Chapter 4: Growing up That day, Maan kneeled down, looked at Geet with smile and spread his arms and Geet’s frown had turned to big smile and she had that very first time itself, run to Maan and hugged him tight. Now Geet’s homework, Geet dancing classes, art classes, her small class test, her going to park or going to her friend’s house, her friends coming and attending them – all became Maan’s responsibility. Many a times also feeding her if she would throw tantrums. But between all these he never missed his own study time. If he has to wake up early for that or stay late night, he would make sure, in school he was on top. Driver would drop Geet and Maan to her dancing or ...
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Isshubai @Isshubai
1 years ago
Only one thing....i love Maan's character here and would love to see more shades.....just loving how the story is evolving and without rushing ..every character is playing its own role..awsome update....
Annupreet @Annupreet
1 years ago
Situation make person mature than age and same happening with maan. He is same age of brij but have to do all geets work. Hands are not rich they are so poor from heart
Priya21 @priya_21
+ 8
2 years ago
Maan is same age as brij he also need same own time like brij meeraNice part
gbhat @gbhat
2 years ago
Nice update Maan was complete care taker of Geet. Mohinder & Rano treated Maan as their servant once when ranoasks Maan to help in the kitchen and rano pampered him he was so overwhelmed. But Brij and Meera treated him as a frd but Maan was always there for Geet. Maan was just happy that his studies r taken care But Maan bore everything. Waiting for another update soon
Aatiya @PaintedSky
+ 2
2 years ago
Hmm.., so much to suffer in such a young age. 2nd grader doesn't want to be called princess!!!
Kirtikaa @kirtikaa
+ 2
2 years ago
Good one so maan was complete care taker of geet...and that turned into a habit where he feel restless without his princess ordering him...geet turned more possesive towards maan..happy that brij and meera treat him good..so maan excels in cooking too...rano and maan bonding in kitchen was nice...it seems that geet is obsessed with maan waiting to read more ❤️
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
2 years ago
Except for Brij and Meera, Maan was treated more like a servant.
MA1970 @MA1970
+ 4
2 years ago
It was a intriguing chapter. Brij is treating Maan as a friend and Geet literally irritating Maan want him to come at his beck and call. Maan kept his father words in mind and was thankful that he got a good education institution where he could learn and participate in many activities and sports. Rano was the limit asking him to help in the Kitchen.
Sudha @babelicious
+ 7
2 years ago
I’m so emotional yet relieved a little right now. Assumed Maan had all sad scenes in past coz of his situation, but so relieved to know he was no saint, had a good childhood with playing, being popular in school, etc etc; even with being Geet’s full time care taker. Again, Geet is a child and I don’t think I would be angry on her for how she treated Maan. She grew up that way, and its kind of cute to see her demanding things like some princess & Maan also missing her attention when she doesn’t demand for him. Rano shows a small motherly side to Maan for a change, poor child got so happy with that. So so loving it this story I tnk slightly more than the others… pls keep the updates coming.. cannot wait for the next part
Taahir @taahir004
+ 10
2 years ago
A Yearning and Intriguing Chapter Maan having a family now , so everything from far just looks amazing but the fact that Maan was treated like a servant is rather sad , yet he had no issues Geet getting possessive about Maan is simply great I like Brij treating Maan as a friend Rano also gets Maan to come into the kitchen to help her