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She got one more Chance

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Bee222
Bee222 @Bee222 1 years ago Awww baby Raya being awkward and cute!! 😍
"You want me to call you bhaiya?"
Lmao I can totally imagine them having this convo 🀣🀣

Lemme just go read the next chapter real quick πŸƒβ€β™€οΈπŸƒβ€β™€οΈ
Jiyarao
Jiyarao @Jiyarao 1 years ago Amazing β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‡βœ¨ Ram - Priya β˜ΊοΈβœ¨πŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘
SONIA441
SONIA441 @SONIA441 1 years ago Mastt Likha haiI loved how Ram got flustered around Priya in the cafe & their conversation too. PriRa are just so cuteVik-Sara here actually sound like goals cos you see Vikrant has a mature side tooNow, I can just imagine few scenes of PriRa in their young days of dating - Priya blabbering about World's wrongs while Ram is driving them to a Restaurant, Priya throwing a tantrum on getting a designer bag gifted yet Ram is able to melt her again..Uff
DazzlingLight
Whadda Paav @DazzlingLight 1 years ago Thank you for the tag!Loved the second part! Why, oh why couldn’t Sara be more like what you’ve written here!Loved RaYa in this alternate universe..but Ram will be Ram no matter which universe πŸ˜‚. He better be careful πŸ˜›Are you planning to continue this? I would love to see RaYa’s story move forward from here ❀️
BlurredLines
Juanita @BlurredLines 1 years ago Too Good Mandy . I am so glad you have written a second part . Such a small peak into the characters who are making progress in their life gives you a happy wala feeling
vaidharbhi95
vaidharbhi95 @vaidharbhi95 1 years ago Ram getting paranoid about Priya bro zoning him Uff !! I want to see this so badly now !!
999loveyourself
999loveyourself @999loveyourself 1 years ago Okay, it's a wonderful piece. And thank you for considering the gap of PriRa, might not be much in thirties, it is blaring when Priya is just getting out of her teens and Ram is in twenties. Also, please keep dropping snippets from this world. It's just so wholesome and warm.
DreamOfEndless
Tiara @DreamOfEndless 1 years ago I am glad you sidelined Sara And your RaYa are so beautiful!Poor Ram accidentally bro-zoned himself 🀣 but I loved how Ram asked out Priya. "I know you are just nineteen, but you are holding yourself back, and I hope one day, you find a reason to let go". Beautiful lines. ❀Sara and Vikrant are also very cute. I think Vikrant in the show wasn't so mature in his twenties, his maturity came with age/experience. But this Vikrant is a fresh breeze of air.Thanks for making this a TS, and thanks for tagging.
sunu.nainu
Sunaina @sunu.nainu 1 years ago Hey nice storyLoved the way Priya opened up to RamContinue soonWant to read moreBut didn’t get the 19yr old priya partIs she so young here ?
BeyondHorizon
Mandy @BeyondHorizon 1 years ago I love your version of RaYa this can be a mature love story on youngsters and it makes for a nice change. Liking Vikrant here. Is he Ram’s friend here?
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