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Bee222
Bee222 @Bee222 1 years ago God, this is exactly how I wanted Sara to be 😭 someone strong, firm yet vulnerable, in a way that's similar to Priya but also very complementary. Someone who really admires her for the kind of leadership role she assumed in the family.
They're the elder sisters man, saari responsibilities inpar hoti hai, bonding hi alag honi chahiye 😭 thank you for giving me this ❤️

Also, Ram panicking and being a cutie at the end! 😍
BlurredLines
Juanita @BlurredLines 1 years ago Hola, this is Ved calling for her Mandy . I am glad I stumbled upon this OS because it was really good and for someone who never watched the show, I loved how you wrote an alternate version from a secondary character perspective . I really loved it Mandy and you are an a amazing writer.
foreverlazy
Diya @foreverlazy 1 years ago I love this so much!!! Giving characters the arcs that they actually deserve is one of my favourite parts of writing fanfiction. I would give anything for this or anything similar could've been Sara's actual storyline. Also, this line made me laugh for some reason: "She heard Maa gasp but ignored her"
bones123
bones123 @bones123 1 years ago Woh kya hi hota agar CVs soch lete? Loved it and Sara’s decision making. Digital pages pe hi sahi, progress is progress. Agree on point about Ram. In Two Weeks Notice, at the end Hugh Grant states he is poor. Then follows up with by poor I mean we will have to share the chopper with someone in the family. Ram ka same state hai. Multi billionaire se billionaire ka safar and then supposedly back to multi B.Aapko bhi fierce wala prem.
SONIA441
SONIA441 @SONIA441 1 years ago Absolutely Stunning ShibaniThanks for mentioning the line how Akki was mostly Priya's brother & the other 3 don't exist for himSara & Priya - the 2 elder Sood sisters who stood with each other - How I wanted Meera to bring them up in this manner so Sara doesn't end up involving a criminal in their lives just for the sake of a child....I love to see the strength portrayed by both of them here
Shruti_0505
Shruti_0505 @Shruti_0505 1 years ago This was absolutely amazing. Absolute gold. So refreshing to read something so different. Pl pl write a few more parts.
DreamOfEndless
Tiara @DreamOfEndless 1 years ago Beautiful OS, Shibz I loved how Priya supported Sara, and gave her the strength to become the independent woman that she was later. And I loved how Sara wished Priya to find love in a man who truly admired her, despite the fact she nursed a broken heart herself.Loved the RaYa moments too. ❤ A little part of me wanted to see Ram's reaction when Priya walked in with gelled baal wala in the party 🙈 Thank you for tagging tournesol2022-06-13 17:36:52
jrmahuli
Sunsetislove @jrmahuli 1 years ago Wow ... That's soo beautiful ❤️ it gives kind of calmness to mind reading this story. Ram n Priya are love ❤️ Also please keep writing more n more of such beautiful stories.
JustRandomGirl
Jo @JustRandomGirl 1 years ago Wow this is really a nice and different OSLoved it Love how you made Sara independent and a single mother, with a super supportive sisterI like Priya and Sara’s bonding in the show but only if Sara’s character was made stronger n smarter, it would have one of the best sisters bond!And Ram asking out Priya Keep it up Shibani love ur works
DazzlingLight
Whadda Paav @DazzlingLight 1 years ago Wow! This is too good..just how Sara should have been portrayed - strong and indépendant! ❤️. And Sara being a RaYa shipper! Thank you for writing this! 😊DazzlingLight2022-06-13 16:25:53
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