ki wife hai aur uske baby ke naam ke aage Rajveer ka surname hai to woh apni barso ki dosti bhula ki Rajveer ka Enemy No-1 ban jaata. Phir Naina ko lagta ki yeh golden opportunity hai Rajveer ko 'HAASIL' karne ki isliye woh bhi apne Bhaiyya ki help karti un dono ko alag karne ke liye. After a long-long series of conspiracies Navin ko jail ho jaati. Naina yeh news sunte hi sheher chod ke kahin underground ho jaati apne dil mein badle ki bhaawna liye.... Aur phir 20 saal baad woh jail se nikalta APNA BADLA POORA KARNE KE LIYE aur is baar unke raaste mein khada hota Navin ka apna beta...jo ki apne Dad Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ki tarah hi ek nek, imaandaar aur saaf dil ka insaan hai......lekin jab usko pata chalta ki Rajveer uska real dad nahin hai aur uske parents ne usse itni badi baat chupayi hai to woh unse nafrat

17 years ago

[QUOTE=sanyamalhotra]

Now just Imagine yeh actually ek K-show hota to
iske baad kya hota..............

Lemme guess......

Raj Navin ko search karne ki bahut koshish karta lekin
woh usko nahin milta. Naina k parents Neetika ko blame karte ki woh 'manhoos'
hai isliye Navin ke saath yeh sab hua. Lekin jab unko Neetika ki pregnancy ke bare mein pata chalta
to woh log Navin ki 'Aakhri Nishaani' ko Neetika se cheenna chahte. Naina apne
parents ko oppose karti but without much results. Neetika ko badnaami se
bachane ke liye Rajveer usse shaadi kar leta. Naina ke parents use Rajveer se
milne ke liye mana kar dete. Naina se door hoke Rajveer ko pata chalta ki
haila...usko to Naina se pyaar ho gaya
hai. Lekin woh ek achche husband ki tarah yeh bat chupa jata aur apni wify ka
poora dhyaan rakhta. Naina khud ko poori tarah se kaam mein duba leti aur apne
parents se theek se baat bhi nhin karti. Slowly usko bhi realize hota ki usko
Rajveer se pyaar hai. Lekin woh apne aansoon pee ke reh jaati. Baby ke birth
tak slowly and gradually Rajveer aur Neetika ko ek-doosre se pyaar ho jata. Aur
tabhi achanak Navin ki re-entry hoti. Usko pata chalta ki uski fianc ab uske
frnd ki wife hai aur uske baby ke naam ke aage Rajveer ka surname hai to woh
apni barso ki dosti bhula ki Rajveer ka Enemy No-1 ban jaata. Phir Naina ko
lagta ki yeh golden opportunity hai Rajveer ko 'HAASIL' karne ki isliye woh bhi
apne Bhaiyya ki help karti un dono ko alag karne ke liye. After a long-long
series of conspiracies Navin ko jail ho jaati. Naina yeh news sunte hi sheher
chod ke kahin underground ho jaati apne dil mein badle ki bhaawna liye.... Aur
phir 20 saal baad woh jail se nikalta APNA BADLA POORA KARNE KE LIYE aur is
baar unke raaste mein khada hota Navin ka apna beta...jo ki apne Dad Rajveer
Singh Shekhawat ki tarah hi ek nek, imaandaar aur saaf dil ka insaan
hai......lekin jab usko pata chalta ki Rajveer uska real dad nahin hai aur uske
parents ne usse itni badi ba

17 years ago

gr8.kamaal kar diya didi aapne.......... Ekta woud fall if she doesnt change her ususal line f story

17 years ago

Chal try karne mein kya jaata hai......Infact ek kaam karte hain.......Jaise Munnabhai ki series hai na........Munnabhai MBBS.....Lage raho Munnabhai...Munnabhai chale America(I suppose dats d name of third one) Hum dono mil k Lovestation series nikaalte hain.....Lovestation run ho hi rahi hai....U help me wid Lovestation-Ekta Style..........aur Lovestation Revisited already planning stage mein hai hi!!!So wats say......Aur main serious hoon....so dont take me litely!!

17 years ago


arre tune itna accha likha hain aur dikhaya hain chahe woh negative aspect of life kyun na ho.. accha hain yaar.. tum kaahn ho aajkal YM pe nahin aati..?[/QUOTE]Actually mujhe lagraha thi ki is baar Drama quotient thoda zyaada ho gaya!!!Ne-ways Main ab online bahut kam aati hoon...aati bhi hoon to 5 mins k liye...Isliye msngr pe nhin jaati....Tho kal main gayio thi..Swathi mili bhi thi bt then Net dc ho gaya....Ab xms k baad hi miloongi msngr pe!!

17 years ago

cool yaar sanya yeh wala bhi ascha hai try kare...i mean socho aisa hua to

17 years ago


arre tune itna accha likha hain aur dikhaya hain chahe woh negative aspect of life kyun na ho.. accha hain yaar.. tum kaahn ho aajkal YM pe nahin aati..?

17 years ago


Now just Imagine yeh actually ek K-show hota to
iske baad kya hota..............

Lemme guess......

Raj Navin ko search karne ki bahut koshish karta lekin
woh usko nahin milta. Naina k parents Neetika ko blame karte ki woh 'manhoos'
hai isliye Navin ke saath yeh sab hua. Lekin jab unko Neetika ki pregnancy ke bare mein pata chalta
to woh log Navin ki 'Aakhri Nishaani' ko Neetika se cheenna chahte. Naina apne
parents ko oppose karti but without much results. Neetika ko badnaami se
bachane ke liye Rajveer usse shaadi kar leta. Naina ke parents use Rajveer se
milne ke liye mana kar dete. Naina se door hoke Rajveer ko pata chalta ki
haila...usko to Naina se pyaar ho gaya
hai. Lekin woh ek achche husband ki tarah yeh bat chupa jata aur apni wify ka
poora dhyaan rakhta. Naina khud ko poori tarah se kaam mein duba leti aur apne
parents se theek se baat bhi nhin karti. Slowly usko bhi realize hota ki usko
Rajveer se pyaar hai. Lekin woh apne aansoon pee ke reh jaati. Baby ke birth
tak slowly and gradually Rajveer aur Neetika ko ek-doosre se pyaar ho jata. Aur
tabhi achanak Navin ki re-entry hoti. Usko pata chalta ki uski fianc ab uske
frnd ki wife hai aur uske baby ke naam ke aage Rajveer ka surname hai to woh
apni barso ki dosti bhula ki Rajveer ka Enemy No-1 ban jaata. Phir Naina ko
lagta ki yeh golden opportunity hai Rajveer ko 'HAASIL' karne ki isliye woh bhi
apne Bhaiyya ki help karti un dono ko alag karne ke liye. After a long-long
series of conspiracies Navin ko jail ho jaati. Naina yeh news sunte hi sheher
chod ke kahin underground ho jaati apne dil mein badle ki bhaawna liye.... Aur
phir 20 saal baad woh jail se nikalta APNA BADLA POORA KARNE KE LIYE aur is
baar unke raaste mein khada hota Navin ka apna beta...jo ki apne Dad Rajveer
Singh Shekhawat ki tarah hi ek nek, imaandaar aur saaf dil ka insaan
hai......lekin jab usko pata chalta ki Rajveer uska real dad nahin hai aur uske
parents ne usse itni badi baat chupayi hai to woh u

17 years ago