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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part F

Kanta was looking at MehRya through the window she smiled to herself "Good Mehek will convince him" she thought
Kaurna ma and JC were discussing that this time apart will do the kids some good Shaurya can focus on his business and Mehek can focus on hers. Kaurna said that it will give Shaurya's body time to heal and they began to discuss the drama of the tattoo.
While both were discussing they did not notice KC happily texting away on her mobile. She wrote the description of their clothing and to confirm the route they would take to return home.
Mehek came into the room Kaurna asked: "Mehek betie is everything okay?"
"Yes Ma I tried to make him understand but you know Shaurie" and she smiles "Chachi if you are ready to leave we will go namaste ma"
They walked to the gate and the roadway Shaurya looked sadly at his Mehek at the last minute she turned back and smiled at him and he sent her a flying kiss she blushed but accepted it.
Kaurna ma "Shaurie are you okay son?"
"No ma I have a bad feeling about this something is not right how did KC accept our relationship so quickly; ma she made a restraining order against me and had her goon relative beat me up, she had Mehek hostage in their house. Ma I am telling you this is to good to be true"
"Shaurie you think too much maybe last night she had a good thinking session and realized that it would be best if you and Mehek marry each other before one or both of you end up dead"
"Ma chachi thinks my love is fake and I am just doing drama"
"Can you blame her you did lie to them and abscond from the wedding for a recipe book yet Mehek still love you"
"Ma I was a fool back then I have grown since that time and I am trying to make up for all the hurt and humiliation I caused. Ma I love Mehek I have always loved her but was to pig headed to accept it. I Knew I was attracted to her and protective of her but it took her almost being molested and dying in my arms for me to realize the depth of my love she is my life ma, my true life partner, my soul mate I can't loose her. Yes I don't trust KC she will try her best to prove that I don't love Mehek"
"Shaurya do you trust and love Mehek"
"Yes ma"
"Then trust your love have faith in it"
"I do But Mehek loves her family they mean the world to her her happiness lie in their happiness"
"Then give them the one month time period let her realize how much you mean to her that you will have to come first in her life and not her family. That when you have kids your family will take priority in her life let the girl breath give her some space I trust Mehek she loves you and she will choose you over her family just let her do it for herself without any pressure from you"
"Ma you should give KC this lecture let her give Mehek some space to make her own mind"
While outside The Sharmas entered the auto for home KC once again tex the info to her XYZ bhayia who had a car waiting outside Shaurie's house and followed the auto communications were made between the two cars
Almost home the attack occurred they were blocked by the two cars and they grabbed KC JC got a few slaps and was thrown to the ground even the auto driver got slapped.Kc was dragged into a car and they speed off leaving a confused fightened Mehek crying for er KC
Edited by Sharlene1410 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part G

Kanta Chachi Chachi !! shouted Mehek onlookers came and asked what is wrong. JC tried call KC on her phone Mehek held JC and got into the auto they called the family and the police who met them at the house.
Sonal called Shaurie who arrived with his ma.
The police did their questioning and Pammi and Ajay was mentioned> Both Mehek and JC give their description of the gang and vehicles. While Sharya and his ma listened Mehek ran into the kitchen and cried Shaurie followed and give her much-needed comfort promising to find KC and supporting her during this trying time reassuring her of his love and commitment to her. He took her into is arms for a close hug and wiped her tears away kissing her cheeks.
Mehek felt so safe in his loving arms that she cried her stress away enjoying the feel of his hands on her back when she pulled away he started to caress her head and cheeks; speaking words of love and reassurance to her. Unknown to them both Sonal and Nehal were observing them Sonal had her doubts about this kidnapping who would want to kidnap KC they were not rich and had no enemies only Shaurya and she won't call him that all he wants is to marry Mehek.
Sonal thought it strange that chachi agreed for their marriage so quickly but she could not share her concern with anyone.
Meanwhile KC with her XYZ bhayia and his goons "Didi wait another hour then leave remember you have to look weak like you fought for your life so here arrange your hair, your clothes give it a tear and here rub this it will look like mud and blood stain o your clothes her tie this rope tight on your wrist let it leave deep marks can you bear the pain for some time "
"Yes bhayia anything just to make Mehek separate from that rich brat"
"Didi I have some boys in the inside when he get in jail they will give him a beating that should make him forget Mehek I have already sent the command"
"Good bhayia that should teach him to leave decent Middle Class girl alone, I don't understand why he is after Mehek there are so many beautiful modern girls in is class why is he after a frumpy traditional girl like her she will never fit in his lifestyle and she will be used and sent back to my home who will marry her then my MOHIT will be stuck with her all his life the divorce elder sister.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Amazing updates, loved it.
Continue soon please.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Lady Don Chachi 😡
I like the MehRya scene

please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I read all parts one go
Liked it u r version of ZKM
It's funny same time emotional
MehRya scenes were nicely written
Don Chachi is getting on my nerves 😡

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hugging that half naked man in public 🤣 Omg Sharlz you are too funny!!! Chachi is just jealous 😆 then I read on and saw what you wrote 🤣 I am laughing hysterically 🤣 Chachi is bad mouthing Handsome but saying how sexy he is I love it. Wow Sharlz you're writing Chachi as the evil woman she's becoming. This Chachi 🤬 planning to even kill my Handsome 😡 after reading Part A I can't wait to read the others 🤗
Edited by melissaR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I read the rest in one go after Part A so I'm writing my thoughts as I read along.


Holy crap. Chachi sounds so evil! 😲 Want mahek to cry more, to beg you to take her and forget Handsome? 🤬 Kamini! Please why Dadaji don't hush. If he was younger he would trashed Handsome huff* And grrr he gets me so mad with his thinking.Rubbish he's talking about Handsome's intentions. Mahek was already in his house you fool. PD! I'm surprise you brushed aside your suspicions so easily. I love how Sonal suspects Chachi and its how she said she expects a lot of touchy (laugh emoji)
Oh Sonal Mehrya doesn't need a reason to get touchy with each other 🤣


This Chachi spying on them and her inner thoughts,...it sounds more like she's jealous of how her love life turned out and envies Mahek. Seriously omg its coming across like that to me. Where is the so called love of a mother? I see nothing like that. Sharlz this is
turning out to be exciting like a LMN movie 😲 I couldn't help but think when reading Chachi giving her condition that she's simply jealous of how much time Mehrya spends with each other.
You know how some of us suspect Chachi is secretly crushing on Handsome and wants him Sharlz...I'm sorry but I couldn't help myself from thinking that way 🤣


Part E...very emotional! Both Handsome and Mahek dialogues were 👏 simply brilliant. 😆 even I blushed when Handsome sent that flying kiss. Like an idiot too 🤣 Handsome is right. Maa should have really given that advice to Chachi too. I'm happy Chachu got some slaps for being such a coward. Can't even stand up to his wife and tell her she's wrong. Awww Mehrya moments in the kitchen Handsome is so 🤗 I'd do anything to be in his arms right now like that ☺️ But Sonal and Nehal maco-ing on them 🤣 Hmm... I wonder if Sonal will go to Handsome with her suspicions of Chachi? But grr this Chachi and her plotting. I don't know why the goon couldn't give her a deep cut or even give her a couple good slaps too 😡 Want to hurt my Handsome 😭


Sharlz you had me laughing like this throughout all the parts. My fav part in all of this is Chachi saying how sexy Handsome is 🤣 You're so funny! I can read this over and over just for the laugh. When next Chachi angers me I'm gonna do that. You are brilliant!! Continue continue. Your updates feel like the show instead sometimes I have to remind myself that. It feel so real! 👏

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