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Shristi

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hope you r doing fine Kelly... Missed u n ur updates! I know I wasn't regular with my feedbacks bt the past few weeks hv been a bit hectic ... I m yet to reply to a lot of comments on my OS Feelings...

Mehrya are blessed with a cute little daughter n I can already see Shaurya wrapped around the little one's finger... Honestly, I too want to see Mehrya having a baby girl in the show n I wanna see Shaurya's moments with his daughter... Tht will surely b a captivating n unbelievable sight for me!

Coming to Mehak, she has started remembering few parts of her past but knowing you as a writer, I m sure you ll take this very slow while explaining us every detail minutely but beautifully.

The part tht stood out for me was when Mehak believes tht Shaurya is showering his love for someone else's daughter when the truth is tht she belongs to him... Shaurya's Angel!!!

Thank you for the pm dear!!!

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Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#222

This was a beautiful chapter Kelly... Mehrya has a beautiful daughter and mahek is still not aware that he is only the father of the child...but she calls herself Meera right?? Than he is suggesting the same name ans and than calling her as mahek 😲 ...lol he has confessed that he isn't chef in labour room 😆

Waiting for the other chapter and hope you update DTM also ..

Thank you for PM 🤗

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Mishtilove

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Posted: 7 years ago

#223

wow...its a baby girl.

it ws a beautiful chapter di

hopefully mehak got her memory soon

thank for the pm

update soon

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Anuteja10

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Posted: 7 years ago

#224

Hi Kelly hru pls update next chapter soon😃 I read all chapters one go and now I am regular here 😃

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: AD04
M commenting for very first time on Ur story.
It's such a wonderful story with MK memory loss.
Beautifully written all the chapters 👏
All the best for rest of the story 😳

Welcome aboard, new readers ( and commenters😉) are most welcome. I am happy that you are enjoying and will continue to do so. A new chapter is coming up in a bit😛

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Diva200
Thank you for the pm
lovely update
Sk is v caring and she wants him to be there with her
So it is a girl
Sk names her Meera and MK knows it is her mothers name..
so is her memory back?
pls continue soon

Thank you Diva...yes its a girl...just because I am a sucker for big strong men becoming slaves to their little princesses😆. I would so love to see SK the father of a daughter, but for now I guess I will have to rely on ffs to enjoy this.

There are chinks in the armor that is keeping Mehek from her memories, but no not a compete return of her memories I'm afraid.

I hope you enjoy the story I have in mind.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: shristi0706
Hope you r doing fine Kelly... Missed u n ur updates! I know I wasn't regular with my feedbacks bt the past few weeks hv been a bit hectic ... I m yet to reply to a lot of comments on my OS Feelings...
Mehrya are blessed with a cute little daughter n I can already see Shaurya wrapped around the little one's finger... Honestly, I too want to see Mehrya having a baby girl in the show n I wanna see Shaurya's moments with his daughter... Tht will surely b a captivating n unbelievable sight for me!
Coming to Mehak, she has started remembering few parts of her past but knowing you as a writer, I m sure you ll take this very slow while explaining us every detail minutely but beautifully.
The part tht stood out for me was when Mehak believes tht Shaurya is showering his love for someone else's daughter when the truth is tht she belongs to him... Shaurya's Angel!!!
Thank you for the pm dear!!!

I am feel so much better Shristi. The flu went through the family, and I would not wish the feeling on anyone.🤢 No apologies necessary Shristi, I know how things are, however it is good to hear from you. Yes it's a daughter that SK has got now: one sure to turn him into complete mush like only a little girl can😊.

Mehek is making progress, very tiny steps, but at this point when she clearly in love with him, it may be better for SK just to propose to her all over again...it's any option anyway😆

Thanks for the FB. I have a new chapter ready to post and will be doing so after I finish all my replies.

I hope you enjoy it,

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Shamz15
This was a beautiful chapter Kelly... Mehrya has a beautiful daughter and mahek is still not aware that he is only the father of the child...but she calls herself Meera right?? Than he is suggesting the same name ans and than calling her as mahek 😲 ...lol he has confessed that he isn't chef in labour room 😆
Waiting for the other chapter and hope you update DTM also ..

Thank you for PM 🤗

Thank you Shamz...it is getting a little muddled isn't it? I think SK automatically reached for the name that would be perfect in an ideal situation. One can imagine how surprised he was with her response.😲 On the other hand he has let the cat out of the bag...memory loss or not, Mehek had easily discerned that no mere chef could orchestrate thing as he has.

With full intentions of going back to DTM, this next chapter just came together in my head, and so I went with it instead.

Will be getting back to the other story for sure now LOL.

Thanks for the FB...will be posting in a minute

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Mishtilove
wow...its a baby girl.
it ws a beautiful chapter di
hopefully mehak got her memory soon
thank for the pm
update soon

Thank you Mishti...that was my very first go at writing a childbirth scene, and I am so happy that everyone has liked it. So yes MehRya are the parents of a precious little girl, and memory or not SK is determined to reunite his family.

New chapter coming up...I hope you enjoy it.