Indebted

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Chapter 28: Clarity and Confusion Members Only

Published On Thursday,Aug 18, 2022 02:38 AM GMT-06:00

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janu2006
janu2006 @janu2006 1 years ago Great part
Wonder how will Annie take all this
Also will Geet take Annie’s and Meera’s relation with maan or be jealous
Cont soon
coderlady
coderlady @coderlady 1 years ago Why is Annie so upset? IS it because he did not tell them?
coderlady
coderlady @coderlady 1 years ago He can't even put her in a wheelchair now.
coderlady
coderlady @coderlady 1 years ago All is forgotten now and he is taking good care of her.
deep002
deep002 @deep002 1 years ago Nice update, hope Annie don't forgive maan and pari for breaking her heart and trust and leave the house, maan don't deserve a loving sister like Annie, he just wants to be slave for geet and handas, handas are very cunning people, when they are nearly bank crupted very Claverley panlts geet back in maan's life
crazymaneetian
crazymaneetian @crazymaneetian 1 years ago lovely update!! finally maan is out of his madness and wants to det things right...glad that yash has also coem around...wonder how long will it take for Geet to be old geet
PaintedSky
Aatiya @PaintedSky 1 years ago She is home now! Their role reversed. Dadi now know where his heart is. His actions loud and clear.now he has to tell to annie.
dalur1
dalur1 @dalur1 1 years ago Maan carrying Geet in his arms, those forehead kisses, his open care, his words like princess,at your service, his friendliness with Yash and teasing Meera, everything is just wow. I'm happy that Dadi seems accepting of Maaneet and understands his love. Now it will be interesting to see how and what does Maan reveal to Annie about the complex past and Maaneet relationship. I'm just Fida on this story
khwaishfan
khwaishfan @khwaishfan 1 years ago Chapter 28
Outstanding update… perfectly written
SD is a sweetheart....
glad that she knows that Maan loves Geet
can understand that she was hurt as Maan never told her about this
of cos Ranoo trusts Maan with Geet
Maan is just relieved that his love is in front of his eyes and is fine
adore when Maan kissed her on her forehead
Geet's thoughts and feelings are reasonable
Maan clearly knows that Geet has many questions but wants her to rest
his comment that his lost his life hearing about her accident reveals his feelings for her
so Geet is confused whether his care is out of love or responsibility?
great that she confronted him about not having eaten anything
she is clearly amazed with his changed behavior
not surprised that Maan berates himself for her condition
at least they both have dinner together
finally Geet sees her old Maan
Maan proposing to Pari has deeply affected Geet
pleased that Geet is discharged
as expected Maan is adamant that she will stay with in KM
good that Brij and Meera will let Maan and Geet sort things out
love Maan's care and concern for Geet
Maan has no choice but to be patient
he know that he made the distance between him and Geet
how will he remove it?
Geet's thoughts were eloquently portrayed
she is naturally awed seeing the grandeur of KM
Aww Maan carried Geet in the house
Geet's fears are justified
nice that Maan wants to bring his old Geet back
he is now living for her
well she is his priority
hmm she thinks of the olden days together
Ahh he called her princess
Geet is unable to accept that he loves her despite seeing the love in his eyes for her
Maan has really hurt her and now has to show her his love
Maan shares a lovely bond with Brij and Meera
Yash's reaction knowing Maan is family is predictable
admire Brij and Meera's efforts to lighten the atmosphere
Maan knows that he has hurt Annie as well
he has to explain everything to her
I am sure she will be happy knowing that he loves Geet
icskwt
icskwt @icskwt 1 years ago What a lovely part dear...
Maan care and love is visible through his care towards geet. He is like old maan for him geet is above everything. The way pari is smiling withih shows what a great friend she is. Maan wants his old geet back who used to boss him. Yesh is some what got some hints about who is maan to geet. Now he needs to sooth his lovely engry and hust sister.
Now can't wait to read more......
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