Kaisa yeh ishq hai ajab sa risk hai chapter 9 ,,page 26. ,August 24 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Wow Jaya..
Nice update dear.. 😊
Shaurya's feelings..beautifully penned..
Waiting for next update..continue soon.. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is the next part
Part -2:
Shaurya:jis dinn thum mujhe chod kar gayee uss dinn mujhe bas yahi laga Tum mujhe chod kar kaise jaa Sakti ho?Thumhara Dard aur tadap mujhe diknahi raha tha.Mein divorce papers lekar aaya kyun ki mujhe laga Tum sign nahi karoge.Jab tumne sign kar diya mein tumhein daatna chahtha tha aur poochna chahtha tha ki tum aisa kaise kar Sakti ho?Tabhi Tum Kisi kameene ke pas job Karne gayee aur woh tamasha hua .Upar se tumne mujhe daatna lagi.Mein gusse se Kuch bhi anab shanab BAK liya.
Tumhein itna bada speech sunne se bore feel kar rahi hogi par Sunna hoga thaki hamare beech Kuch bhi aadhura na rahe.
Tabhi woh kabutar aaya aur mera irritation aur badaya.Jis ladki ka dil thodha meine khud use dil de baita mein.Jis ladki ko hurt kartha raha baar baar uss ladki ka phikar karthe karthe mera sabse favourite restaurant aur car ko choddiya peeche.Mein tumhein samjana chaha shaadi math kar bolna chaha par kyun patha nahi.
Finally woh dinn aaya Jo bhayanak tha mereliye. Jo shaurya Khanna Kisi ke aage juktha nahi woh bheek manga tha aapni Mehek ko bachanekeliye bhagvan se aur sadak par chalthi gaadi walon se haath jodkar lift manga tha par mera Kisi ek ne nahi suna.Aisa laga ki meri saansen rukgayee aur meri jaan jaaraha tha.mujhe Kuch nahi dikraha tha .Us wakth mujhe laga duniya mein mujhe Kuch chahiye tho woh Tum ho Mehek aur Kuch nahi .Us dinn se mein tumhein paane keliye Zameen aasman ek kardiya meine.Har tareeka apnaya .Galath Yaa Sahi Kuch bhi bas tumhein paana hai.Ek dinn mein thumhare liye badalna chaha par thumhari Chachi phirse uss kabutar ko leayee.Mujhe darr tha koi thumhein mujhse cheenlega tho?
Tum par ek karoch bhi mein bardash nahi kar saktha.Sach kahun tho aaj bhi mujhe tumse shaadi nahi karni hai kyun ki mein Tum se pyaar kartha hun aur Tum mujhse bas yahi kaafi hai mereliye.par mein jaantha hun thumhein shaadi karni hai .Issi liye yeh sab Kuch Jo kar raha hun mein.Tumse shaadi jaroor karunga thaaki koi thumhein mujhse cheen na saken.Tumhari khushi keliye Kuch bhi karunga.Iss duniya mein Kisi ki phikar kartha hun tho woh maa aur Tum ho bas.
Then he placed her hand over his heart and said"yeh dil jab tak dhadak tha hai Sirf aur Sirf thumhare liye."
Tum meri Zindagi ki Mehek ho

Tell me guys how is my bhai's pov? Please comment keejiye.Your comments are necessary to know whether it's nice or not.Your suggestions are necessary so that I can rectify my mistakes.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sudha_

Wow Jaya..
Nice update dear.. 😊
Shaurya's feelings..beautifully penned..
Waiting for next update..continue soon.. ❤️

Thanks di.I have updated just now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Jay!! Wowww👏👏
The way u have described the feelings...was just beyond anything..it was really deep from the heart..ek insaan pyaar k liye kitna tarap sakta hain!!!

Awesome
Meri jaan🤗
Loved it...
Continue real soon..muahh
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell


Thanks meri jaan.mein bahut dinonse likhna chahthi thi mehrya ki pov par wakth nahi Mila aur mouka bhi
Dhaansoo means🤔

Ab mil gaya na maukaa..isska sahi upyog karna..
Dhaansoo means fabulous..😛😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is sooo sooo beautiful,you penned down all the unsaid feelings of shaurya 😊next update do
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Jay!! Wowww👏👏

The way u have described the feelings...was just beyond anything..it was really deep from the heart..ek insaan pyaar k liye kitna tarap sakta hain!!!

Awesome
Meri jaan🤗
Loved it...
Continue real soon..muahh

Thanks arpu dear .
First i will analyse every person's character if it's real or reel then I will behave according to them so that I can avoid clashes.
I will update soon .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

Ab mil gaya na maukaa..isska sahi upyog karna..
Dhaansoo means fabulous..😛😛


Thanks for saying dhaansoo meaning.
Edited by Heaven2hell - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: rumeyha

This is sooo sooo beautiful,you penned down all the unsaid feelings of shaurya 😊next update do

Thanks di.i will update soon.U can suggest me whatever u like .I won't feel bad.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
I not that much good at hind but I can understand very well wow really super speaking his heart out superb

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